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Postby mtvjunkie » Thu Sep 09, 2004 1:25 pm

:lonely: thank god for paige :wub: THE ONLY ONE to respond to this fanfic on the *NSYNC board. hmm... she will be loved... so i decided i'd save it especially for you guys :nod:



Shes sat there sipping at her coffee and reading some novel. And the seat opposite is empty. We're at a Starbucks in San Fransico, and I don't know why shes here but I've been walking around for weeks trying to find inspiration, but had no luck. I'm not the smartest guy in the world, nor the prettiest, but I figure I may have a chance in hell and place my self opposite her. I can see shes vainly trying to concentrate on her novel but not having too much luck.

She looked out the window
Rolling tiny balls of napkin paper


Our eyes meet and the fool that I am, rather than start a conversation, I look down and fiddle with whatever lies nearby.

I played a quick game of chess with the
salt and pepper shaker


I look up but find shes looking at her book. Shes beautiful. Her hair is chestnut brown, just below shoulder length, and slightly wavy. Her eyes are blue but have a wave of brown, they look like tie-dye eyes. Her lips are... kissable, I want to kiss them, I wanna do a lot of other things to her too...

Then she looks up and sees me staring at her. For a moment she looks like shes gonna wipe the saliva build-up I've got at the corner of my mouth but instead she looks down nervously. But not before she smiles at me. Her smile is a shy one, like she doesn't know what to say or do. Of course she doesn't, her type of guy is the athletic type majoring in two subjects, two really academic subjects. Shes way out of my league.

She looks up again while I'm still staring at her. This time its a smile I can read. I think she likes me... before I can ponder on this miracle too much i let out a dorky laugh. So I cough. Then I manage to speak.

'What book you reading?'

'1984 by George Orwell'

'Damn, one year out' Umm... smooth.

'Okay...'

'Sorry, that was pathetic'

'You ever read it?' Thank you god, a second chance.

'Yeah, have you reached the part where Winston tells the Ministry to torture Julia instead?'

'He does?'

'Oops'

Mama said "think before speaking"
No filter in my head
Oh, what's a boy to do
I guess he better find one


'I think I'll shut up now...'

She laughs a genuine laugh and goes back to reading. Oh well, at least she smiled at me.

Oh, if only my life was more like 1983
All these things would be
more like they were at the start of me

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Thu Sep 09, 2004 2:12 pm

:notworthy: :notworthy: Ahh, I had to read this again b/c I love it sooo much. Nobody ever does Mayer fan fiction, and that's a damn shame. :nod: Keep up with this story and screw the *NSYNC board ( <_< ) for not stepping outside the box and checking out your work.

I WANT MORE! SEX! MORE! :pray:

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Postby mtvjunkie » Thu Sep 09, 2004 3:14 pm

Two days since I saw her and I'm still thinking about her. Seriously, she was so beautiful I can still picture every freckle on her face. Her accent was delicious, some honeyed European voice which I just wanted to swim in.

I refuse to believe
That my life's gonna be
Just some string of incompletes
Never to lead me to anything remotely close to home life


But its not like I'm ever gonna see her again, she was a once on a lifetime opportunity I foolishly let go. But why cant I get her off my mind? Was she really that special? I guess so. I'm still gonna go to the cafe again today, just in case.

When I arrive I see shes there, sat in the same place, looking nervous as I sit opposite.

'Where were you yesterday?' she enquires. She missed me too it seems.

It's fine with me
We said eternity
And I will go to my grave
With the life that I gave



no ones commented on my use of capital letters and apostrophies :(

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Thu Sep 09, 2004 4:47 pm

Oh Helena, don't lose your British mode of writing. I'm so used to it now that it doesn't even phase me when you don't use American grammatical structures! :lol:

Once again, I adore this story. :wub: :wub: I'm intrigued to know what this young lass' name is. You haven't revealed that detail yet. And John is as goofy and bumbling and as pefect as ever. :kiss:

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Postby megzrsa » Sun Sep 12, 2004 11:55 am

:blowkiss: Love ya Helena, great to see a Mayer fic on this board :nod: Cute how she missed him :lol:
Funny seeing you write all correctly, update soon!

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Sun Sep 12, 2004 1:03 pm

Awww Helena i love this fic...i told you i'd check it out one day and i'm catching up on my fics this weekend :yay:

I love thos story many....i wanna know what this girls name is...she reminds me of myself a lot :lol: And John :wub: so cute! MORE PLEASE!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sun Sep 12, 2004 1:05 pm

The fact that Heather just used the :wub: emoticon with reference to John makes my life complete. Yay! ^_^

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Sun Sep 12, 2004 1:43 pm

Awww :yay: I made Paiges life complete :wub: I remember when they interviewed him on the radio here...that was like the funiest interview i've ever heard in my life he was like yeah my parents are gynocologists so i had an interesting upbringing....i knew about the birds and bees since i was like 3....i think he said both of them were...i can't remember anymore i just know i was laughin hysterically the way he said it

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sun Sep 12, 2004 1:57 pm

:rofl: His interviews are hilarious b/c he lies and makes up all of this stupid sh** that doesn't make sense. I don't know about his dad, but I know his mom is an English teacher. Not sure if she still does this, but gynecologists ... :rofl:. That's priceless.

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Sun Sep 12, 2004 2:07 pm

thats it his mom was the English teacher....so he said when he was young he always had proper grammar and new all about the birds and the bees...i wonder if they uploaded that interview to the web cause it was hilarious!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sun Sep 12, 2004 2:13 pm

That definitely sounds like a crazy interview. All of us whores would get along with him b/c supposedly he has a really dirty mind and mouth, so there ya go. All of us would be instant friends. :yay:

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Postby mtvjunkie » Sun Sep 12, 2004 4:28 pm

so i guess youd be wanting an update right now then? :P

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sun Sep 12, 2004 4:46 pm

:nod: Yup or else we're gonna highjack this thread and do all kinds of nasty stuff with it. :whip:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sun Sep 12, 2004 5:58 pm

:angry: Where's my damn update? I wanna know, I wanna know, I wanna know.

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Sun Sep 12, 2004 9:19 pm

Helena :yell: Now you have me actually reading a Mayer fanfic so you best be updating this :nod:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Sep 13, 2004 8:06 am

B****, I want my update! <_< :angry:

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Postby mtvjunkie » Mon Sep 13, 2004 12:44 pm

:o someone has pms :rofl:


its coming :nod:
















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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Sep 13, 2004 2:24 pm

Girl, no pms here, I just want my update. I'm glad you're gonna give me what I want, though. ;) :lick:

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Postby mtvjunkie » Mon Sep 13, 2004 2:24 pm

:thumbup:

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Postby mtvjunkie » Mon Sep 13, 2004 2:33 pm

I stutter (what else?) 'I didn't think you'd remember me'

'I have to ask you something'

'Go ahead'

'Why did you look at me that way?'

'What way? When?'

Check your pulse it's proof
that you're not listening to
The call your life's been issuing you
The rhythm of a line of idle days


'Back when you and I first met, right here'

'Oh I always look that way'

'Oh'

'What?'

'I just thought I was special' She blushes 'God that was stupid'

'You are special, but you confuse me; how did I look at you?'

'Like I was a puzzle you'd been trying to figure out for months, and when I smiled at you it was as if you solved me. Oh listen to me, that sounds so stupid.'

'It doesn't sound stupid to me,'

So go unlock the door
And find what you are here for
Leave the great indoors
Please leave the great indoors


'so tell me, how am I looking at you now?'

She stares at the table 'I don't know, I can't stop staring into your eyes'

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Mon Sep 13, 2004 2:39 pm

Mayer does have nice eyes so i could see how she would have problem with staring at them...i have that problem :lol: good eyes are the way to my heart :nod: I like the analysis of the look though :nod: MORE PLEASE!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Sep 13, 2004 2:40 pm

Oooooh, this is dreamy. :wub: Keep up with the staring ... I like that. :lol:

And on a majorly random note, I officially suck at puzzles. :nod:

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Postby mtvjunkie » Mon Sep 13, 2004 2:40 pm

:thumbup: again why? i thought you were a player? :shrug:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Sep 13, 2004 2:41 pm

ROFL @ Heather's "I like the analysis of the look." Very scientific I must say. :rofl:

Mayer does the whole Justin intense stare thing. It's weird and always slightly creepy. :P

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Sep 13, 2004 2:48 pm

I'm not a player, I just f*** a lot :whistle:

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Postby mtvjunkie » Mon Sep 13, 2004 2:50 pm

:no:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Sep 13, 2004 2:52 pm

God help the world if I ever find a man. There is gonna be an increase in disgusting behavior in this world. :yay: :rofl:

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Postby mtvjunkie » Mon Sep 13, 2004 3:01 pm

:no:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Sep 13, 2004 3:15 pm

UPDATE THE STORY! :yell: I know that you've got more literary goodness stirring in your head today. :nod:

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Postby mtvjunkie » Mon Sep 13, 2004 3:53 pm

:mellow: bizzarely i do :mellow:

and perhaps i should tell you this is quite a short story :nod: :ph34r:




Suppose I said
I am on my best behavior
And there are times
I lose my worried mind?


We sit in silence for a short while when I find her hand twitching.

'Are you alright?'

'Yeah, fine. Why?'

Suppose I said
You're my saving grace?


'Your hand seemed to be twitching'

'Oh I... uh...'

'What?'

'I was just wondering whether I could hold your hand'

I smile and bring my paw-like hand closer to her. Her fingers first curl a little as they try to build up courage to connect to mine. I study her hands, their caramel skin and clear gloss nails, I can see they've been picked at; her fingernails are not manicured, infact I think she picks at them by habit.

Would you want me when I'm not myself?
Wait it out while I am someone else?


Two days ago she seemed unreachable, like an angel God adored more than anything else. But as I look at her I see little things that show me shes human. One of her stud earrings is upside down, the roots of her hair are showing through the colouring and the static in the room is making small whisps stand up to attention. Lip balm has spilled off her lips onto her skin, not obvious to the rest of the world, but for a man who wants this woman to be his muse, who wants this woman to be his own, he notices it all. And do you think I care? She with her imperfections is perfect, she still has a captivating way about her, she still creates these butterflies; butterflies of such a delicate nature I hope they never stop fluttering around, and she still has those beautiful tie-dye eyes.

Suppose I said
Colors change for no good reason
And words will go
From poetry to prose


Shes still the most beautiful thing in the world. And as her fingers inch towards mine, encouraged by my smile -my smile- I know she sees my inperfections too and doesn't care.

'Whats your name?' I ask,

I tell everyone
I smile just because
I've got a city love
I found it in Lydia
And I can't remember
life before her name
.




The end.

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Mon Sep 13, 2004 4:10 pm

awww Helena you ended it already :cry: NOOOOO!!!!!! Tye dye eyes :wub: awww that was such a cute story man...i can't believe its over already :cry: I loved it as usual!

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Postby mtvjunkie » Mon Sep 13, 2004 4:11 pm

i think the person i wrote this for knows who she is too :nod: yeah girl, i wrote it for you :kiss:



:wub: did you like it?

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Sep 13, 2004 4:44 pm

She keeps a toothbrush at my place
As if I had the extra space


*Le Sigh* That was such a good one, Helena. :clap: Lydia is such a foxy b****, I'd do her myself. ;) I can see why John loves her. :lol:

:whisper: P.S. I don't pick at my fingernails and my gloss doesn't run either ... that's what lipliner is for. :rofl: :rofl:

That was great and you need to work on a long John Mayer fic one day cuz you know I have a soft spot for the long ones. :kiss:

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Postby megzrsa » Wed Sep 15, 2004 8:33 am

:wub: that was cute!!! Very good Helena :blowkiss: sad its so short though :( I look forward to more Mayer fics in the future from you :nod:

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Postby mtvjunkie » Mon Dec 20, 2004 5:18 pm

:yay: random bumping! :yay:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Dec 20, 2004 6:43 pm

Yay for random bumping! :yay: I'm re-reading this story. Makes me smile ... A LOT! :wub:

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Postby justins bubbles » Thu Jan 06, 2005 11:35 pm

<span style='color:blue'>Hey chicas. Helena, I am SO ashamed I let this one slip by. :no: It was very g... It was great. I loved how you wrote it, very simple. You didn't coat it with sugar, but yet it was still sweet. I also loved the mystery at the end. I tend to like those a lot, where you can paint your own ending, imagine your own life for them. :thumbup: I also liked when you said her eyes were "blue with a wave of brown." :notworthy: Little phrases like that really get to me. :lol:

But Paige! I was sad when I saw this <_< following "the *NSYNC board." :( I'm going to suppose this was in the time of the tiff, but I don't need an explination. Just made me a tad sad.

Also, K2 took a stab at writing fanfic a while back and Mayer was her muse. It was very good. I have it if anyone wants to read it. Way good.

But also Helena, I didn't even know that there was a different grammatical technique over there! And my mom's an English teacher! :lol: Learn something new everyday. </span>

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Fri Jan 07, 2005 8:36 am

<_< Rahahahahaha, yeah, that wasn't a very nice face to put. Sorry 'bout that ladies. :kiss:

No more sadness! Let's all grab ourselves a can of whipped cream, our favorite guys, and get down to having our friendly orgy. :whip: :lick: :lol:

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Postby mtvjunkie » Wed Jan 19, 2005 4:38 pm

Oh, an orgy is your response everything Paige. Past troubles? Have an orgy. Bill not been paid? Have an orgy. :no: ;)

And thanks for the extra feedback, I apprecite you taking the time out to read it, it's always great to know what others think about your work :nod:



Oh yeah Piage, on the subject of fanfics, you've missed my new one you silly billy :nono: :P


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