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<span style='color:purple'>hey guys, I'm working on this new story but I've been having a little trouble. This is where I need your help...I would love some feedback....good or bad.

If interested....read on,

Separate Lives: Chapter 1

“Hello.â€￾ I groaned into the phone, still half asleep.
“Hey baby, it’s me. Are you alone?â€￾
“Mm hmm.â€￾
“I’m on my way.â€￾
When I realized the line had gone dead I looked over at the clock and sighed when I realized what time it was.
‘4 am...damn.’
Wiping the sleep from my eyes, I dragged my legs over the side of the bed and sat for a moment to steady myself.
Once satisfied that I wouldn’t fall once I stood, I got up and made my way through the darkened apartment. Every sense awakened as I tried to maneuver through the darkness, feeling my way around until I reached the front door.
After unlocking the deadbolt I leaned against the doorway and cursed myself for going to bed so late before heading back to my bedroom.
Granted, he didn’t call on a regular basis and I sure as hell wasn’t going to sit around and wait for him but tonight...I was exhausted.
Sliding back into the warmth of my queen sized bed and snuggling into the duvet that covered me, I immediately drifted back to sleep.
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I felt his body sneak under the covers and quickly attach to mine. I lifted my head out of instinct and allowed him to slip him arm under, just so we could be that much closer.
As we melted into one another he whispered into my ear “I’ve missed you.â€￾
Still asleep I answered “me too. Are you okay?â€￾
“I am now.â€￾ He whispered as he placed a kiss on the back of my neck.
“Good.â€￾ Was the last thing that I remember happening until morning.
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I woke to the smell of coffee, stretched and smiled. I loved waking to a fresh pot but unfortunately it only happened when he was here.
Knowing that his visits were always spur of the moment and the length of his stay was never known I forced myself to get up.
Grabbing my silk robe and slipping it on, I made my way to the kitchen.
I found him at the island, with his back to me, sipping his coffee and reading the paper.
“Anything exciting happening in the world?â€￾ I asked as I walked past him and to the coffeepot.
“Only here in Chicago, seems like Brooklyn finally decided to get out if bed.â€￾
As if rehearsed he passed my the milk, then the sugar, just as I needed it.
I looked over at him “do you have to call me that?â€￾
“It’s your name.â€￾ He quickly defended.
“You are the only one that calls me that.â€￾
“That’s why I like it...Brooklyn.â€￾
I rolled my eyes and leaned towards him “I’m glad your here.â€￾
Placing his coffee on the counter he pulled me into his arms “so am I, I missed you.â€￾
“Yeah, that’s what they all say. As they leave.â€￾ I teased.
“Come on, I don’t have to be back until morning.â€￾
“It’s 2 o’clock already.â€￾
He looked at his Rolex “sh**, time flies.â€￾
I pulled away and walked into the living room and sat on the couch. Only to have him follow me a moment later.
“When do you have to leave?â€￾ I asked.
“My flight is at midnight. Are you working tomorrow?â€￾
I shook my head. He knew I always called in sick when he was in town. We had so little time together that I would be a fool to waste it working. Besides, I had plenty of time to work between our visits.
Especially as distant as they have become lately.
“What do you want to do today?â€￾ I asked as I brought my cup to my lips and sipped the hot coffee.
“Nothing, I’m tired. Our schedule has been nuts lately.â€￾
“I’ve noticed.â€￾ I shot back.
Knowing exactly what I was getting at he answered “When was the last time you came to see me?â€￾
“I never know where you are! Maybe if you stayed in the same damn place long enough I could find you.â€￾ a smile escaped from me and his furrowed softened.
“Bite me Brooklyn.â€￾
“f*** you!â€￾ I mumbled as I took another sip.
“You wish! Have you heard from Billy lately?â€￾
I smirked “Whatever! I talked to him last week, he’s pretty busy right now.â€￾
He nodded, knowing exactly what he was busy with. While we had been lucky enough to get out of our small town, Billy wasn’t. After years of the three of us dreaming about how we would end up anywhere but Jackson, with his being the strongest, he had stayed.
His father had past the year Billy and I were due to graduate and instead of following me to Orlando as we had planned he stayed behind to help his mother with the family business.
A few years later Billy married his grade school crush Jessie and began a life of his own. His own family and farm not to mention the responsibilities he had over at his mother’s as well.
Although his desire was the greatest to leave, strangely enough he was the only one of us who was genuinely happy with their lives and not searching for more.
“Let’s call him?â€￾
“Sure, how about a nap first?â€￾ he lowered his bottom lip.
Rolling my eyes, I stood up “I only got up cause you were here.â€￾
“I needed a coffee.â€￾ he defended.
“It’s customary to have coffee once you’ve decided that you ‘want’ to be up for the rest of the day!â€￾
“Fine, then don’t join me.â€￾ he whined as I followed him to my bedroom.
“I was the one that wanted to stay in bed. Go sleep on the couch.â€￾ I demanded as I hopped onto the bed and snuggled under the covers, leaving no room for him.
After standing above me for a moment he came crashing down onto the bed and over to me. I giggled knowing that he wouldn’t be able to resist.
“What are you laughing at Brooklyn?â€￾ he asked as he straddled me.
“You Bass, you big loser.â€￾
“Do you know how many girls would like to be in bed with me?â€￾
Lance was never one to have an ego so his statement only made me giggle “Then go find one and get out of my bed!â€￾
“I take offence to that.â€￾ he stated as he hopped off of me and got under the covers.
“Then my job is done, goodnight.â€￾
He kicked me under the covers “Goodnight Brooklyn.â€￾
“Shut up James.â€￾
I looked up over my shoulder and found Lance with his eyes closed and a smile. Before returning to my pillow I kicked him back and then settled in, with a smile on my face as well.

Separate Lives: Chapter 2

Lance, Billy and I have been the best of friends for as long as I can remember. Even back to being tortured and initiated for being the only girl in our little group. I still think eating the worms was when I finally gained their respect...pitiful boys.
Our friendship continued even though Lance had followed his dreams and left us back in Clinton. After graduating and the death of Billy’s father I hung around town for a few months and then decided it was time for me to spread my wings. Initially, I headed to New York. The reasoning...none. I just needed to be out of Clinton and New York was about as adventurous as it got. The Big Apple was great but it’s appeal lost interest in a few months and I went down to Orlando to stay with Lance for awhile.
Orlando was more suited to me, for a year anyway.
My wings had obviously been clipped for too long. I had places to go, so I decided to head up to LA for a little while and try my hand at school.
While moving around, I remained dedicated to my studies, taking math courses everywhere I went and managed to get my Masters and was now teaching Math at USC.
Not glamorous, but I loved it and as long as I was out of Clinton, I was happy.
With distance being a big factor in our friendship the guys and I managed to maintain contact with yearly meetings back home and so on. But as the years went by I found it more and more difficult to get back him. Lance, of course visited frequently which allowed him plenty of time to spend with Billy. Billy and I were left with the telephone. Although Lance and I saw each other more often, Billy and I were able to talk at least once a week.
Lance and I got together as often as we could but still our lives made it difficult. I was on a strict Monday-Friday job, while his was too difficult to predict, so we stole moments here and there.
Moments that usually involved sleep. We had discovered that when times were tough, and our lives were getting the better of us that the only remedy was each other. The comfort of each other’s arms, being able to remember who we were and where we came from was something that only we could give each other.
Now, it would be easy to jump to the conclusion that we had a sexual relationship but in fact it was strictly platonic. It always had been, despite a friendly game of spin the bottle in high school and that was just experimental.
The three of us had set aside next weekend to get together to celebrate my birthday, but it still seemed like an eternity away.
Driving home from class, I decided that I needed to touch base and after checking his schedule I called the airport and headed straight there. After all, it was Friday and as he reminded me a few weeks ago, it had been awhile since I had been out to see him.
It was midnight when the plane landed and I headed straight for the payphones. After dialing the familiar digits I smiled and waited.
“Hello.â€￾ I giggled at how groggy he sounded.
“Hey.â€￾
“Brook, what’s up?â€￾
If it had been anyone else I would have been insulted. But the truth is Lance and I barely ever talked on the phone, except when we wanted to see each other.
“Are you busy?â€￾
“Not unless you call sleeping busy?â€￾ he chuckled.
“Up for company?â€￾ I asked, knowing he’d say yes.
“Yeah, your here? In Chicago?â€￾
“I’ll be there in about 45 minutes.â€￾
“Okay, I’ll send Tiny down to meet you.â€￾
I hung up and made my way out to the cabs that were waiting.
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Tiny met me down in the lobby and escorted me up to the floor the guys were on. Lance had given him his extra key so I slipped the card into the door and made my way in. Fortunately for me, I had met Lance at this hotel before. I was just hoping the room was the same because seeing how dark it was I was definitely going to kill myself before I made it to the bed.
I snuck into the washroom and took out the toothbrush that I had bought at the airport and after cleaning up I walked back into the room and felt my way around for the dresser. Once I stumbled into it I reached for the top drawer and took out a t-shirt, knowing that was where it would be and slowly slid my skirt and then top off. As I slipped the large shirt over my head I felt something behind me and then a hand reach over my mouth, muffling the scream that tried to escape.
As I fought my way out of his grip I screamed “YOU ASS!!â€￾
His laughter was uncontrollable as he ran to the light switch “Damn, your so jumpy!â€￾
“Screw you! You scared the hell out of me!â€￾ I pouted and walked over to the door.
“Where you going?â€￾ he asked, a little stunned when he realized the direction I was headed.
“I’m going to sleep with one of the other guys. You suck!â€￾
Grabbing a hold of my waist and pulling me back into the room and to the bed, he sat down and pulled me onto his lap “Aw baby, don’t be that way. I was just playin’.â€￾
I moved myself from his lap and went to the head of the bed and pulled down the covers.
Victorious he went to turn the light off and then jumped onto the bed.
“Lance! Josh won’t mind if I go and sleep with him!â€￾ I warned.
“You sure are getting b****y in your old age.â€￾
I moved to get up and he pulled me back down, “I’m sorry,â€￾ he repeated as he bit at my neck.
“Your a pain!â€￾ I giggled, unable to stay mad at him for too long.
“I missed you.â€￾
“I missed you too, loser! Go to bed.â€￾
“Yes boss!â€￾ he teased.
“It’s about damn time you realize it.â€￾
A little chuckle and he snuggled in close.

So...what do you think???
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Postby zozon3 » Mon Nov 24, 2003 9:24 pm

:yay: lance story lol
wanted to say that dont have time to read it tho :lol:

ill edit this later when i read it lol


EDIT:
damn you Tash :no:
havent done my hw yet cuz i wanted to read this lol

i like it a lot :nod:
and thats cute the best friends thing

so theyre just best friends right now right?

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Postby checkers » Mon Nov 24, 2003 11:19 pm

Tash have you showed me this before? it seems strangly familar?


well so far so good.

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Postby tendertoes » Mon Nov 24, 2003 11:33 pm

<span style='color:purple'>Yeah, I actually wrote it awhile ago but I recently played with it a little and now I need some feedback from my fan fic addict friends...he he he!
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Postby AngelOfMusic » Tue Nov 25, 2003 11:56 am

so far i am really liking this. i am a lil confused on their relationship. are they friends, friends with benefits, dating... or maybe we arent suppose to know yet............. all i do know is that i WANT MORE!!!!!

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Tue Nov 25, 2003 4:16 pm

Tash I love it already!!! that lucky lucky girl...getting to sleep in the same bed as Lance...and Brooklyn is the cutest name!! I never heard of it before as a name but I always thought that it would make a cute name so a major plus :nod: I'm still trying to figure out if they are friends or friends with benefits but i'm sure we'll get to that soon enough MORE PLEASE!?!??!

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Tue Nov 25, 2003 4:35 pm

posh and becks have a son named brooklyn that was the first time i had heard that as a name. i really love it! i was sooooo pissed when that move sugar and spice had a chick named kansas bc that was what i was going to name my daughter!!!!!! :angry:

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Postby musiclova67 » Tue Nov 25, 2003 6:43 pm

so far, so good, Tash. I love the way the two main characters interact. It's so cute. More, more, more! ;)

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Postby tendertoes » Tue Nov 25, 2003 9:49 pm

<span style='color:purple'>Thanks guys...your all right...you aren't supposed to know yet...I had to keep you reading!!
lol

Here's the next chapter...

Separate Lives: Chapter 2

Lance, Billy and I have been the best of friends for as long as I can remember. Even back to being tortured and initiated for being the only girl in our little group. I still think eating the worms was when I finally gained their respect...pitiful boys.
Our friendship continued even though Lance had followed his dreams and left us back in Clinton. After graduating and the death of Billy’s father I hung around town for a few months and then decided it was time for me to spread my wings. Initially, I headed to New York. The reasoning...none. I just needed to be out of Clinton and New York was about as adventurous as it got. The Big Apple was great but it’s appeal lost interest in a few months and I went down to Orlando to stay with Lance for awhile.
Orlando was more suited to me, for a year anyway.
My wings had obviously been clipped for too long. I had places to go, so I decided to head up to LA for a little while and try my hand at school.
While moving around, I remained dedicated to my studies, taking math courses everywhere I went and managed to get my Masters and was now teaching Math at USC.
Not glamorous, but I loved it and as long as I was out of Clinton, I was happy.
With distance being a big factor in our friendship the guys and I managed to maintain contact with yearly meetings back home and so on. But as the years went by I found it more and more difficult to get back him. Lance, of course visited frequently which allowed him plenty of time to spend with Billy. Billy and I were left with the telephone. Although Lance and I saw each other more often, Billy and I were able to talk at least once a week.
Lance and I got together as often as we could but still our lives made it difficult. I was on a strict Monday-Friday job, while his was too difficult to predict, so we stole moments here and there.
Moments that usually involved sleep. We had discovered that when times were tough, and our lives were getting the better of us that the only remedy was each other. The comfort of each other’s arms, being able to remember who we were and where we came from was something that only we could give each other.
Now, it would be easy to jump to the conclusion that we had a sexual relationship but in fact it was strictly platonic. It always had been, despite a friendly game of spin the bottle in high school and that was just experimental.
The three of us had set aside next weekend to get together to celebrate my birthday, but it still seemed like an eternity away.
Driving home from class, I decided that I needed to touch base and after checking his schedule I called the airport and headed straight there. After all, it was Friday and as he reminded me a few weeks ago, it had been awhile since I had been out to see him.
It was midnight when the plane landed and I headed straight for the payphones. After dialing the familiar digits I smiled and waited.
“Hello.â€￾ I giggled at how groggy he sounded.
“Hey.â€￾
“Brook, what’s up?â€￾
If it had been anyone else I would have been insulted. But the truth is Lance and I barely ever talked on the phone, except when we wanted to see each other.
“Are you busy?â€￾
“Not unless you call sleeping busy?â€￾ he chuckled.
“Up for company?â€￾ I asked, knowing he’d say yes.
“Yeah, your here? In Chicago?â€￾
“I’ll be there in about 45 minutes.â€￾
“Okay, I’ll send Tiny down to meet you.â€￾
I hung up and made my way out to the cabs that were waiting.
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Tiny met me down in the lobby and escorted me up to the floor the guys were on. Lance had given him his extra key so I slipped the card into the door and made my way in. Fortunately for me, I had met Lance at this hotel before. I was just hoping the room was the same because seeing how dark it was I was definitely going to kill myself before I made it to the bed.
I snuck into the washroom and took out the toothbrush that I had bought at the airport and after cleaning up I walked back into the room and felt my way around for the dresser. Once I stumbled into it I reached for the top drawer and took out a t-shirt, knowing that was where it would be and slowly slid my skirt and then top off. As I slipped the large shirt over my head I felt something behind me and then a hand reach over my mouth, muffling the scream that tried to escape.
As I fought my way out of his grip I screamed “YOU ASS!!â€￾
His laughter was uncontrollable as he ran to the light switch “Damn, your so jumpy!â€￾
“Screw you! You scared the hell out of me!â€￾ I pouted and walked over to the door.
“Where you going?â€￾ he asked, a little stunned when he realized the direction I was headed.
“I’m going to sleep with one of the other guys. You suck!â€￾
Grabbing a hold of my waist and pulling me back into the room and to the bed, he sat down and pulled me onto his lap “Aw baby, don’t be that way. I was just playin’.â€￾
I moved myself from his lap and went to the head of the bed and pulled down the covers.
Victorious he went to turn the light off and then jumped onto the bed.
“Lance! Josh won’t mind if I go and sleep with him!â€￾ I warned.
“You sure are getting b****y in your old age.â€￾
I moved to get up and he pulled me back down, “I’m sorry,â€￾ he repeated as he bit at my neck.
“Your a pain!â€￾ I giggled, unable to stay mad at him for too long.
“I missed you.â€￾
“I missed you too, loser! Go to bed.â€￾
“Yes boss!â€￾ he teased.
“It’s about damn time you realize it.â€￾
A little chuckle and he snuggled in close.

Alrighty, love all the feedback!
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Postby checkers » Tue Nov 25, 2003 10:56 pm

tasha good chapter, can we have more.


BTW I TOLD MIKE I TOLD MIKE!!

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<span style='color:purple'>thanks...eeeeeeeeeeeekkkkkkkkkkkkk!
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Postby AngelOfMusic » Wed Nov 26, 2003 12:49 pm

girlie you posted the same chapter twice!

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<span style='color:purple'>OMG...I am so sorry!!!
I am such an idiot...lol...here is the third chapter....

Separate Lives: Chapter 3

As I messed around with the stereo I caught myself looking at the clock, again. Time was almost standing still as I drove the familiar 20 minute drive from the airport in Jackson to local bar that we always met up at. I intentionally told the guys that I wasn’t sure which flight I would be on so that they wouldn’t come out and get me. We all wanted to have a few drinks so I figured they could get a head start and I could meet up with them. As I pulled into the gravel parking lot I smiled at the familiar hangout.
‘It never changes’ I thought to myself as I hopped out of the car and adjusted my low rise jeans and pink baby-doll tee. I reached in the back for my jean jacket and went in, excited to finally see my guys.
Walking through the door, I instantly recognized the familiar scent of nicotine and beer and smiled to myself. I was nice to be home.
I waved to a few acquaintances from high school and then made my way to the usual place we sat. I found Billy and Lance with a few women sitting with them and decided I needed a drink before I would be able to handle Lance’s groupies.
“Can I get a little service here?â€￾ I snapped, trying to get the bartenders attention.
He immediately looked up from the customers down at the other end of the bar and smiled as he made his way over “Well, look who’s back!â€￾
“I missed your drinks too damn much Chuckie.â€￾
He smiled “You are the only one that gets away with calling me that.â€￾
I winked “I have that effect on men.â€￾
Chuckling he asked “What can I get ya, Brooke?â€￾
“I’ll take a shot of tequila rose and then a sling to start me off.â€￾
He nodded and began the small talk as he prepared my drinks “Need a little alcohol to deal with the women?â€￾
He handed me my shot and after slamming it back on the bar I nodded “They make me nuts. I figure the alcohol may just save their lives.â€￾
Laughing he poured me another and then handed me my drink “Here, my service to mankind.â€￾
I took the other shot and before walking away I thanked him “Keep it cold Chuckie, I’ll be back.â€￾
As I weaved my way through the girls who had formed a semi-circle, I received a few glares but worked my way in and sat down onto Lance’s lap.
“Hey boys, how are we doing?â€￾
Of course I was then voted ‘most hated’ by the women but enjoyed it nonetheless.
Lance wrapped his arms around me “There ya are Sugar, we were about to send a search party.â€￾
“Yeah, I see you were real concerned.â€￾ I teased as I scanned the four women that remained.
Billy leaned in “You look great baby, I missed ya.â€￾
I gave him a quick peck on the cheek and answered “Liar, I know how much you love this sh**.â€￾
He smiled and took a sip of his beer. With Lance still holding on to my waist I leaned back against him and noticed Justin sitting across the table “Hey, I didn’t even notice you.â€￾
Surprised he answered “Your breaking my heart.â€￾
After the women ‘aw’ out of sadness for his obvious lack of attention I blew him a quick kiss and rolled my eyes “Poor, poor man.â€￾
“So how long have you guys been here?â€￾
Lance slurred “A little bit, a couple hours.â€￾
“You are way ahead of me Bass.â€￾ I chuckled.
I turned to the bar and called out “Chuckie, help me.â€￾
Laughing he called back “I’m on my way hun.â€￾
Everyone looked at me strangely until one of the women, obviously feeling left out spoke “How long are you guys going to be in town?â€￾
I looked at Lance and asked “Yeah Lance, how long?â€￾
He pinched my thigh and answered “A couple of days, we’re not too sure.â€￾
Justin added “We’ll see how things go. We have a birthday party tomorrow night.â€￾
I looked over and smiled, when Lance reached around and looked at his watch “Hey, it’s after midnight! Happy Birthday baby.â€￾
I looked down and sure enough it was 12:30 “I guess it is.â€￾
After the guys said their happy birthdays and gave me a few pecks on the cheek Billy asked “So, what do you want for your birthday Brooke?â€￾
I reached for a piece of my hair and as I wrapped it around my finger I announced, with a great southern drawl “This year, all I really want...is world peace.â€￾
After the laughter died down and the looks of confusion left the face of the women admirers Chuck returned “Here ya go Brooke.â€￾
“Chuckie, how’s Maryanne?â€￾ I asked, questioning about one of my high school friends.
“She’s doing real well, we have another baby coming along in a few months.â€￾
“Another one?â€￾ shouted Billy.
“Damn, isn’t that your fourth?â€￾ asked Lance.
“Our third.â€￾ he laughed, knowing we were just playing with him.
At that point Lance pushed me off his lap and in between him and Billy.
I looked over stunned “What the f*** Lance?â€￾
Smiling he announced “Just trying to protect you sugar! We don’t want you getting too close to Chuck.â€￾
We obviously tried to hold the laughter in as much as possible but Chuck’s comment sent us all over the edge “Good thing Lance, I was ready to breath in her direction.â€￾
Chuck stayed with us a few more minutes and then went back to work. As soon as he was out of ear shot I pinched Lance “Your a sh**!â€￾
He chuckled, knowing exactly what I was talking about “Just looking out for you.â€￾
“Well my sex life is one thing you don’t even need to be thinking about Bass.â€￾
“Poor Brooke, not gettin’ any?â€￾ Billy teased.
I turned to him “Not you too.â€￾
“What? I’m helping, you need a real man Brooke.â€￾
I rolled my eyes “Know any?â€￾
Lance reached for his heart “That hurt Brooklyn.â€￾
“Get over it Bass, it’s not like your Timberlake over there.â€￾ I motioned over to Justin and smiled, knowing that would make Lance crazy.
“You couldn’t handle it anyway!â€￾ he answered.
“You’d be surprised at what I could handle.â€￾
Almost choking on his drink he snapped “Brooklyn!â€￾
“What? I know you want me.â€￾ I teased knowing that couldn’t be farther from the truth.
Justin had found the perfect opportunity to add “She’s a little out of your league Bass.â€￾
“What? She is so not!â€￾ he argued.
The conversation had gotten way out of hand at that point so I decided to end it, I leaned over and nuzzled up against him “I would rock your world country boy.â€￾
Satisfied that I had shocked the hell out of him, I slid over his lap and made my way over to the bar and ordered another round as I listened to the guys tease him.

ok...once again I am so sorry!
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Cute chapter. Loved how she was messin' with him at the end. More, more, more

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Fri Nov 28, 2003 9:18 am

hey aint no thang bay-bay! that was a great chapter- wow that chick is like a master at the art of seduction! sounds like me! :lol: i cant wait to see where this is going to go! more more more more more more more!

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Postby zozon3 » Fri Nov 28, 2003 2:54 pm

lol dont worry about it tash

i really like how this story is workin out :nod:

love it! post more soon :P

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<span style='color:purple'>I am ...I mean she is the master of seduction... :P B)
Anyway, thanks for the feedback!!
Here's the next chapter...

Separate Lives: Chapter 4
Deciding to give Chuck a hand I grabbed the tray with our drinks and returned to the table.
“So, who ordered the beer?â€￾
“I’ll take one pretty lady.â€￾ Answered Billy with a wink.
“No compliments sir, just tips.â€￾ I teased and watched as he reached down into his pocket and threw me a five-dollar bill.
Quickly swiping it up I stuck in in my pocket “Cheap-ass.â€￾
Laughter erupted from the group as I headed to my next victim...Justin. “And you sir, rye and ginger?â€￾
He nodded and replaced the drink with a twenty.
“Hmm, obviously I’m waiting on the wrong damn pop stars.â€￾ I teased.
I handed Lance his Jack and coke and winked. His scantily clad ‘friend’ had taken the seat beside him so I pulled up a chair and sat across the table beside Justin and his ‘friend,’
“Aren’t you going to leave her a tip Scoop?â€￾ Asked Justin with a smirk.
Laughing he took a sip “I can’t believe you guys fell for that one.â€￾
The strange woman leaned over to Lance and asked “so what are you doing later?â€￾
At that point her friend was snuggled right up to Justin, this time she spoke “we should do something.â€￾
Lance answered quickly “were just heading back to my place.â€￾
“Sound fun.â€￾ They shrieked.
I rolled my ayes and stood “I’m going to shoot some pool.â€￾
“The tables are full.â€￾ Billy observed.
“I’ll kick someone off.â€￾ I answered and went over to the tables and threw some money down as I patiently waited my turn.
At that point I was ready for a real game, one that had nothing to do with what girls were playing.
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“Chuckie, how about one more?â€￾ I whined with a smile.
“Sure Brooke, same thing?â€￾
“Definitely.â€￾ I slammed back my shot and looked over to find Lance and Justin somewhere among the woman that had gathered.
I had spent the last two hours shooting pool and chatting with Billy and a few guys that we went to school with. I was definitely having a good time, feeding the competitive side of me as I won but Lance was getting on my nerves. We hadn’t even spoke all night.
I am definitely not one to expect him to hang on my every word, hell when were out we spend most of our time mingling but we haven’t said a word to each other.
Having had enough I grabbed my drink, chugged it down and then headed over to the table and announced “I’m outta here.â€￾
Lance took his eyes of his ‘friend’ at that point “Where you going? We’re almost ready to go.â€￾
“That’s great, goodnight!â€￾ I turned and headed to the door.
I was definitely feeling the effects of the alcohol that I had consumed but I was really pissed and needed to get away from him.
When I reached the door Lance, Billy and Justin had caught up and followed me outside where a cab just happened to be waiting. I ran over to the rental, grabbed my bag and hopped into the cab with the others following behind.
I noticed the two women had ran out after them and stood beside the cab “Were right behind you.â€￾
“Great,â€￾ I mumbled to myself but only Billy caught it.
“Why don’t you stay with Jessie and I?â€￾
Lance immediately spoke up “No way, she always stays with me. Right Brooke?â€￾
I groaned “Well Lance, I don‘t really feel like staying with you and the bimbosâ€￾
“It’s not like that Brooke, come on.â€￾ he pouted.
Justin then chimed in “The bimbos are Tiffany and Heather.â€￾
“Brooklyn...â€￾ Lance continued with a pout.
I sighed and felt Billy give me a nudge.
‘That damn pout.’
As Billy jumped out of the cab he leaned in and gave me a peck on the cheek “Play nice Brooke.â€￾
“Screw you Billy!â€￾
Upon arriving at the house I immediately brought my bags upstairs into Lance’s room, seeing as it’s where I always stay when I stayed over. After changing into a pair of Juicy sweats I headed back down to find everyone sitting in the living room with the stereo on low.
A drink awaited me, I quickly scooped it up and took a sip. Listening to the giggling had gotten to me about thirty seconds later, so I excused myself and went out onto the front porch.
I sat there wondering how long it would take me to walk to Billy’s for half an hour before Justin and Tiffany came out to meet the cab that had just pulled up the drive.
A quick wave and she was off and Justin headed in my direction “What’s up Brooke?â€￾
I shrugged “Not much J, you?â€￾ I removed my feet from the chair in front of me and he sat down.
“You planning on staying out here a while?â€￾
“Got any better ideas?â€￾ I asked sarcastically.
He shook his head and shrugged “This’ll work.â€￾ and he disappeared back into the house.
A few minutes later he returned juggling a glass, the bottle of Jack and a bottle of coke.
“How about I fix you a drink?â€￾
I smiled “Now your talking, hit me.â€￾ I handed him my glass and he filled it up.
As the Jack poured and our conversation flowed I looked down at my watch and realized we had been out there chatting for about an hour.
“Damn J, I have to go to bed.â€￾
“Aw, come on. I was thinking about watching a movie.â€￾
I stood up and walked inside “Not tonight hun, I’m exhausted.â€￾
“Suit yourself, you know where I’ll be if you change your mind.â€￾
“Thanks, night.â€￾
I walked up the stairs, convinced that I would be asleep before even hitting the bed. Without thinking I walked into the bedroom, finding not only Lance but Heather.
I quickly backed up and closed the door.
I stood there, questioning whether I had in fact saw what I did. When Lance opened the door almost barreling into me “BROOKE.â€￾
“Yeah,â€￾ I managed to say in a whisper.
Lance had a sheet wrapped loosely around his waist and was frantically searching for words.
“Brooke, I...â€￾
I raised my hand and mumbled “sorry.â€￾ as I turned and headed down the stairs as quickly as possible.
I heard Lance return to the bedroom and announce that I would be alright, and after deciding not to go up and slap him I headed to the theatre to watch a movie with Justin.


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Postby megzrsa » Sat Nov 29, 2003 10:06 am

im luving this story apart form the last chapter, lance tut tut, its ur brookes bday dont bring a slut back to the house

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Postby zozon3 » Sat Nov 29, 2003 12:11 pm

guys :no:

they just think with their dick

good for Justin to send the girl home tho :nod:

post more :D

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Sat Nov 29, 2003 1:00 pm

:jawdrop: Lance Lance Lance :no: shame on you boy....Hey my names in this story :party: and I'm gettin it on with Lance :rofl: I have a feeling though that Justin and Brooklyn are gonna hook up for some reason...i don't know why i just have this feeling...more please?

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Postby musiclova67 » Sat Nov 29, 2003 2:00 pm

Great chapter. Lance is being such a dick. I woulda slapped him. Tsk, tsk, tsk. More, more, more

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Postby tendertoes » Sat Nov 29, 2003 11:00 pm

<span style='color:purple'>he he he...you guys are getting very good with the feedback...although a few people are missing...cough!
Anyway...major warning with this chapter...it's been awhile since I have written one of these chappies so...be beware...it's...ahem...just read...if you want :ph34r:



Separate Lives: Chapter 5
“Damn it Brooke, you scared the sh** out of me!â€￾ Shouted Justin as I walked into the theatre and jumped onto the chair beside him.
I laughed as I tried to put the last few minutes behind me “Don’t be such a baby.â€￾
“Want some?â€￾ He handed over a bowl of popcorn.
“Thanks, what are we watching?â€￾ I asked as I grabbed a handful.
“I just turned the TV on and look what’s on.â€￾
I looked up and saw On the Line was on “Change the damn channel J.â€￾
He began channel surfing and asked “Thought you were going to sleep?â€￾
“Yeah, so did I?â€￾
“Should I ask?â€￾
“Don’t you already know?â€￾
“Kind of, where you going to sleep?â€￾
“Are you offering?â€￾ I teased.
“Are you accepting?â€￾ He teased right back.
“You can’t answer a question with a question!â€￾
“Why not?â€￾
“Shut up.â€￾ I shouted through clenched teeth.
“Make me!â€￾ He challenged.
Without thinking I leaned over and kissed him. The heat from his lips startled me into realizing what exactly I was doing and I stopped and stared.
“Now shut up!â€￾ I finished and then looked back to the television.
“You just kissed me.â€￾
“No kidding Einstein.â€￾ I noticed him smirking from the corner of my eye and fought a smile.
“You really are a pain in the ass Brooklyn.â€￾ He chuckled.
“It’s Brooke.â€￾
“Whatever, you still a pain in the ass.â€￾
“At least I can kiss.â€￾
He turned and faced me “Are you implying that I don’tâ€￾
“Big words Justin, be careful.â€￾
“Are you?â€￾
I shrugged “Let’s just say, that I’m a little disappointed considering you are ‘Justin Timberlake.’â€￾
He leaned over and kissed me, only this time we were both somewhat prepared. The kiss began slow and sensuous as his lips lightly touched mine. After a moment he pulled away and watched for my reaction.
All I could do was lick my lips, as I anticipated his next move.
Taking that as my answer he leaned in again, but this time he lips quickly crashed onto mine. A little breathless at first, as I didn’t anticipate such a response I quickly caught up, as we both became lost in the moment.
After a moment I pulled away and looked at him, the lust in his eyes was almost enough to pull him to me but instead I decided to have a little fun.
I slowly crawled onto his chair and straddled him “hi.â€￾
He ran his hands along my thighs and then reached behind me and pulled me into him.
Losing balance I fell into him and as our mouths met he whispered “I want you.â€￾
I pulled my lips from his, leaving him wanting more and whispered into his ear “Then take me.â€￾
Looking as if her were about to ask me something I raised a finger to his mouth silencing him. At that point I didn’t want something he said to ruin this. I wasn’t the typical one nightstand kind but something about the electricity between us, drew me to him. I couldn’t stop at that point, nor did I want too.
I ran my tongue along his neckline enjoying the shudder that shot through his body at the touch of my soft, sweet tongue
Lifting my face to his he gently pressed his lips to mine. Opening them with his tongue before slowly sliding it into my mouth. I melted into his kiss and gripped his body to mine as I ran my hands down the length of his tight body.
Grabbing the hem of my shirt, he slowly pulled it up and slid it off. As he watched my face for emotion.
He gazed longingly at the black, satin bra that covered my smooth, supple breasts and let out a sigh of pleasure
I smiled and ran my hands along his chest and then down to his belt, giving it a gentle tug.
He flashed his million-dollar smile, which of course made me giggle as I undid his belt.
“What’s so funny?â€￾
“You.â€￾ I answered honestly, as I lowered his zipper and undid the button that was separating us.
“Me, why me?â€￾
I shrugged and leaned forward nipping at his earlobe “Stop talking.â€￾
He chuckled “why; cause I might remember how pissed Lance is going to be at me?â€￾
Tugging on his earlobe I answered “What about how pissed I’ll be if you stop?â€￾
“There is no way in hell I’m stopping, I’ve been thinking about this all night!â€￾
I pushed him away as his mouth searched for mine “What do you mean?â€￾
Moving against my hands he answers “I’ve wanted you for as long as I can remember, but you were off limits.â€￾
I pushed a little harder “off limits?â€￾
“Lance...â€￾
I stopped him as I reached down and lowered his pants “Forget him.â€￾ I demanded.
“Forgotten...â€￾ he licked his way down my neck and brought his hands to my breasts, fumbling with the fabric. A slight groan and he decided to remove the bra that was giving his a hard time. Linking his fingers in the straps he slid it down my arms, watching in anticipation to see what lies beneath the material.
First tracing my breasts lightly with his fingertips and then replacing them with his mouth. I gasped as I felt a little nibble on your nipple, but moan with delight as he continues.
As he continued his assault on my breasts I reached down and released him from the confines of his pants.
A sigh of relief escaped his mouth once free, which gave me an idea.
Slowly sliding down his body, I bit at my bottom lip and watched as I removed his pants entirely and had his right where I wanted him...helpless.
He watched me for a moment before I touched him and then had to close his eyes. His head fell back onto the chair as I lowered my lips around the tip of his penis. Slowly dragging my tongue along his length, returning to the tip and swirling my tongue around lightly. His breathing quickly became heavy and jagged, as his strong hands grasped my shoulders.
“God baby,â€￾ he groaned, which to me indicated that it was time to stop. Kissing my way back up his body I positioned myself in front of him and licked my lips.
Slowly opening his eyes he whispered “that’s not nice.â€￾
I winked and he stood, pulling me up to him. As his lips devoured mine he lowered his hands to my waist. Reaching down, he pulled me up securely into his arms causing me to let out a moan as our bodies met with force.
He walked around the chairs and over to the side table that stood at the window and sat me down on it.
Running his fingertips along my thighs he smiled until he grabbed a piece of my jogging pants “these have got to go.â€￾
I nodded and hopped off of the table and allowed him to take them down, moving his body along mine as he did. Resting on one knee he helped me step out of them and then ran his fingers along the band of my thongs.
“These are nice.â€￾ He commented.
“I’m glad you like them.â€￾ I answered as I bit my lip in anticipation.
“But I think I’ll like them better...off.â€￾
I nodded and allowed him to slide the skimpy material down my legs and then stepped out of them.
“Much better.â€￾ He smiled appreciatively.
Staring into his eyes, anticipation making me crazy I couldn’t find the words. All I could do was wait for this amazing man, wait for him to touch me. It was making me insane and he knew it!
Staring into my eyes he took a hold of my legs and pushed me back against he table as he began kissing and licking my inner thighs. My breath catching in my throat at the sight of him as he continues making his way between my legs.
Throwing my head back in ecstasy, I allowed the feelings to overtake me as I reached and grabbed onto his shoulders.




Working me into a frenzy with his mouth and fingers, I could feel my body begin to lose control and so could he because that was when he stopped.
I reached for him; ready to beg when I noticed the smile “you are so not nice.â€￾
He winked “I can’t wait any longer, I need to be inside you now, Brooke!â€￾
Who was I to argue with that?
He stood and pushed his body against mine. Realizing that he still had his shirt on I reached down to the hem and gave it a tug “Do we need this?â€￾
Not saying a word he pulled it over his head and revealed his muscular body. Running my fingers along his chest I leaned forward and met his mouth. Needing him to be closer I wrapped my legs around his waist pulled him closer and shifted lower to allow easier access.
He wanted me and I wanted him, enough bullsh**.
His strong hands held me up as he thrusts inside of me quick and intensely. Losing ourselves into each other, we found our way...together.
As I felt my orgasm reach its peak I kissed him, moaning into his mouth “Oh Justin,“
As if on cue he released inside me and held me close to him breathing into my ear “Damn Brooke...â€￾
Slowly setting me down, I had difficulties maintaining my balance, as did he.
Leaning into each other for support, trying to catch our breath he whispered “please tell me we can do that again?â€￾
At that moment he lifted me and brought me to the chair and we snuggled in, as he wrapped a blanket around us.

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Postby zozon3 » Sun Nov 30, 2003 12:48 am

I think...


:lol:

damn tash! that was good!
like really good it was very uhum descriptive :nod: :lol:

and yeah nookie never goes wrong! lol

but it was written very very well tash, i mean that
so yeah dont hesitate ( i mean at all ) to write more chapters like this :rofl:

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Postby megzrsa » Sun Nov 30, 2003 10:56 am

:jawdrop: damn! gr8 chapter :lol:

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Postby musiclova67 » Sun Nov 30, 2003 2:52 pm

Awesome chapter Tash. Anything inspire this chapter?? LOL. :P No need for you to answer that. :P Well, hurry up and get the next chapter done. More, more, more

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<span style='color:purple'>Oh Vane...you know me too well!!! B) </span>

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Mon Dec 01, 2003 2:35 pm

oh my god, that is all i can say oh my god. i was in some serious need of some nookie and boy did i come to the right place! that was great but i have a feeling a sh** storm is a comin'! more!!!

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Postby tendertoes » Mon Dec 01, 2003 7:57 pm

<span style='color:purple'>Love the feedback...but need more! I apologize that this chapter isn't as graphic as the last but I'm sure you understand that I need some time to...ahem...plan things out!!

Separate Lives: Chapter 6

I woke to a stiff neck and enough banging to warrant a house being built. Initially I thought the banging was my head only to find out that Lance was indeed awake.
My proof, was when he barged into the room “Brooke, are you...â€￾
Immediately Justin and I turned and came face to face with a very pissed off Lance.
Before either of us could speak he began “What the f*** Timberlake?â€￾
Justin and I scrambled to get up and remain somewhat covered as we fought for covers. Justin walked over to Lance “Just calm down man.â€￾
“f*** you!â€￾ he turned his attention to me “What the hell are you doing Brooke?â€￾
“It’s none of your business.â€￾
“What, how can you say that?â€￾
“Easy, it isn’t! Where’s your bimbo anyway?â€￾ I asked, reminding him off his escapade.
“That is so different?â€￾ he defended.
“It is not!â€￾ Justin and I both shot back.
“She’s my best friend Justin.â€￾ he said, motioning toward me.
“So what? Why should that matter?â€￾ asked Justin.
“Brooklyn, what are you doing?â€￾ he walked over, completely ignoring Justin’s question.
“Get a grip Lance, I’m not marrying him! We just had sex.â€￾
He ran his fingers through his hair “Oh, well that’s a different story.â€￾ he shouted.
Pushing past him I shouted “Screw you .â€￾
I left the theatre and quickly made my way up to Lance’s bedroom to retrieve my things. Fortunately there was no sign of what’s her name so I quickly threw on a pair of sweats, determined to get out before I saw Lance again.
Walking out if the bedroom, I banged straight into him “Where are you going?â€￾
“What? Do you actually expect me to stay here?â€￾
“I know it’s not your fault Brooke. Justin is always...â€￾
“Wait a minute. First of all you have no idea what happened or how it happened. Second of all it is none of your damn business.â€￾
“I can’t believe you just f***ed him.â€￾ he shouted.
“For someone who holds sex as such a valuable thing, you sure didn’t think about that when you were f***ing that bimbo’s brains out!â€￾ I shouted and then stormed out of the room hitting Justin on the way out.
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While sitting at Billy’s kitchen table, chatting with him and Jessie we heard a knock at the back screen door. Looking over, I noticed Justin standing there, looking very uncomfortable.
I beat Billy to get up and assured him with a nod that I wanted to speak with him.
Opening the screen door Justin immediately spoke “Damn it Brooke, I am so sorry!â€￾
I nodded and grabbed his hand, leading him to the swing set for a little more privacy.
Sitting down on a swing I responded “It’s not your fault Justin. Lance overreacted.â€￾
“He’s freaking out!â€￾
“Well, he’ll just have to get over it.â€￾
“I don’t think it’ll be that easy.â€￾
“Well, then he’ll have to work it out then! This is just bullsh**!â€￾
Justin sat on the swing beside me “Your not going to go and talk to him?â€￾
I stared at him in disbelief “Are you kidding? Of course not, I...we did nothing wrong!â€￾
“I know that but...â€￾
“But nothing Justin, if Lance wants to discuss it he can hop off of his pedestal and come on over.â€￾ I got up and walked back to the house when Justin came jogging up.
“Well, what about what happened?â€￾
“I’m leaving in a few hours.â€￾
“Oh, well maybe I can call you when I’m in town?â€￾
“Sure, I’m in the book.â€￾
Putting his hands in his front pockets he rolled back on his heels “I’m sorry things happened the way they did.â€￾
“I know, me too.â€￾ I leaned over placed a kiss on his cheek “I don’t regret what happened.â€￾
“It was pretty good.â€￾ he shrugged.
Opening the door to the house I answered “Yes, I was! See ya popstar!â€￾
Justin chuckled and turned as I closed the door behind me.

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Postby IDIDTHEJRT » Mon Dec 01, 2003 9:15 pm

ok I'm gonna read it soon I promise lol

I'm so sorry I've just been really really busy, finals are next week and i have like 4 papers and projects due this week and like 2 tests eww I forgot about those lol ok so I will read it soon I promise :)

I can't wait though I'm sure it's wonderful... they always are

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Postby tendertoes » Mon Dec 01, 2003 9:17 pm

<span style='color:purple'>Aww Sarah :hug: :blowkiss:
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Postby zozon3 » Mon Dec 01, 2003 11:11 pm

eek whats gonna happen

ahh see now i want her to end up with justin

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im such a sucker i get pulled into these storylines lol

great chap tash cant wait for the next one!

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Tue Dec 02, 2003 11:26 am

OK lance needs to calm the hell down- you cant hate a girl for getting hers when he is getting his upstairs!! besides it sounds like justin actually really likes her- there in lies the problem- because obviously lance cares deeply for her too. man i cant wait to see what happens next!

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Postby megzrsa » Tue Dec 02, 2003 2:26 pm

yeah i actually think justin does like her for real, but what about lance? damn hypocrit! but maybe he wants more from brooke:unsure:
lets see what happens

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Tue Dec 02, 2003 4:51 pm

:jawdrop: I am finially caught up and i must say i loved that nookie chapter :nod: I was just yeah nuff said

I want Justin and Brooke to get together...cuz J seems to be really into her and Lance he just needs to make up his mind! More please!

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<span style='color:purple'>Thanks folks...here's the next chapter...

Separate Lives: Chapter 7

School came and went and before I knew it, I had the summer off and decided to teach a refresher class off campus to an accounting firm.
I was working five days a week but only for two hours a day, which was perfect except when I had late night company.
Fortunately, I only received one phone call in early July. The phone ringing at 4 am startled me as it had been so long. I hadn’t heard from Lance since I left his place that morning. We were both stubborn and I often questioned whether we would ever talk again.
“Hello.â€￾ I mumbled into the phone, scared that it could be Lance.
“Hey sugar.â€￾ ‘It was him.’
“Lance, is that you?â€￾
“Do you always have men calling you at all hours of the night?â€￾ ‘Here we go!’
“Are you drunk?â€￾
“Me, hell no! Only had one...or...ten.â€￾ he chuckled into the phone.
“Where are you?â€￾
“Close by, can I come over? Or are you busy?â€￾
“At 4 am? I think my schedules free.â€￾ ‘idiot’
I moved through the apartment quickly and unlocked the deadbolt before running back to the comfort of my bed.
I heard him come in 5minutes later but pretended to be asleep as he stumbled through the room. I was still pissed but all he needed was to be drunk in the city and get into trouble. Even though I was pissed I didn’t want him to get hurt.
As he snuggled into me he whispered “I miss you Brooke.â€￾
I fought the tears and thought ‘I miss you too, you big dummy.â€￾
Immediately after I fell asleep.
It seemed I had just gotten to sleep when my alarm rang the next morning. I had an hour before I had to get to class and as much as I wanted to stay in bed with Lance all day, I knew it would be better not to see him at that point.
I got ready as quickly as I could and headed out the door, leaving Lance asleep in my bed.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~When I returned later that day after, going shopping and killing a few hours Lance had left. On the side of my pillow I found a note

Brooklyn,
I’ve come to realize that coming over last night probably wasn’t the very best idea. I’m sorry that I put you on the spot .
I miss you. I realize that things aren’t the same anymore between us and I know you feel the same way. Your leaving answered that. As much as I miss...us. I guess I have to realize that things have changed.
BTW...you have messages.
Lance

I crumpled up the note and threw it across the room when I heard the phone ringing “What?â€￾
“Whoa, hey do you always answer the phone like that?â€￾
“Who is this?â€￾ I snapped, irritated by the intrusion.
“It’s Justin, are you alright?â€￾
“Yeah, I’m fine. Sorry about that.â€￾
“That’s okay. I was calling to see you would like to have dinner tonight. I tried phoning earlier but got the machine.â€￾
I rolled my eyes, realizing what Lance was talking about.
“Sure, I’m getting hungry.â€￾
“How about I pick something up and come over.â€￾
“Sounds good, I’ll see you soon.â€￾ I hung up and went and jumped in the shower.
Justin arrived an hour later with take out from the pizza place down the road. Initially the night went off without a hitch until he mentioned Lance.
“So, I hear Lance was over last night?â€￾ he slipped in before taking a bite of his pizza.
I looked up and noticed a grin “Yeah,â€￾
“How did it go?â€￾
“Fine, why?â€￾
He shrugged “I don’t know, I was just asking.â€￾
I nodded “Well, we never had a chance to talk. I worked this morning.â€￾
Biting into his pizza he watched my face as he chewed. When finished he asked “Are you ok?â€￾
“I’m fine.â€￾
“Just asking cause Lance was kind of upset.â€￾
I got up at that point and grabbed my plate bringing it to the kitchen.
Justin quickly followed but before he could ask another question I turned around and shouted “If you came here for that then you might as well take he door because I don’t want to talk about it anymore!â€￾
He grabbed my arms and pulled me to him “I didn’t come here to talk about Lance. I came to see you, so stop be so damn frustrating and come here.â€￾
His lips crashed against mine and once again I felt the desire in his kiss. A kiss with no emotion involved just lust.
He brought his hands around my waist and down to my ass, lifting me. Wrapping my legs around his waist, he moved through the living room and into my bedroom. He followed me down onto the bed and his excitement made itself known against my thigh.
“Damn, I’ve been wanting to do this since we were together last.â€￾ he whispered into my mouth as he fumbled with the zipper on my jeans.
“Me too.â€￾ I had his pants undone at that point and was inching them down his hips.
Finally undone he lowered them down and positioned himself and entered me.
Allowing myself to adjust for a moment his movements were slow and smooth until I reached down and dug my finger nails into his back. Encouraging, wanting, needing more from him.
He quickly complied, and our movements met each other.
As we neared our climax I gasped at the feelings that were coursing through my body. Pulling him closer to me I demanded “DON‘T...STOP!â€￾
His movements, became faster and harder and before I knew it, I clung to him. His lips crashed to mine and into my mouth he moaned “I’m Gonna...â€￾
At that moment we were both brought over the edge.
After collapsing onto me he whispered into my ear “That was fan-f***in-tastic.â€￾
I giggled “You weren’t too bad either.â€￾
He bit at my neck “You sure are a wonder for the self esteem.â€￾
I pushed him off of me and rolled towards him “I’m not here for your ego Justin.â€￾
“Then what are you here for?â€￾ he teased.
“Actually, this is my place. Why are you here?â€￾
He smiled and shoved at me “I can’t stop thinking about you.â€￾
“Obsession...you might need a doctor.â€￾ I offered, fighting the smile that was trying to escape.
Throwing his head back against the pillows he groaned “Are you always this difficult?â€￾
I sat up and smiled “Yep.â€￾
Pulling me back down he nipped at my ear “Good, I like a challenge.â€￾
We remained in bed for the rest of the evening and said our good-bye’s the following morning as he was needed in New York for a photo shoot. We made no dates, no plans just left it at ‘I’ll talk to you soon.’
Which was perfect for both if us.

Your turn...Tasha!

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Tue Dec 02, 2003 6:10 pm

i wish i had justin as my booty call!!! man now that was just pure enjoyment for the whole family right there! :lol: well maybe not the whole family but siskle,ebert, and :angel: give it :thumbup: :thumbup:

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Postby musiclova67 » Tue Dec 02, 2003 6:31 pm

Great chapter Tash. More, more, more

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Tue Dec 02, 2003 6:33 pm

lucky girl gettin justin for some late night booty call :nod: what i wouldn't give to be her! another fan-f***ing-tastic chapter Tash! lol i never heard that saying before but i love it! lol MORE PLEASE!

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Postby zozon3 » Tue Dec 02, 2003 8:30 pm

hell this girls damn lucky!! :lol:

good chapter tash! :nod:

cant wait for more!

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Postby megzrsa » Wed Dec 03, 2003 3:16 pm

great chapter, yeah that girl is lucky!
But what is she gonna do about lance?

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<span style='color:purple'>Once again...thanks for the feedback!


Separate Lives: Chapter 8

Before I knew it the holidays had managed to sneak up and I was faced with some major decisions. I have spent the holidays with Lance for as long as I can remember. I stayed with Lance and then we both went and stayed with Billy. It was an unwritten plan.
So, now what was I going to do? I knew Lance’s family would be upset if I didn’t show up and would need a legitimate excuse and I don’t think that sleeping with his best friend would go over too well. SO, that left me with my only other option...call Billy.
I picked up the phone and realized there was no dial tone “Hello?â€￾
“Brooke?â€￾
“Yeah.â€￾ I immediately knew who it was.
“It’s Lance.â€￾
“Hey, how are you?â€￾
“I’m alright, I’m calling about the holidays.â€￾
I giggled “I was just going to call Billy to ask him.â€￾
I heard the familiar chuckle and was relieved “My parents will be devastated if you don’t come.â€￾
“Well, I wouldn’t want to disappoint them.â€￾
“I would be too.â€￾ he offered in a whisper.
“It wouldn’t be the holidays.â€￾
“So it’s a date?â€￾
“I’ll be there, see you next week.â€￾
“I can’t wait, bye Brooke.â€￾
“Bye Lance.â€￾
I hung up the phone and leaned back against the couch ‘maybe things will be alright.’
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Putting the car in car I rested my head on the steering wheel and let out a loud sigh.
“This is never going to work.â€￾
I took a quick peek in the rearview mirror and opened the car door. After grabbing my bag from the back seat I walked up the drive and lightly knocked on the door, part of me hoping the large amount of people wouldn’t be able to hear and I could run...fast!
Sure enough a moment later Diane and Jim opened the door and pulled me in “Brooke, you look wonderful. We’re so glad you could make it.â€￾
Amongst their hugs and the welcomes of the other family members Diane added “When Lance said you might not be able to come this year, we were all prepared to fly out to you.â€￾ she giggled and handed my bag to Jim.
Lance came into the kitchen to see what the commotion was and I was greeted with a smile and a warm hug.
As he held me close he whispered into my ear “I’m so glad you came, I’ve missed you.â€￾
I nodded into his neck, enjoying the feel of being back in his arms and replied “Me too Lance, but we really need to find time to talk.â€￾
“We will baby...sometime.â€￾
As if on cue Stacey and Ford emerged from the den and after a few moments of catching up we went into the den and began our celebration.
It seemed everyone had retired for the evening all at once, leaving Lance and I alone by the fireplace.
A few moments of being uncomfortable and then he eased the tension by speaking “It’s officially Christmas morning, it’s 2 am.â€￾
I looked at my watch “Wow, this evening went quick.â€￾
He nodded and sipped his wine “I’m glad you made it, Christmas wouldn’t have been the same if...â€￾
“I know.â€￾ I smiled and then continued with a shrug “It’s Christmas.â€￾
“Exactly.â€￾
Leaning over to him I allowed him to pull me into his arms and we snuggled by the fire. I’m not sure whether it was the heat from the fire, the alcohol or the feel of being in his arms once again but I had fallen asleep within moments.
We woke to the sound of people trying to be quiet as they snuck past us. Against my better judgment I opened my eyes and found Lance and I still snuggled up by the fire while Jim and Diane tried to sneak by.
I gave Lance a nudge and he responded by pulling me closer and placing a kiss on my forehead as he mumbled “Uh huh.â€￾
I had of course closed my eyes but could feel the stare of Jim and Diane when they heard Lance. Pretending to be asleep I stirred in his arms and he kissed me once again and this time spoke “What’s the matter baby?â€￾
Pinching him under the blanket, that was usually draped across the couch he flinched.
As he jumped forward with his eyes wide open he sat speechless for a moment as he noticed the audience “Good morning.â€￾
I smiled at Jim and Diane, unable to hide from the smirk that was plastered across their faces.
“Good morning kids, would you like some coffee?â€￾
In unison we answered “Yes, please.â€￾
Once out of sight I hopped up and quickly made my way to the stairs to get ready. Running from Jim and Diane but most importantly Lance.


So...still thinking about Justin?????

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Wed Dec 03, 2003 8:13 pm

uh oh :jawdrop: did she just forget about J?!?! How could she forget about someone like him? lol i need more i gotta now what happens now! lol

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Thu Dec 04, 2003 11:08 am

i dont know how i feel about this! i mean i LOVE justin BUT i also LOVE lance- i have to read some more to decide

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Postby megzrsa » Sat Dec 06, 2003 5:32 pm

Does she think of lance like that though? she only fell asleep in his arms
I want her to get with lance but i also want her to get with justin :unsure:

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Postby Hannahjtimberlake » Sun Dec 07, 2003 6:09 am

ooooh its gettin' good - well done Tasha :P

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Postby musiclova67 » Sun Dec 07, 2003 3:15 pm

Great chapter, Tash. More, more, more

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<span style='color:purple'>Hmmmm...wonder what kind of feedback I'll get from this chapter???


Separate Lives: Chapter 9

Exhausted from socializing, opening presents and eating all day Lance and I fell onto the couch with a moan once everyone had left and we were finally alone.
“I am so damn tired.â€￾ he groaned.
All I could manage was an “uh huh.â€￾ as I closed my eyes.
The ringing of his cell woke us from the silence that was so welcome and he nudged me “Want to get that?â€￾
“It’s your phone.â€￾
“Want to get it for me?â€￾ he asked again, with a little more sweetness in his tone.
I groaned and grabbed the phone from the coffee table and threw it onto his lap.
With a sigh he answered “Yeah.â€￾
“Oh hey, Merry Christmas to you too.â€￾
I closed my eyes and listened as he went through a series of almost rehearsed holiday wishes. A few moments later he put the phone on my lap and said “It’s for you.â€￾
“Hello?â€￾
“Hey Brooke, it’s Justin.â€￾
I watched as Lance got up and walked away “Merry Christmas, Justin.â€￾
A few moments later I heard the back door slam and wondered what the hell was happening “Justin, I have to go. Can you call me on my cell tomorrow?â€￾
“Sure, is everything alright?â€￾
“Yeah, I just have to go and see where Lance disappeared too.â€￾
“Before you go, I was thinking maybe we could get together over the next few days?â€￾
“Call me tomorrow and we’ll talk about it ok?â€￾
I hung up and headed through the kitchen, grabbed my coat and went out to find Lance in the back yard.
“You must be freezing?â€￾ I reached for his shoulder and he pulled away.
“What the f*** is going on between the two of you?â€￾ he shouted.
“What?â€￾
“What is going on Brooke?â€￾
“Nothing,â€￾ I hesitated “I’ve seen him once since our getaway.â€￾ I answered referring to the weekend that Justin and I had gotten caught in the theatre at his place.
“He’s no good Brooke.â€￾
“Get over it Lance.â€￾ I rolled my eyes and began to walk back towards the house.
Stopping me he asked “Why does he want to know how long your staying?â€￾
“How the hell should I know? I let him go so I could come and see what you were pouting about?â€￾
“I’m not f***ing pouting Brooklyn. I’m just trying to look out for you.â€￾
“I can look out for myself Lance.â€￾ I snapped back.
“Yeah, by f***ing Justin?â€￾
I closed the distance between us and staring into his eyes I warned “Who I sleep with...is none of ‘YOUR’ business!â€￾
Whether it was the drinks at dinner, the holiday season or the frustration of this heated argument...I’m not really sure. The only thing I do know is that as soon as that last word left my mouth his lips had met mine. Moments later, I realized what exactly was happening but it was to late. The feel of his lips on mine, his hands pulling me into him. I was lost.
I have felt him touch me, hundreds of times but this was so different. His touch burnt through me but instead of trying to run, I melted into him. Longing for more.
I honestly couldn’t say how long we were outside. The cold weather didn’t matter, nothing did. Except he and I.
As the intensity of the kiss slowed, reality began seeping in. As our lips parted, our eyes met and we remained silent, searching for a response from one another.
A dog’s bark brought us back to the moment. Reminded of what just happened, I quickly turned and walked back towards the house.
“Where are you going?â€￾
“I’m going back in. I can’t think out here.â€￾
He quickly followed and before I reached the door he had caught up “We aren’t finished talking about this Brooklyn.â€￾
Ignoring him I opened the door and walked inside “Stop seeing him Brooke.â€￾
“Stay out of it Lance.â€￾ I warned as I threw my coat onto a kitchen chair and stormed off towards the living room.
“I’m trying to help you here.â€￾
“By kissing me?â€￾
“It wasn’t like that...â€￾
“Then what was it like? What the hell are you doing kissing me?â€￾ I shouted.
Without warning his lips crashed onto mine again. Immediately deepening the kiss and pulling me toward him as he backed up against the wall.
I gasped at the feel of his hands on my breasts, but instead of stopping him I allowed myself to bring my hands up and lace them through his hair, tugging gently.
His mouth left mine and his lips trailed down to my neck, stopping when he reached my ear.
Letting out a low groan he pulled me closer into him as he nibbled on my ear lobe.
Unsure of how we had exactly gotten to this point and not really caring I reached down to his chin and brought his face to mine.
Staring into my eyes, I could feel the intensity of the moment, the desire and once I was certain that I had his undivided attention I reached for his hands. Smiling, I led him over to the couch and gently pushed him down.
Once seated, I slowly crawled onto his lap and straddled him. No words were spoken or needed. I traced my fingertips down his chest, stopping when I reached his belt.
I watched his face for any kind of emotion, surprised when I realized that there was more than the lust I was expecting. I just couldn’t put my finger on what it was and analyzing it was the furthest thing from my mind.
I closed my eyes when he brought his arms around my waist and pulled me into him. He quickly took advantage of my low v-neck sweater and brought his lips to my neck.
“I can’t take it anymore. I want to…â€￾ He growled into my ear, sending shivers through my entire body.
Asking permission, by running his tongue along my skin. I answered with a moan, needing him to continue.
I watched as he licked his lips hungrily and instinctively pressed his hips harder against me, causing me to swivel my hips into his.
A moan escapes his lips and I feel his grip tighten around me, until he reaches down and lifts my sweater, exposing my black bra.
My fingers are once again laced in his hair, grasping at the spikes as my head is thrown back, enjoying the feel of his mouth as he continues his assault on my neck.
I lean myself towards him and lean my face to his and in response he removes his lips from my neck. Nose to nose, I snake my tongue out and trace his lips seductively. I pulled away only far enough for him to have a better view of my lips, loving the power I had over him.
That was until his cell rang. I immediately jumped up and off of him, which of course caused him to hop of the couch and mumble something about having to get it before it woke his parents.
I nodded and watched his face as he spoke. Frustration quickly turned to rage as the conversation began. I listened for a moment longer until I realized who it probably was.
His next comment confirmed it.
“f*** you J, it’s none of your damn business!â€￾ he shouted.
I grabbed my shirt and quickly stormed off to the spare bedroom ‘This is bullsh**.’



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Postby zozon3 » Sun Dec 07, 2003 9:23 pm

ahhhh i dont know lol
i like justin in this story for once haha
i dunno what to do about Lance

girl youre confusing the hell outta me :lol:

for some reason i keep thinkin lance is shorter than brooke by a foot :blink:
lol im just weird

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Postby tendertoes » Sun Dec 07, 2003 9:33 pm

<span style='color:purple'>LMAO ZOe...you kill me!! He is just a little taller then her...does that help??

LOL..thanks for the feedback!!</span>

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Sun Dec 07, 2003 9:59 pm

:jawdrop: HOLY CRAP i don't know what to think now...Justin...Lance....Justin....Lance Ahhh i'm so torn between the two! I NEED MORE!!


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