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Postby shortie17 » Sat Oct 04, 2003 3:49 pm

Thanks for the feedback
I'm gonna give you 2 chapters today, and then after that I might not be able to update until aftet Thurs. because I have a five page paper for English and a math test :(

Chapter 10 Love Dec.23, 2001
Part fo me wants to tell Kerri how I feel the other part of me just wants us to be friends. I've been trying to figre ut what to do, its just hard to make this decison.
"Justin telephone"
"thanks mom I got it."
"Justin"
"what do you want Britney?"
"we need to talk"
"talk"
"okay look I'm really really sorry for making you choose."
"and" I say urging her to continue
"I want you back J, I've missed you I need you. Please give me oner more chance."
"I'll call you back, bye"
"bye" As soon as I hang up the phone Kerrie comes in
"hey what's up?"
"not much I just talked to Britney."
"what she say?"
"she apoligzed and wants us to get back together." Before she speaks her breath gets caught in her throat
"well um listen to your heart. If your in love go for it, don't let anyone stop you."
"you think?"
"yep, well Trace and I were gonna watch some movies wanna join."
"I'll be down later, and thanks a lot."
"hey thats what friends are for." She says slapping my thigh getting up to leave.
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Chapter 11 Mending my heart Jan. 3, 2002
Yep that's what friends are for. Well I disppoint myself sometimes, never making the right decisons. Now Justins back with Britny and she's been flaunting it. Ever since she got here, oh Justin baby, lets cuddle lets not. She makes me sick. Maybe I should move on find someone to date. No need in me staying single.
"there you are K."
"sorry I'm late."
"it's alright. I needed to get out of that house." Lynn tells me laughing
"ha, I bet you do."
"someones coming over here." I turn to se a man walking my way
"hi I'm Derek what's your name?" I stare into his dark brown eyes
"hi I'm Kerri and this is Lynn." I answer pointing to Lynn
"hello ladies, normally I don't do this but would you like to go out on a date?"
"sure why not, um heres my number." We exchange numbers
"okay I'll call at 8:00p.m"
"okay, bye."
"bye Kerri, Lynn"
"girl he's cute. If I wasnt old enough to be his momma."
"Lynn stop right there." I say laughing
"I'm just saying I'm happily married, and happily willing to have a one night stand. I'm just joking. You ready to go see the movie?"
"I bet you are just joking. come on before we miss the movie.
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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Sat Oct 04, 2003 4:29 pm

"I'm just saying I'm happily married, and happily willing to have a one night stand. I'm just joking.


OMG that cracked me up! :rofl: i was laughin so hard when i read that!!! Darn you J! Why are you going back out with Brit!?! You like Kerri, she likes you but now you aren't gonna know that cause shes going on a date with Derek...oh it's so complicated!! more please!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sat Oct 04, 2003 5:02 pm

Whoa ... this story is getting complicated. J back with Brit. Now Derek is in the picture. Everything is a mystery to me now!

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Postby tendertoes » Sat Oct 04, 2003 8:13 pm

<span style='color:purple'>Damn It J, come here...I need to slap you!!</span>

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Postby betty boop » Sat Oct 04, 2003 9:42 pm

He's back with Brit. Icky gross! I hope Kerri punches her one day.

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Postby zozon3 » Sat Oct 04, 2003 11:52 pm

good for Kerri go get the hot guy :lol:

J's lost <_< his fault

he doesnt deserve her

:lol: Im harsh on guys........

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Postby megzrsa » Sun Oct 05, 2003 8:07 am

oh justin! wat is he doing back with britney? :angry:
kerri go hav fun with derek :D

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Mon Oct 06, 2003 1:17 am

britney? *in my best ernest p worrell voice* ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

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Postby shortie17 » Tue Oct 07, 2003 8:30 pm

thanks for the feedback
Chapter 12 Jealous
"I'll be right back" I say walking out the door. I go over to Kerri's to see her in a black spaghetti strap dress.
"Where you goin?"
"On a date, why?"
"Your suppose to come and watch movies."
"Sorry I can't make it, now you need to go."
"Why?"
"Because my date will be here soon."
"Whatever K, bye"
"Bye" A date, with who? She's just sayng that to make me jealous, I know it.
"Mom Kerri's going out on a date?"
"Yep with a hottie HIs name is Derek."
"and your letting her."
"She's 21 she can do what she wants and why do you care?"
"I don't, wheres Brit?"
"If you say so, in your room."
"Well were gonna go out."
"no your not, your staying home. Stop trying to spy."
"I'm not"
"Yes you are, look you had your chance with her. If you can move on then so can she."
"fine mom, if you say so."
~~~
Chapter 13 Magical Jan. 4 2002
"Lynn, where are you?"
"In the kitchen"
"Hey Trace"
"What's up K?"
"not much"
"so how was it?"
"magical. He was so sweet, and himself."
"and.."
"we had a good conversation. When he took me home he started gettng all nervous."
"did you kiss?"
"oh yeah, we both don't kiss on the first date. So I kissed his cheek. Then he goes Kerri I really like you and I want to get to know you better."
"what did you say?"
"I was like, I like you too Derek, and we decided to go out again tomorrow."
"aww you should bring him over here."
"okay, where's Paul?"
"at work"
"well I'm bored" Trace says breaking Lynn and I's conversation
"what do you want to do Trace?" I ask
"lets play the X-Box."
"alright no crying when I beat you."
"keep dreamin K."
"okay, we'll see."
~~~
Chapter 14 Away Feb. 10 2002
Well I'm back in L.A. I really didn't want to leave, but Brit wanted me to come out. Kerri has been hangin out with that Derek guy a lot. Almost everday, and when she's not with him she's with my mom and Trace. I really miss hanging out with them, I feel unwanted. Anyway I been thinkin that Brit and I should break up. The guys have told me soe stories about her and Wade. I want to believe her, but then I again I dont. That's hard for me to handle, you give your heart to someone and then they rip it in tow. J.C. was the first one to tell me, and he's like my older brother. He looks after me, and dosn't want to see me get hurt. I'll ask her when she's gets here which is now.
"hey baby, I've missed you." She says kissing me quickly
"Um Brit we need to talk."
"okay, about what?
"I've been told by people that your cheating. I'm not saying its true or that I believe them. I'm asking if you are cheating? or have you?
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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Tue Oct 07, 2003 8:45 pm

J man, you need to make your move on her if you want her!! ahh people people people! :lol: I know that shes moving on but you can so tell that shes not over him :no: and J man, your gonna be in for a shock when you find out what brit did :nod: more please!

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Postby betty boop » Tue Oct 07, 2003 11:40 pm

Of course she's gonna lie. He should just dump her.

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Oct 08, 2003 8:38 am

Ditch Brit ... my new slogan for this story. She's only gonna break your heart in the end, Justin!

I'm glad that Kerri is having fun with Derek. Every girl needs a fun boy! But I don't want her to ever lose Justin. They are best friends till the end after all!

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Wed Oct 08, 2003 11:08 am

ditch the b****! she is lying to you and besides you should realize that anyone who comes between you and your best friends is bad news! more please!

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Postby megzrsa » Wed Oct 08, 2003 3:14 pm

justin after you dump the b****, tel k u wanna b with her :D

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Postby tendertoes » Wed Oct 08, 2003 8:31 pm

<span style='color:purple'>I can't wait to hear what she has to say...yay!
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Postby shortie17 » Sat Oct 11, 2003 5:09 pm

"No J"
"Can you look me in the eye"
"Justin I haven't or didn't cheat on you. I can't believe your accusing me"
"Look, I'm sorry I was just making sure"
"I think you should leave"
"I live here to"
"and"
"fine" If she hadn't or wasn't cheating on me, why is she getting so angry. I can't take this anymore I'm tired of lying to myself. I love Kerri, I want Kerri, I need Kerri. I walk back into the house to see Brit talking with Wade about me becoming suspicious on the phone.
"not cheating huh"
"J. I . I "
"don't say anything its over, were done finished."
"but baby I. I"
"no I'll be getting my stuff tomorrow." I can't believe I fell for her sh**
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Chapter 15 A Friend In Need Feb. 13th 2002
"Hey J I'm really sorry about Britney"
"its not your fault"
"I know, I just uh I really don't know what to say"
"you being here is plenty." Okay Kerri you can do this Derek moved, heres your chance to tell him how you feel.
"Um Justin, I. I need to tell you something."
"I need to tell you something."
"you can go first"
"well um I've liked you snce you came to Memphis. I still like you I'e fallen in love with you."
"wow um, I think, wait I feel the same way."
"really?" He asked as his eyes start to tear up
"yeah I've wanted to tell you but you were tih Britney and well the first time you broke up I was too scared to tellyou."
"I'm single now and so are you"
"J you just broke up with Britney and I don't want us to move to fast. When the tims right we'll know."
"okay K so what do you want to do?"
"I'm kinda tired"
"go head and go to sleep. I need to think about somethings."
"alright"
"K you know I love you, right?"
"I know J I love you too" More than you'll ever know
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Postby betty boop » Sat Oct 11, 2003 6:48 pm

Finally. What a stupid ass. Why would she get on the phone as soon as he left? You wait till you see the car pull away, and even a few minutes after that just to be safe.

Well, it's finally over and he told kerri how he feels so, it should be all good.

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Postby megzrsa » Sun Oct 12, 2003 1:18 pm

Im so glad that they have got their feelings out :P

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Mon Oct 13, 2003 1:16 pm

wow she got busted!!! brit you are so damn dumb sometimes i wonder how you function in the world with an iq as low as yours!


well i am glad that they told eachother how they felt, now will things get weird?

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Oct 13, 2003 4:23 pm

Now that the feelings are finally expressed, I wonder what will happen next. It could get funky between them or it could be the perfect romance! I guess we'll have to wait and see when you update again!

Yeah, Britney is stupid. Getting caught on the phone with Wade after you said you weren't cheating ... smart move girl, smart move!

Great job on the chapter!

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Mon Oct 13, 2003 9:38 pm

took ya long enough J! And i'm glad that you took that trash to the curb! :nod: you are so much better than her!! aww i can see such a good future for these two!!!! ahh more please!

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Postby tendertoes » Tue Oct 14, 2003 2:10 pm

<span style='color:purple'>Finally...we're getting somewhere!!!!
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Chapter 16 A long time to come April 3 2002
Finally I've got the girl of my dreams. It feels great, it's like were friends with benefits. As she's in the shower I yell a question to her
"Hey K you wanna go out tonight?"
"Sure why not, is it gonna be someplace fancy?"
"Naw, well unless you want to."
"I kinda want some Wendys"
"alright, could you hurry up" she walks out the bathroom dressed
"lets go"
"alright." We get in the car and start to head for Wendys
"do you have to go back to Memphis K?"
"yes, you'll be fine baby its only going to be five months" She says sarcastically
"tell me about it, we can sneak in some visits"
"that would be fun" She says placing her hand on my inner thigh I flench at her touch
"we can start now"
"oh yeah"
"alright lets go home" I say quickly starting the car
"Why go home when we can do it in the car" She says smirking
"I'm all for it baby, what are you waiting for come here"
"J were not having sex in the car"
"Please" I say pouting
"No! you sicko" She says laughing I rush home, and couldn't wait to start making love. I kiss her lips as she works on the buttons of my panys. I start to work on her pants and soon were both stripped of our clothing. I lay her on the bed, and lay between her legs
"God your beautiful" I whisper in her ear
"go slow. I want this to last" She says laughing
"hey hey I can last all night"
"prove it"
"I will baby"
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Chapter 17 Rendezvou June 1 2002
When I get home from work I get a letter from Justin
K,
I miss you baby, since I miss you so much your gonna come and see me in Hawaii. Everythings taken care of
Love you
Justin

Hawaii Oh my God I'm so excited I haven't seen him in two months and boy has it been hell.
~~~In Hawaii~~~
They take me to the villa that we'll be staying at
"Justin I'm here" I call through the villa I don't get an answer so I walk into the bedroom to see another note
K,
Go to the beach

I walk out to the beach to see Justin coming out of the water. The water glistening all over his body, rolling down his chest, tohis abs. Man he is sexy. As I start to get closer he smiles
"Hey baby I've missed you so much" He says picking me up
"I've missed you too, I can't believe you planned this."
"I wanted this to be special. After this we won't see eachother for three months." We sit on the beach watching the sun set. He grabs my hand and kisses it. I look at him
"I love you K"
"I love you too" He moves in closer to me kissing my cheek then my lips. From my lips to my neck makng sure not to miss a spot. His hands go to the hem of my shirt pulling it up. Normally I wouldn't be doing this out in the public. But I needed him in everyway. I couldn't resits him.
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Chapter 18 Saying Good June 10th 2002
I don't want to leave her. we just started dating and I already have to leave. My mom thinks I should ask her to come with me to L. A. its just Me and the guys recording it shouldn't be that bad.
"damn K finally you were in the shower for an hour" I say laughing
"No I wasn't thats you" She says laughing and throwing her towel at me. Too bad shes dressed
"come here" She comes and sits on my lap
"K will you come out to L. A. with me"
"I .. I don't know J, I have to work"
"you could quit"
"and then do what follow you around?" She asks getting angry
"baby I don't mean it like that, you could find another job in L.A."
"thats the same situation were in now. I'll think about it okay"
"yeah, well I need to leave"
"I know come on" She walks me outside
"this is it" She says
"Yep bye baby I love you"
"I love you too" I give her a hug and kiss before leaving.
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Postby AngelOfMusic » Tue Oct 14, 2003 4:16 pm

I walk out to the beach to see Justin coming out of the water. The water glistening all over his body, rolling down his chest, tohis abs



:jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop:


that is all i can say. well that and more please!

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Postby tendertoes » Tue Oct 14, 2003 4:19 pm

<span style='color:purple'>Yummy! I have a great imagination...and well...yummy!!!! :ph34r: </span>

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Tue Oct 14, 2003 10:41 pm

AngelOfMusic wrote:
I walk out to the beach to see Justin coming out of the water. The water glistening all over his body, rolling down his chest, tohis abs



:jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop:


that is all i can say. well that and more please!

:nod: I agree! I couldn't of said it better!

Yummy! I have a great imagination...and well...yummy!!!!  


And I couldn't agree with you anymore!! man i liked that update!!! more please!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Oct 15, 2003 7:55 am

Justin coming out of the ocean ... I agree, that was a wonderful image. I'll be thinking about that one for a long time.

I like how they are finally a couple and I hope she goes out to L.A. with him. I couldn't handle being away from him if I were with him.

Great chapter!

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Postby megzrsa » Wed Oct 15, 2003 3:08 pm

gr8 chapter! i luved the image of justin coming out of the water :shocked:

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Chapter 19 Get Together
July 4th 2002
Today were having a barbeque. The guys came down to Memphis, it should be intresting to say the least. I'm excited to see Justin, but at the same time a little nervous. I'm really beginning to have second thoughts about us being togeter. I just really feel like were moving too fast way too fast. There here, I walk outside to see Joey come up to me
"Joe hey"
"Hey K how are you?" He ask giving me a hug
"good, you?"
"couldn't be better" We walk inside, and he immediately begins cooking. I sit at the table next to the grill when J.C. sits across from me
"hey mama"
"hey C. wheres Jessa?"
"she couldn't make it." We make small talk before Justin comes behind me wrapping his arms around my waist. My body tenses but he doesn't seem to notice.
"hey baby, I've missed you"
"I've missed you too." I get up and go into the house. Justin follows me into is room
"whats wrong?" He asks sitting next to me
"nothing, I'm good"
"are you sure?"
"yeah, I think I'm just tired"
"why don't you take a nap, I'll be downstairs"
"I don't want to miss the firewords though"
"its okay baby, just take a little nap"
"alright"
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11:00 p.m.
As I wake up I see Justin looking at me
"hey sleepy head" He says kissing my forehead
"hey what time is it?" I ask my voice groggy
"its eleven. I tried to wake you up, but I couldn't" He says smiling slightly
"how was it?"
"it was alright, I wish you were up to see them with me"
"me too" I whisper He takes off his shirt nd comes in the bed. I lay my head on his chest and sigh before falling asleep.

Chapter 20 Special
Aug. 28th
I really want to do something special for Kerri, so my parents are gone and I'm gonna fly out to Memphis. Since I know shes gonna work, I'll wait till she goes to work and then go over to his house and surprise her
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Memphis
I call over to Kerris using my cell phone right before she goes to work.
"Hey K"
"Justin I'm sorry but I have to go to work. I'll call you as soon as I get in"
"okay bye baby"
"bye" Perfect she has no clue I'm here. I trun off all the lights and sit in a chair facing the door. I hear her open the door she turns on the lights and screams.
"Justin you scared the sh** out of me!" She exclaims
"I'm sorry baby" I go ove and give her a hug and a kiss. She pulls back and looks at me
"wait your suppose to be in L.A. you came down here for me?"
"yep" A tear drops from her eye. I wipe the tear
"why are you doing this for me?" She asks
"because I love you, your my life thats why"
"your way to good to me, I don't deserve this or you" She says turning and walking away. I grab her hand and turn her towards me
"don't say that, why are you saying this?" I go sit down on the couch pulling her on my lap
"look at me Justin, I'm not a celebrity, compared to other girls I'm ugly"
"Kerri you are not ugly, your beautiful on the inside and out, whats bringing this on?" I wipe the tears from her eyes
"I don't know, thank-you. I love you"
"I love you too"
"I've probably ruined this for you"
"no you didn't come on"
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Chapter 21 pt.1
Depression Sept. 10 2002
What Justin did for me was magical. I fell in love all over again. I have a more serious issue to deal with. I'm beginning to think I'm depressed sometimes when Justin's around I'm fine, and sometimes while hes here I feel very alone, emotional not my "normal self". Its everything my mind, and body feels exhausted stressed. I pick up the phone to call Justin
"hello"
"hey K whats up?"
"not much is J there?"
"hes rehearsing right now" Trace tells me
"can you have him call me right away"
"of course, is everything okay?" Trace asks concern evident in his voice
"I really don't know,but don't worry, okay"
"alright bye"
"bye" I'm guessing its gonna be awhile before Justin can call me back, so I'll just go for a walk. As I'm walking I feel someone grab me from behind. I scream out for help but no one hears me. The man rips off my clothes and enters me violently
"please don't Please stop, NO?" I yell
"just relax everythings gonna be okay"
"NO STOP PLEASE!"
"shut up" The man says punching me in the face. He continues thrusting inside me violently hurting me causing me to bleed. The tears fall from my eyes as he pulls out and ejaculates on my body
"that wasn't that bad now was it. If you tell anyone I'll kill you" He tells me before walking away
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Postby megzrsa » Sat Oct 18, 2003 7:25 am

omg! I am very nearly crying after reading that chapter :cry: Thats a terrible terrible thing to have happen to her :(

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Sat Oct 18, 2003 12:44 pm

WHOA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was a shock!! OMG that poor girl!! :hug: I'm gonna cry now :cry: She better tell someone....don't let it go girl!! He can't hurt you!!! ahh i need more! i wanna know what happens!!!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sat Oct 18, 2003 1:46 pm

Oh my God ... poor Kerri. That is such a horrible thing to happen to her. I hope she can figure out who did this to her and put him in jail.

She needs to tell the police and then Justin. He might be able to provide her with the support she needs during this tough time.

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Postby tendertoes » Sat Oct 18, 2003 8:36 pm

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Mon Oct 20, 2003 5:14 pm

holy sh**! i totally didnt see that coming oh man i hope she is ok- oh justin you have to come back oh man more i have to know if she is ok........

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Postby shortie17 » Tue Oct 21, 2003 1:39 pm

Chapter 21 pt. 2
I know I need to tell someone, but I can't. Its not the fact that he threatened to kill me, but what is Justin gonna think of me now. He's gonna think I'm dirty and nasty he's not gonna want anything to do with me. After debating wheter I should tell I gather myself up and go to the policestation
"ma'am may I help you?"
"yes sir I I I was raped/"
"okay come with me" I tell my story to detective Johns go to the hospital to take a rape kit then I'm allowed to go home. When I step in the door the telephone rings
"hello"
"hey baby Trace told me you called"
"yeah" I whisper
"what's wrong?"
"oww this hurts so much" I say referring to the bruise under my eye
"what hurts?"
"nothing just a cut...um on my finger."
"a cut?" He questions
"yep, so when are you coming home?"
"two more weeks baby"
"I can't handle being away from you"
"I know baby, me too. hold on someones calling"
"alright" In ten minutes Justin clicks back over
"baby you still there?"
"yeah, so who was on the phone?"
"um no one"
"J tell me"
"detective Johns"
"WHAT?!" I asked shocked
"were you gonna tell me baby"
"yeah I was waiting for you to come home so you didn't miss work"
"work doesn't matter now. Are you okay? What happend?"
"I went for a walk and this man grabbed me and ripped my clothes off. He punched me in the face. He ejaculated all over me. It was horrible" I say finally cracking and broke down crying.
"Shh baby Its gonna be alright I promise"
"you promise?"
"yes I'm gonna come stay with you until your better."
"No its okay you have to record with the guys and everything I'll be fine"
"No K I'm coming down there. I love you"
"I love you too"
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Postby AngelOfMusic » Tue Oct 21, 2003 2:29 pm

well i am glad j knows and is coming to help! more!!!

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Postby tendertoes » Tue Oct 21, 2003 7:26 pm

<span style='color:purple'>She is so brave! I happy that J will be there with her to help her through this difficult time.</span>

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Tue Oct 21, 2003 8:59 pm

aww I'm glad that J is gonna be there for her!! That must of taken a lot of courage for her to go and tell the detective after he told her he was going to kill her if she told anyone...they should have protection on her 24/7 until they catch him so that he don't try to do anything to her :nod: more please!!!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Oct 22, 2003 8:17 am

Yay for J coming and yay for her telling the police. That was a smart and courageous move, so I know that Justin would never think any less of her or that she was a bad person.

Great chap!

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Postby shortie17 » Wed Oct 22, 2003 5:20 pm

Chapter 22 Taking Care of Her Needs
Sept. 12 2002
I can't even imagine what it must be like for her. I don't know how to comfort her, I mean she was taking advantage of. Man when detective Johns told me I wanted to take justice in my own hands I walk up to the door and open it to see her sitting on the couch. I see the smile appear on her face as she walks over to me
"hey baby I've missed you" I say wrapping my arms around her
"I know, baby I was gonna watch a movie"
"what's he movie?"
"I am Sam" As we go sit I can't help but look at her, her eye swollen scars on her arms but still happy to see me. She turns and looks at me, as I see the ears in her eyes
"You keep looking at me, because you think I'm ugly and dirty" She says running into the bedroom crying.
"baby please let me in. You know that's not true, I don't think your ugly or dirty"
"don't lie Justin"
"I'm not" I whisper I sit across from he door waiting for her to come out. Before long I fell asleep
"Justin wake-up" I feel a tapping on my shoulder
"K, you know I don't find you ugly or dirty" I say looking in her eyes, she could see my tear strained face
"I know its just that people have been staring at me."
"Shh don't cry everytings gonna be okay" I say as we go in the room and she lays her head on my chest. I hear her sigh before she falls asleep
"Who cares what other people say. Who are they to judge someone. I promise you that everything will be fine, everything will work itself out. And once everything clears I'm gonna do something that I should've done a long time ago. Something everyone has told me to do, and now I finally realize what everyones been saying." I whisper to her before falling asleep.
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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Thu Oct 23, 2003 8:18 am

Awww, Justin is so sweet. I can't even imagine how hard it would be for someone who has been raped to deal with all the emotions and pain that come with having gone through such a horrible experience. All Justin can do is listen and comfort Kerri whenever she is feeling afraid or angry. Justin gets an A+ for being a good boyfriend!

Great chap ... more please!

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Thu Oct 23, 2003 4:27 pm

oo ooo ooo who needs more? we do we do!! :rofl: I give major props to J for being so understanding! that must be soo hard for her!!! more???

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Postby tendertoes » Thu Oct 23, 2003 7:35 pm

<span style='color:purple'>I wish everyone could be as supportive as J is being!! It must be difficult on him as well!!
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Postby AngelOfMusic » Fri Oct 24, 2003 12:17 pm

what i would give for a caring and understanding boyfriend. all the guys i know that are like that have their own boyfriends!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Fri Oct 24, 2003 12:51 pm

all the guys i know that are like that have their own boyfriends!


Amen to that statement. Kind, considerate, straight guys ... :thumbdown: DON'T EXIST!

Kind, considerate gay guys ... :thumbup: Too bad they won't love me back!

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Fri Oct 24, 2003 4:02 pm

whatchagot4meMRJT wrote:
all the guys i know that are like that have their own boyfriends!


Amen to that statement. Kind, considerate, straight guys ... :thumbdown: DON'T EXIST!

Kind, considerate gay guys ... :thumbup: Too bad they won't love me back!

Not all of man...my friend was going out with this guy who I used to like and when they were going out he turned "bi" and now he has a boyfriend and he soo rude to my friend...hes like super sweet to me and he thinks im gorgeous but i mean he cheated on my friend with a guy...thats just low :no: lol

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Fri Oct 24, 2003 4:04 pm

whatchagot4meMRJT wrote:
all the guys i know that are like that have their own boyfriends!


Amen to that statement. Kind, considerate, straight guys ... :thumbdown: DON'T EXIST!

Kind, considerate gay guys ... :thumbup: Too bad they won't love me back!

not all of them man....my friend was going out with this guy who i used to like and when they were going out he turned "bi" and now he has a boyfriend....like hes rude to her but super sweet to me....plus he thinks the at i was soo gorgeous i'm like yeah i don't see it but if you do....lol but it was so low cuz he was cheatin on her with a guy a guy man thats just :no:

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Fri Oct 24, 2003 5:22 pm

i have never had a guy switch teams on me. man i dont know how i would handle that!

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Fri Oct 24, 2003 8:24 pm

she hasn't taken it to well...she is still in love with him and all this otha crap is going on in her life right now so she always asks me to help her out with her problems cuz all of her other friends aren't worth a darn thing if i might say...i mean if you knew her friends you would agree with me like they are never there for her and she can never talk to them...plus they are always getting shot and killed cuz yeah i can't say but let's just leave it as she's hanging with the wrong crowd n then her b/w made a lil switcheroo while she was with him :lol: all i can say is that im glad he wasn't going out with me when he decided this...now i'm not so angry he went out with her instead of me :no: lol

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Postby shortie17 » Sat Nov 01, 2003 3:54 pm

sorry for the lack of update I've been under a lot of stress I'll try to update tonight :(


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