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Postby shortie17 » Fri Sep 19, 2003 8:54 pm

Prologue
Have you ever had feelings for someone you shouldn't? I mean you have this friend who all the sudden you start feeling things you shouldn't? Is it wrong to be in love with your best friend?

Chapter one: Flashback part 1 The start of the friendship
"mom you won't believe what happened at school today?" I say excitedly
"whose the girl Justin?" My mom says smiling
"her name is Kerri and she is so gorgeous."
"really?"
"yep shes new and sits next to me in english."
"do you know where she lives?"
"a couple of houses down from here."
I finish telling my mom about Kerri then I quickly finish my homework so I can go play basketball with Trace.
"hurry up Justin!" Trace yells for me. I run down the stairs
"mom I'm going to play basketball!" I yell before running out the door. As we go to the basketball court I see Kerri along with Marissa sitting on the bench.
"hello Kerri, Marissa." I say acknowldging them
"hello Justin, Trace" Marissa said smiling
"so what are ya'll doing?" Trace asks
" sitting on the bench" Kerri says laughing
"thank-you captian obvisious." Trace says laughing. We play are game of basketball before Kerri, Marissa, Trace, and I walk home.
"so how do you like it in Memphis?"
"its alright I guess, I mean I don't really know anyone."
"that will change." I say trying to comfort her

so theres like four parts to chapter one so tell me what you think :D

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Postby tendertoes » Fri Sep 19, 2003 10:12 pm

<span style='color:purple'>Great beginning...I can't wait to see where the story goes!!
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Postby zozon3 » Fri Sep 19, 2003 11:25 pm

good beginning
def keep writing!

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Postby megzrsa » Sat Sep 20, 2003 4:17 am

gud start! :D keep it coming :P

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Sat Sep 20, 2003 3:40 pm

good very good!! keep it comming please!!!!!! :please:

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Postby shortie17 » Sat Sep 20, 2003 4:01 pm

thanks a bunch heres Chapter one pt 2

Justin got a record deal, so he hasn't been around. Its been me and Trace because Marissa moved. Tonight is prom, Trace is going with some girl named Kelly, I decided not to go.
"Kerri where are you?" I hear Lynn ask
"I'm in my room" I hear Lynn along with Trace come up stairs to my room
"K you have to go to prom."
"Trace I'm not going" I say sternly
"sweety you don't want to miss your prom." Lynn says sincerly
"yeah I do."
"come on K please for me." Trace says giving me a puppy dog face
"fine fine I'll go"
That Nigt
I knew there was a reason why I didn't want to go to prom its so boring and uh I hate it. Thats it I'm leaving I get up from the table when I see Justin walk in.
"Justin!" I yell
"K there you are" he says smiling
"What are you doing here?"
"I didn't want to miss prom, plus Trace told me you didn't have a date."
"aww you didn't have to."
"yes I did, you wanna dance?"
"yeah" We dance to the last song before leaving back to my house
"Wheres Trace?
"like you don't know J." I say with a cocked eyebrow. He starts lauging "Oh my god, he isn't"
"were talking about Trace K."
"thats so true." Were silent the rest of the ride home. Justin walks me to the door
"wheres your grandma?"
"they went to Flordia to visit my aunt."
"why didn't you go?"
"school, and they didn't want me to miss prom."
" thats nice of them."
I'll finish the rest later

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Sat Sep 20, 2003 6:07 pm

awww thats sweet of J!!! he came to the prom just cuz she didn't have a date... too cute :wub: and Trace man, what else should we expect from him! :lol: more More MORE!

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Chapter 1 pt. 3
I go up to my room to change
"hey K do I still have clothes here?"
"yeah J look in the closet." After changing we sit on the couch to talk and catch up on some things.
"so you've been staying here alone?"
"yeah, its not that bad."
"not that bad, are you kidding your afraid of the dark and storms."
"well I've managed sorda." As we continue talking we here a loud crash of thunder, then you see the lightening in the window and the power goes out.
"J where are you?" I ask frantically
"next to you K, here grab my hand." I grab his hand and we walk into the kitchen. He lights some candles before going up to my room.
"J I'm scared."
"shh I know its gonna be alright." He says in a soothing voice bringing my body closer to his.
"Justin" I whisper
"yes baby."
"I'm kinda tired, will you stay here with me?"
"yeah" We lay down on the bed and fall asleep. I was only asleep for 30mins when i noticed Justin wasn't next ot me.
"JUSTIN!" I yell sitting up. "Justin where are you?" Ibring my knees to my chest wrapping my arms around them and begin to cry. Then I hear someone come upstairs.
"Justin" I say hoarsley
"Yeah K whats wron?" He asks sitting next to me
"I thought you left me." I admit looking down so he doesn't see me cry
"I'm sorry I was talking to Trace. Hey" he says lifiting my chin with his fingers
"dont cry I'm sorry." We look at eachother our lips inching together. Finally our lips meet as he slips his tongue into my mouth. When I was out of breath I broke the kiss, and he starts to kiss my jawline, to my neck as his hand goes to the hem of my shirt. He pulls my shirt off and I follow taking off his. As he takes my bra off he kisses down my chest while massaging my breast. A little moan escapes my mouth, as he hands move to my sweat pants pulling them off. his lips attach back to mine, as he removes my panties. he breaks the kiss as he removes the rest of his clothing.
"are you sure baby?" He asks me
"yes, do you have a condom?"
He slips the condom on then enters me slowly
"oww"
"do you want me to stop." I nod my head no as he moves in and out of me slowly soon we both climax and he pulls out of me. he pulls my back to his chest as we fall asleep.
Part 4
When I wake up I see that she's still asleep. A smile appears on my face as I realize how beautiful she is asleep and I realize that I lost my virginity to the girl of my dreams. I see her eyes flutter open and a smile on her face
"hey sleep good?" I ask softly kissing her forehead
"the best sleep I've had in awhile, you?" She says nuzzling her head on my chest
"me to baby" We hold eachohter awhile, both trying to avoid the question of what we are
"J what does that make us?" I look into her green eyes
"What do yo want?"
"I..I just want to be freinds."
"alright" I'm a little disappointed, but I don't want to lose her as a friend
"um yeah, I need to take a shower." She gets up and takes a shower. I go brush my teeth, and start to leave home.
"alright K I'll come by later"
"okay" I go home to take a shower keeping the secret of Kerri and I to myself. I go han out with Trace befor having to go back with the guys. Before leaving I stop by Kerris
"alright I have to go."
"I know, but I don't want you to." She says crying
"dont cry baby. I dont want to go either come here." I wrap my arms around her in a hug trying to comfort her
"you better go."
"yeah" I go to kiss her forehead, when she pulls back. She puts her lips on mine to share a passionate kess.
"bye J. call me."
"bye I will."

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Sat Sep 20, 2003 7:14 pm

OMG! :jawdrop: That was great!!!! Aww J don't leave her! Or at least invite her to come with you or to come visit you!!! :nod: more please!!! :please:

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<span style='color:purple'> :cry: awww...damn men...they can never take a hint</span>

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Sun Sep 21, 2003 3:18 am

trace is a straight player!!!! get it trace get it get it work it work it!! and way to go k and j a lil midnight romp in the sack the perfect way to complete prom night!! :lol: more please!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Sep 22, 2003 9:06 pm

I like where this story is going ... romps on a stormy night are always a very good thing. After all, you gotta pass the time somehow.

I lost my electricity for three days b/c of hurricane Isabel, where was Justin when I needed him? That damn man is always disappearing on me!

Keep up with this story, it's good.

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Postby shortie17 » Mon Sep 22, 2003 9:46 pm

I'll post some more by Thurs. by the latest I've been swamped with homework, sorry :(

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Postby shortie17 » Mon Sep 22, 2003 9:46 pm

Thanks for the feedback I'll post some more by Thurs. by the latest I've been swamped with homework, sorry :(

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Tue Sep 23, 2003 10:34 am

aint no thang butta chikan wang!

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Postby megzrsa » Tue Sep 23, 2003 1:39 pm

^ :lol:
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Postby shortie17 » Thu Sep 25, 2003 1:08 pm

Sorry about the wait
Chapter 2 Not getting weird?
That was over two years ago and now things have changed. Its July 2001, J and I haven't been acting weird around eachother. Thats only because he's dating Britney and well I'm a good actor. I just don't want him to know that I still have feelings for him, because it'll just ruin things. He doesn't feel the same way and I can accept that. Finally I get off work I go home and immediately here the telepone ring
"Hello"
" hey K what's up?"
"not much Trace just got off of work, you?"
"nothing, so are you gonna come out to visit us?"
"I uh I can't I have to work."
"you can get a day off, plus I already called your boss she said it was cool."
"why did you do that?" I ask beginning to get heated
"because we've missed you, you only talk on the phone, and we've seen you once. K its been months you don't want to come and see us."
"of course I do, its just, nevermind."
"its just Justin?"
"no okay, have you booked me a flight?"
"yeah" He gives me my flight information before hanging up. I really do want to see everyone, but I'm just scared.
Chapter 3 A little visit
I can't wait to see K, I've missed her so much. She just brings me a peace of mind that no one else can give me. Shes always there when I need someone to talk to and thats what makes me love her.
"Curly were here."
"thanks big mike." I go in the airport and look around for her. As soon as we see eachother she runs over to me and jumps in my arms.
"Hey J i've missed you."
"I've missed you too." We gather her luggage and head back to mine and Brits house.
"so wheres Trace?"
"he's with his girl Kelly."
"like his girlfriend or just a f**k buddy."
" I really don't know." We get to the house and I show her around.
"Its beautiful J. I don't think I should stay here."
"why not of course you can."
"naw its cool J.C. said I can stay with him since he doesn't have anyone."
"fine" I say angry
"don't be upset I mean its just uncomfortable for me to be stayig here so, just nevermind." As soon as she finished talking Brit came in
"hey baby" She says walking over to me giving me a passionate kiss, not noticing that Kerri is here.
"I'll just be outside, waiting for J.C. to come and get me." I hear Kerri say right before walking out the door.
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Postby zozon3 » Thu Sep 25, 2003 1:27 pm

post more!!

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Thu Sep 25, 2003 1:30 pm

ewwwww this is during the time they were living together?! yucky poo poo!

but hopefully justin will realize how much he really cares about her beofre something happens at jcs!

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Postby tendertoes » Thu Sep 25, 2003 1:32 pm

<span style='color:purple'>Damn Britney...grrrr!
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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Thu Sep 25, 2003 1:36 pm

Yuck, it would be super uncomfortable for Kerri to be in that house watching J and Brit being all kissy and passionate when she still has feelings for him. Tough situation, but let's hope he realizes that he needs Kerri and not Miss Brit!

Good chaps ... keep 'em coming!

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Thu Sep 25, 2003 3:22 pm

Aww poor Kerri! Brit has to ruin everything!! more please!

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Chapter 3 Losing A Best Friend
I can already tell that I'm losing him. He stills angry that I wouldn't stay with him, and now he's ignoring me for whatever reason. I'm really starting not to care anymore, its gotten to be pretty f**king stupid. I came down here to see him also, so if didn't want me to come all he had to do was say so.
"hey Kerri were going out to lunch. Wanna come?" J.C. asks coming into the room
"not really."
"please, for me." He says giving me a puppy dog face
"sure, lets go." Our ride to the restaurant was pretty quiet, partly because J.C. knows how I feel about Justin and having to see him with Britney. When we get out the car we see everyone sitting at the table.
"well hello Kerri."
"hey Chris, Joey, Trace, Justin, Lance and Britney."
"hello" They all reply at the same time. I sit inbetween J.C. and Chris, which is across from Justin and Britney. I wish she would quit looking at me. I turn my attention to Chris and we start talking. After ordering our food I see Britney is still looking at me.
"is there a reason you keep looking at me?" I ask her
"not at all."
"damn then quit staring."
"whatever b****." I hear her mumble
"what?" I ask beginning to yell
"you heard me."
"whatever."
"thats all you can say, your a nobody, you don't belong hanging with us."
"if I don't belong then neither do you, cause at least they got talent, which is something you lack."
"Kerri that was uncalled for." Justin said looking at me anger in his eye
"whatever Justin, I'm leaving." I get up to leave when J.C. comes up to me.
"I'm sorry, its my fault for bringing you here."
"no its not, can we leave?"
"yeah."
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At J.C. that night
"Kerri, I'm leaving alright, bye."
"bye". As soon as J.C. leaves I see Justin come in
"can we talk?"
"what's there to talk about"
"why you said those things to Brit."
"because she called me a b****, so I gave her one."
"so your leaving?"
"yep I don't belong, remember."
"thats not true."
"Justin you didn't say anything to her, you didn't defend me or nothing."
"I'm sorry, but shes my girlfriend Kerri what was I suppose to do?"
"just forget, okay go back to her."
"not till I know everyting is okay between us."
"its not okay I don't like Britney."
"why?"
"just forget it okay." I say beginning to walk away. He grabs my wrist and turns me around
"I can't"
"because Justin I don't."
"fine then Kerri leave go, I'm not stopping you."
"fine Justin don't call me ask about me nothing stay out of my life and I'll stay out of yours."
"good" He says right before walking out the door. As soon as the door closes I collapse to the floor crying.
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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Fri Sep 26, 2003 3:15 pm

Oh no, I hate it when good friends fight. Boo hoo! Hurt feelings are never good.

Britney needs to be out of this picture, but I guess we have to wait and see what happens.

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Fri Sep 26, 2003 4:27 pm

I'm sorry but Kerri wasn't out of line at all there! I would of done the exact same thing if someone had called me a b*tch :nod: And J you didn't defend her...why might i ask?? MORE PLEASE!!!!

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Fri Sep 26, 2003 4:43 pm

wow kerry went a lot easier on brit than i would have. i would have completely lost in on that chick and justin is so stupid for letting her leave still mad. he should have called brit said that he was gonna spend some time with kerry until they worked everything out. more please!

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Postby megzrsa » Sat Sep 27, 2003 6:34 am

oh no he didn't just defend britney! ughh! he'll regret it later :(

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Chapter 4 Four Months
Its been four months since I've talked to her. four long months. I thought we would just have a little argument then we would work things out. Trace, my mom and the guys still talk to her, she doesn't even ask about me. Its her birthday this month October 16th I think that I should do something nice for her, I just don't know what.
"Justin!" I hear my stepdad come in
"hey dad" We give eachother a hug then go into the living room to talk
"so do you wanna talk?"
"Dad I'm so confused. I didn't stick up for Kerri, I chose Britney Now Kerri doesn't even talk to me."
"listen son girlfriends may come and go but your best friends are forever. Right now you both need some space to figure things out."
"what do you mean?"
"look Justin do you want to be friends with Kerri? or do you want something more? Now I can't give you that answer only you can. So think about it."
"thanks dad, for talking to me. Ready for me to beat you in golf?" I ask laughing
"you wish son, I'm older I ve had more practice." He says pushing me playfully while laughing
"we'll see, Dad?"
"yeah"
"I love you"
"i know you do, I love you too."
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Chapter 5 Its my Birthday
Today is my birthday I turn 21. I'm happy, but sad. I don't have anyone here with me yet. Marissa coming down to visit. It'll be me her and Lynn just hanging out. Maybe that's Marissa calling now
"hello, Marissa."
"no its me, Justin. Listen Kerri don't hang up."
"what do you want?"
"I just wanted to cal and tell you happy birthday."
"thanks well bye."
"bye" As soon as I hang up I begin to cry. Part because I miss him, and I'm glad he called me.
"happy birthday to you happy birthday." I turn around to see Marissa and Lynn standing there
"K I didn't know you missed me this much." Marissa says laughing
"I don't" I say laughing giving her and Lynn a hug
"that really hurt K." She says laughing holding her heart. "So whats wrong?"
"I just talked to Justin."
"did you argue?" Lynn ask
"no he just called to wish me a happy birthday."
"enough with all this sappy sh* I mean stuff lets go out and have some fun."Marissa says cutting in. We bust out laughing and were out the door.
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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Sat Sep 27, 2003 3:15 pm

awww thats good advice that Justin's dad gave to him!! at least he was making an effort but Kerri...i understand that she's hurt and all but still :no: More please!

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Sat Sep 27, 2003 5:52 pm

awwwww man he called to wish you happy bday you should have taken the chance to talk to him about the sh** that went down. more please!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sun Sep 28, 2003 9:09 am

They need to work this mess out. They are good friends and could be a great couple if they would stop avoiding the fact that they had a fight and need to talk things out.

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Postby shortie17 » Mon Sep 29, 2003 2:35 pm

thanks for the feedback
Chapter 6 Rebuilding a Friendship Nov. 27 2001
Its good to be home again, I've missed it here. Plus my mom is gonna be cooking so thats always great. My mom told me Kerri will come over tomorrow for dinner. I'm nervous because Brits with me so will see how that goes. I hear the front door open along with footsteps. I run downstairs to see Trace and Kerri
"lets go play K"
"play what?"
"video games remember."
"your like a little kid sometimes Trace. I can't I uh need to go home and call my grandma. Later Bye Lynn."
"bye sweetie see ya tomorrow." My mom calls out from the kitchen. I walk to my mom along with Trace
"Wow she wouldn't even look at me." I whisper
"give her time J, she'll come around."Trace says as soon as Britney and her mom walk in
"hello ladies."
"hello there Justin, Trace Lynn."
"hey" We sit in the living room to talk for awhile before heading to bed
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Thanksgiving
"alright everythings set, were just waiting on Kerri."
"mom she's not coming."
"yes she is Justin she promised. See there she is now."
"sorry I'm late." We go sit at the table My mom, Kerri and Trace. On the other side Lynne, Britney, me and my stepdad.
"so Kerri tell us about your family." Britney says looking over at Kerri
"Why?"
"you never talk about them."
"fine where to begin."
"Kerri you don't have to." I tell her
"since she's so intrested. My mom died when I was five because my father beat her to death. You see one night he came hom drunk and started banging her head against the brick wall. He did that for around an hour before she died. He called the hospital and told her she fell down the stairs. They thought it was logical so let him go."
"stop Kerri!"
"no Justin, so from five to ten my father molested me. When my grandma found out she took me away. Finally the cops realized what my father had did, and what he was doing and they put him in prison. My grandma lives in Georgia now with my aunt. I think that pretty much covers it, so if you don't mind I'll be leaving because I don't have an apetite."
"Britney you already knew all that." I tell her
"you're such a b****."Trace says geeting up and leaving. I follow and we go over to Kerris.
"Kerri open the door."
"Trace could you leave. I mean Kerri and I need to talk."
"alright man, tell her I'll come over later."
"yeah" I open the front door to see Kerri standing there crying. She walks over to me and I wrap my arms around her.
"shh K I'm so sorry." She pulls away and looks at me. I wipethe tears from her eyes. We stand there looking at eachother for awhile.
"thanks for coming." She whispers
"no problem, Trace said he's gonna come over later."
"okay"
"well I just wanted to make sure your okay, bye."
"no wait Justin."
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Postby megzrsa » Mon Sep 29, 2003 3:21 pm

awwwww poor kerri! Britney, wat a b****! :angry: come on kerri! tel j how u feel about him, more plz?

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Mon Sep 29, 2003 3:49 pm

Britney is such a b****!!!! what is her problem??? especially since she already knew! ahh poor Kerri! :hug: I feel so bad for her! Especially if she was 5 and saw her father murder her father...and then having him molest her for 5 years :no: more please!

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<span style='color:purple'>Britney... :steaming:
Justin...better turn his ass around and stay with her!!
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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Tue Sep 30, 2003 8:10 am

Poor Kerri ... what a horrible life she has had and Britney is not making the situation any better by asking about the details.

Justin better be a man and step up to the plate and comfort his best friend. Best friends are forever and he better not lose Kerri.

Aww, I hope everything works out for Justin and Kerri. Sadness!

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Tue Sep 30, 2003 2:46 pm

damn man why does brit have to be a mega b**** like that! what could anyone ever seen in that girl! she just ahhh i dunno makes my skin crawl!

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Chapter 7 Holding on Nov. 28th 2001
"yeah"
"look I'msory for being so stubborn. I really do appreciate you calling me for my birthday. So I was wondering if we can start are friendship over?"
"I'm sorry for not defending you K"
"I know you are" He wraps his arms around me in a hug
"well you better get back home Lynn's probably worried."
"your right, are you coming?"
"maybe later, I really don't like Britney but if your happy then I'm happy for you."
"okay then bye"
"bye" As soon as Justin leaves Trace comes in
"are you okay K?"
"Trace I'm fine."
"did you and J make up?"
"sure, you can say that." We go sit on the couch and and talk about somethings before deciding to watch The Fast and Furious. By the end of the movie I had fell asleep
"K wake up."
"hmm"
"go get in bed I'm gonna go back to Justins."
"I'll go with you." We walk over to Justins to see that everyone is sleeping.
"alright I'll see you tomorrow"
"yeah" I start down the stairs wen someone grabs my hand
"K?"
"holy sh** Justin you scared me." We go outside and take a walk
"you forgot to come over."
"sorry, we watched a movie and I fell asleep."
"its alright." We spent two hours talking outside about things we've missed out on. It was great to get my Best Friend back.
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Postby tendertoes » Tue Sep 30, 2003 8:41 pm

<span style='color:purple'>Now he just has to lose Britney :shrug: </span>

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Tue Sep 30, 2003 9:38 pm

tendertoes wrote: <span style='color:purple'>Now he just has to lose Britney :shrug: </span>

I couldn't of said it any better :no: J girlfriends come and go but your best friends will always be there...you need to think about that...man im giving advice but i never seem to use the advice people give to me...weird :lol:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Oct 01, 2003 9:31 am

At least Kerri and J are talking again. Ditch Britney and everything should be all good.


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Chapter 8 True Friends Dec. 15 2001
"look Justin you have to choose, either me or Kerri!"
"Why do I have to choose?"
"because you do, so who is it gonna be?"
"Kerri"
"fine" with that said she walks out of the hotel room, out of my life. Theres part of me that wants to run after her, but then again I don't. I really didn't see this coming, maybe I should've. I pick up the phone and make flight reservations to go back home to Memphis.

"Mom I'm home."
"baby I've missed you, I'm so sorry about Britney, are you okay?"
"yeah mom I'm fine, um I'm gonna go over to Kerri's."
"okay" I walk down the sidewalk and up to her house. I knock on the door once, before she comes and opens it.
"hey J what's up?"
"nothing, can I come in"
"yeah" We go and sit on the couch and she just looks at me
"Britney and I broke up. She wanted me to choose between her and you."
"I'm sorry, you didn't have to choose me."
"yes I did" I start to cry, since she knows I'm hurting she comes over to me and gives me a hug. I pull away and kiss her lips. Since she doesn't fight me I kiss her again more passionaltely. I kiss across her jawline down to her neck. My hands skim own her sides going to the hem of her shirt. She ulls back and I take off her shirt. I unhook her bra and lay her down n the ocuch. I kiss down her chest stopping at each breast.
"mmm Justin we can't do this" I hear her moan
"shh baby" I continue my pathway of kisses down her body, ready to make love.
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Chapter 9 Only Friends
As much as I enjoyed yesterday with Justin it was wrong. He was vunerable, he needed someone, hell I needed someone and we got what we wanted. I look up to see him still sleeping, his arms wrapped aound my waist. God does this feel so right, for me to be wrapped in his arms, but it won't last. I kiss his forehead and get ready to get up.
"where you going?" He asks smiling at me
"to take a shower. You know I think you should make us some breakfast." I say laughing
"no you should make me some breakfast I'm the guest." He replies laughing
"um no I don't cook."
"fine I'm gonna go home and take a shower."
"okay" He walks over to me and kisses my lips
"I'll se you later K"
"bye" God those lips so soft, his touch. I really am gonna go craze. I want to tell him how I feel but its to soon. He just got out of a relationship. I'll tell him later, when the time is right.
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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Wed Oct 01, 2003 3:15 pm

whoo hoo NOOKIE!! lol were nookie junkies on here if you hadn't noticed :lol: K you need to tell him how you feel! but not quite yet cuz he'll probably jump into another relationship and right now he just needs time to himself...but if he asks you then you better say yes :lol: more please

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<span style='color:purple'>We are nookie junkies... :thumbup: :whip: :lick: :nod: :drool: :chew: :chatter:
lol...poor K...she's is definitely stuck! I hope she makes the right decision!
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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Thu Oct 02, 2003 11:28 am

I want Kerri and J together. I'm a nookie junkie and with them together, all of our nookie needs will be taken care of.


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Postby AngelOfMusic » Thu Oct 02, 2003 12:23 pm

oh man brit is gone!!!!! yaya! and yes i am glad there is nookie- but i dunno if they should have done it that fast i mean j still has to be hurting from brit~ and anyone who gives you ultimatums is not your friend. i would never give anyone an ultimatum unless it was to save there life. more please!

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Postby Miss_G » Fri Oct 03, 2003 6:21 pm

<span style='color:purple'>wowww....nice story... </span>:lol:

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Postby betty boop » Sat Oct 04, 2003 12:18 am

I promise that I will catch up on this tomorrow.

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Postby betty boop » Sat Oct 04, 2003 1:42 am

All caught up and technically it is almost tomorrow (11:40 here in SD). I agree that it was too fast. But then if she tries to break off with him that could hurt him more and he does have feelings for her. I don't know. I'm back and forth on it. It'll all work out, right?"


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