Poetry/songs...

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Postby PreCiouSbAbY » Tue Sep 23, 2003 3:25 pm

Okay here's a few poems & songs, u all can post them too!

Back Where I Begin

tears are my new foundation
they are what has built
and built me down
weaker are my eyes
that form droplets
from the cheeks that
seem so cold and drowned
my pale face is covered
by makeup, artificial you might say
but why show the world my pain
no one cares at the end of the day
i tried to keep myself happy
elation turns to isolation in this place
maybe if i had just ignored
how i felt, this emptiness could
disappear
but i'm left hollow like a hole
throbbing in the cold
ashamed in this skin
and alone, back where i begin


Why Can't We Be?

i dream about your face
the way you smell each day
my mind is messed up
in this quite old place

and this is what i gotta say...
why do you have to hurt me
the way you do
i saw the way she looked into your eyes
i knew you would
turn your back on love
find someone else new
but why can't I
why can't I be with you?

only hope drives me home
to sit alone and cry
there's no one to hold
as I sit by the phone
it's a fading memory
a ripped body and soul
once were my everything
you made me so whole

the way that you hurt me
why can't you see
just look by your side
please don't try to hide
we were meant to be
but you had to go
heal someone else's broken heart
and I let you free
i'm lying here tearing apart
Why can't I
Why can't we be?



Catch Me If You Can

somewhere out there
i thought i would figure out
that this life was never meant for me
but you read between the lines
where my life hid in disguise
didn't think i would be so blind
so as i'm falling down from here
catch me if you can
don't know where i'm going
i'm finding hard to stand
leaving all these footsteps
with this suitcase in my hand
Don't know where i'm headed
In this empty, barren land
My lonely self has gathered
All the broken pieces on the floor
The past was just an illusion
As your face walks out the door
I'm seeing all the flashbacks
Cry myself to sleep
I take a voyage into a world
only filled of dreams
I toast with my reflection
As I drink to the memories
I feel your presence around me
Suddenly I can't breath.


Tell me what u think...

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Postby tendertoes » Tue Sep 23, 2003 3:50 pm

<span style='color:purple'>Wow...those were great!! :clap: </span>

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Postby betty boop » Tue Sep 23, 2003 7:16 pm

I'm glad you posted those cuz I have some things of my own that I write. I can't now though cuz I don't have with me but I will.

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Postby zozon3 » Tue Sep 23, 2003 9:36 pm

DAMN GIRLY!!!

I loved the 1st and 3rd one
theyre really really really good!

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Postby PreCiouSbAbY » Sat Sep 27, 2003 7:23 pm

alright im feeling really...ugh right now
so im gonna post some more. You're welcome to leave a post, & make me feel better.

Broken Car

could you help me
again
couldn't start my car
the engine was dead
i thought today
i'd smile
but it's faded away
i thought i'd be happy
am i still okay?

barely breathing in this moment
all choked up, realizing the truth
why am i giving in so badly
it's not my fault, it's you

they've all got their reasons
i've got my own
just leave me alone, abandon me
don't call me on the phone
maybe if i wasn't so afraid of the sight
so afraid of life, & what i didn't want to be
i could see past through the sadness
and let myself be me

my engine isn't starting
i'm back where i used to be
the dead end of the corner
as the cars pass on by
no one stops to even notice
the planes fly through the sky
and i'm left here
with this memory in my head
and how you used to tell me
'fill your tank, don't you forget'

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Postby PreCiouSbAbY » Sat Sep 27, 2003 7:29 pm

...momentary depression... *sighs*

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Postby Cindy » Sat Oct 04, 2003 11:56 am

i just want to say you're realli talented. ^__^

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Postby princessluvsjrt » Sat Nov 01, 2003 1:53 pm

:cry: beautiful...i love them and the broken car one.

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sat Nov 01, 2003 3:03 pm

I love them all, especially the "Broken Car" poem. You pack so much emotion into your poems, which is what good writing is all about.

I hope you get over that "ugh" feeling. Just remember that we're all here for you!

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Postby Sarah » Sun Nov 02, 2003 12:51 pm

your poems are beautiful! i wish i had the talent to write like you!
dont worry hun, were all here for you :hug:

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Postby PreCiouSbAbY » Mon Nov 03, 2003 5:54 pm

this is my poetry website...if u want to read more.

postpoems.com/members/babyrani/click here

thanks for all your comments u guys. :)

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Postby JT Fan Girl » Sat Nov 08, 2003 3:26 pm

Broken

I feel sick at the sight of you
And I’m tired of hearing your name
You used to be my only hope
But now you’re just causing me pain

I don’t understand
Your not supposed to make me cry
Everything’s changing about you
And I don’t understand why

You were meant to there for me
When things would get bad
Even if you didn’t realise I was there for you
Least I knew the love I had

How could you stop being you
And disregard who you are
How could you have let things
Ever get this far

I can’t believe you couldn’t see
That when you thought I was waving
I was drowning
And that my world was caving

How could you leave me alone
In a world that’s so cold
You promised you always be there
I’d have your hand to hold

And yet just knowing you’ve been
It makes me feel ill
And I’m slumped against the wall
Crying all alone, still

I want to shout at you
So you can see how I feel
I want you to help me
Because alone I can’t deal

I hate this twisted sensation
All my feelings mixed
All I know is if you hadn’t had changed
I would be fixed

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Postby zozon3 » Sat Nov 08, 2003 3:43 pm

that was super good!!!!
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seriously im sorry whos that about?

its a really good poem tho

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Postby JT Fan Girl » Sat Nov 08, 2003 3:53 pm

:hug: Thanks, I just wrote it. It's about a lot of people... all rolled into one in the poem.

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Postby JT Fan Girl » Mon Nov 17, 2003 3:03 pm

Ok so this is hella long... if you can be bothered reading it, good on ya :P. Enjoy B).

Covered In Rain

My clothes are skin tight
We’ve been dancing in the rain
Hoping that together
We could wash away the pain
My T-shirt is sticking
And rain looks like tears
You’re shivering next to me
Letting go of your fears
My shoes meet the puddles
My hand fits in yours
We’re looking at the world
Hidden behind doors
But today we’re outside
We’d rather be cold
Always open knowing
We have each other to hold
I’m looking at our shadows
Rippled in the pavement’s lake
Letting rain droplets fall
With each breath I take
I raise my head
Let the rain wash my skin
I feel you next to me
And freedom within
The sky above me
Made up of swirls so blue
Your body close to me
So real, so true
So let the rain fall
We’ll keep on dancing
Buy me flowers
We won’t stop romancing
Everyone is hiding
Too scared to be who they are
If you don’t believe in you
You’ll never get far
We won’t run away
Even though we might get wet
There’s more to life
That I haven’t seen yet
We’re lovers in the rain
The road is our own
Knowing when apart
We’re never alone
My body is soaked
But inside I’m dry
I’m ready to go with you
I’m ready to fly
Into the room
Always helping each other out
Pulling of the clothes
Now scattered about
The rains at the window
And on our bodies it’s left it’s trace
You take your hand
And wipe the droplets from my face
The bed is our kingdom
The sheets our cover
And now I really appreciate
How we love one another
You take my tiny hand in yours
And lead me to the bed
And for this moment in time
Two people become one and nothing is said
Two cold bodies
Once covered in rain
Now lie warm next to each other
Free from their pain
Looking out the window
Rain still falling from above
And now all that we have
Is this love

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Postby zozon3 » Mon Nov 17, 2003 4:59 pm

i like it claire its a really cute poem
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Postby PreCiouSbAbY » Thu Nov 20, 2003 6:58 pm

yeah, so it took me awhile to write this. & so i think its pretty bad. my best pieces usually aren't thought out. so tell me what you think. thanks. thinking hurts. :headache:


<span style='color:purple'>Caught In This Hole

So you feared it
It was coming
coming down so cold

So you wanted what you
couldn't have
as you wandered through
a storm

So you dreamed it
and you chased it
thousand lies they may have told
but you waited, and you fought it
with nothing in your arms to hold

in the eyes of a stranger
you saw a fearless paradise
poison melting away
in the soul of a stranger
you saw a relishing image
but quickly fading away

deeply captivating your mind
his words pulled, and pulled you in
you sought for just one moment
to fill this void from within

but emptiness is never relieved
a scar that never disappears
the pain that trickles down
is the tragedy that everyone fears

it'll come to get you
when you don't notice
it'll shock you in your sleep
so beware when you feel
someones swept you off your feet

cause a stranger is just somebody
minding his own way
even if his eyes tell a story
don't listen to what he may say

cause love is a twisted circle
a maze that gets you lost
in the end, you're left
with just your hollow self
and what a broken heart cost
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