The Evil Inside

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Postby checkers » Sat Jan 03, 2004 3:59 pm

Ok ladies here is the first chapter in the long anticipated sequal to Protect...this Story will be more graphic then Protect...it will go into detail alot and have more sistuations. So to be forwarned...this story might scare the pants off of you. I hope you enjoy it as much as you did Protect.

<span style='color:red'>The Evil Inside
Sequal to Protect
Kristen McCann
10/5/03



5 in the morning his phone rang. He fumbled for a bit, haven been awaken only 2 hours after falling asleep after a stressful day. When the phone was in his hands, his only thought were to kill the person on the other line.
“Hmmloo.â€￾
“Josh, its Karen.â€￾
He sat straight up in bed. He had not talked to Karen in 6 months.
“Where are you.â€￾ He asked totally awake now, Pushing the blankets off his legs.
“In LA, I just wanted to hear your voice.â€￾
“Call more often.â€￾ He muttered reaching for his jeans. “Where are you in LA.â€￾
“Never mind that. Look, I think I found out something. Something bad.â€￾
“What are you talking about.
“I have been doing this article about Pornogphy, and I found out something that scares me to death.â€￾
“What you can tell me.â€￾ He said hopping around to get his pants on.
“No, I just wanted to say I was sorry.â€￾
“Are you at the condo.â€￾
“JOSH, promise me you will not come out here. PROMISE.â€￾
“Karen….KAREN.â€￾ The phone went dead in his hands. He looked at it and then sat down on the bed. He looked at the clock. 5:10 in the morning. He knew better then to do what he was thinking and jump a plane and head to LA to try to find her.
That would have to wait till morning so he could take Melissa with him.
Missy Korman pulled on her sneakers and looked inside the bathroom door. She could hear her boyfriend of a year Justin singing in the shower. She checked the clock and pulled out her cell phone to make sure that all the gaurds were up and ready for the day. Once her job was finished for the moment, she went into the hall, to assume her other job, making sure that every NSYNC member was up and running. As she passed by there doors, she knocked heavly on them, not really stopping, because all of them knew that knock, 3 short knocks then a bang. JC opened his door before she even got to it, grabbing her arm and pulling her inside.
“Can I help you?â€￾ She said smirking at him. Her grin dropped when she saw the exusted look on his face.
“Missy, sweetie, sugar pie.â€￾
“Cut the sh**, what did you do now?’
He sat on the bed and ran his hands through his hair. “I got a call from Karen this morning.â€￾
“That b**** who dumped you last fall?â€￾
“Don’t call her a b**** Missy, It’s not fair, we never heard her side of the story.â€￾
“Her side. She left you a f***ing note, there was no side, she was a pansy.â€￾
“I think she might be in trouble.â€￾
Missy looked up. “What do you mean trouble?â€￾
“She said that she was doing this whole article about porn and she found out something that she was scared of. She is LA right now.â€￾
“Porn is scary, can you be more spefic?â€￾
“No she wouldn’t tell me, just made me promise that I would not go to LA and try to find her.â€￾
Missy looked over her shoulder at the closed door, “And let me guess, you want me to come along and help you find her?â€￾
“How did you ever guess.â€￾
“Old cops intuition . ya’ll do have a gig in LA next week, That is about the soonest you can get there, but I can call the detectives beruo there and have them keep a lookie for her, put out an APB on her. I will fax them data and recent photo, unless she has a criminal record?â€￾ She looked at JC eyebrows raised.
“I know you didn’t like her Missy, but she was a good person.â€￾
“You think what you want I will think what I want.â€￾ She said turning around heading for the door. “By the way, I will need the most recent photo you have of her.â€￾


“Yes I understand fully Dect Richerson, Yes I am that Melissa Korman. Why thank you, now, JC said that she was working on something big, a story about porn, now this is LA we are talking about, that can mean a lot of things. She is some kind of reporter from what I remember of her. I will be in La next week because Nsync has a concert at the Pavilion. Of course I would be willing to help.â€￾
Justin looked up from the magazine he was reading and stared at his girlfriend. What was she getting herself into now?
“Yes an APB is necessary… you have to be kidding me sir. Do you seriously want it to go to the press that the LAPD was not willing to put out an APB to help poor old JC Chasez find his missing and presumed in trouble x girlfriend. Don’t underestimate my sneakiness.â€￾
Justin threw his magazine across the room and flopped backwards on the bed. Lacing his hands behind his head, staring at the ceiling, Listing to his girlfriend get herself into a potentially dangerous situation was not one of his favorite things. He was lucky enough that she quit her job as a Jersey detective to be with him. She had saved his life once, something that he could never be able to express his gratitude for, but he would be damned if he was going to let her get hurt by working police again.
How did he know that it would be dangerous? Hell Karen was dangerous. She had the habit of getting herself and anyone around her into trouble with her job. She wanted to be an investigative reporter, but as far as she could go was tabloid work. In fact, that’s how she met JC. She was writing a see all story on Nsync. She wormed her way into the group by posing as a wardrobe assistant. She fell in love with JC though, and told her boss to shove it. They lived happy for 6 months, then she just split, not even leaving a note. A month after that, a piece in the Rolling Stones caught JC’s eye…It was the all see that Karen was gonna write, but different. It listed all there good points, not the embarrassing things that she defently could have written about. JC got a letter from her, saying that the article was her goodbye to him and that she loved him. JC was crushed. He was just now coming around and she had to call. And now his Melissa was involved.
As far as Justin was concerned, that was the final draw.
“Missy?â€￾
“Ya baby.â€￾ Missy had finally got off the phone and walked over to the bed. She climbed up on Justin and straddled him. He smiled up at her and rotated his hips. She giggled and rolled off him, laying next to him and putting her head on his chest.
“Justin.â€￾ She said rubbing his chest. “I know you are not happy about his but you are gonna have to live with it.â€￾
“Aww Missy.â€￾ Justin tried to roll away from her, but she jumped on him again.â€￾
“Don’t even think about it Timberlake. Even though I am no longer officially a cop, its still what I do best.â€￾
“I know what I do best.â€￾ Justin said leaning up and lifting up her shirt. Where his lips landed almost made Missy forget what she was talking about.
“No Justin we need to talk about this.â€￾ And as much as she hated to, she pushed Justin’s head away from her. Justin groaned as his head hit the bed.
“Talk..who needs to talk.â€￾
“JUSTIN RANDAL.â€￾
Justin closed his eyes.
“I could really use your support on this. Remember..we are also helping your best friend. I am just technical for JC here. I won’t get into any actual police chases or anything that dramatic.â€￾
“Promise?â€￾
“Promiseâ€￾ Missy said kissing him on the nose and rolling off him. As she got off the bed and ran out the door to talk to C…Justin rolled over on his stomach and stared after her.
“And if anything happens to you I will kill JC myself.â€￾
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You know the drill
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Postby PreCiouSbAbY » Sat Jan 03, 2004 6:01 pm

I love it!!

update soon! :please:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sat Jan 03, 2004 6:44 pm

<span style='font-family:Optima'><span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'><span style='color:purple'>Guess who's back, back again, Chex is back, tell a friend ... </span></span></span>

Yay ... our writer extraordinaire is bringing us another juicy story. I love being scared, so this story should be right up my alley!

Hit us with another update soon!

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Postby musiclova67 » Sat Jan 03, 2004 7:27 pm

Sounds like a great story is in the works here, Chexy!! Welcome back!! It took me a bit to remember which story Protect was (I've read sooo many fanfics) but I finally remembered. A sequel sounds interesting and this first chapter looks promising so hurry your butt up and post some more chapters! :P More, more, more

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Postby megzrsa » Sat Jan 03, 2004 8:18 pm

wahoo a sequal!
Cant wait for some more of this great fic :P

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Postby tendertoes » Sun Jan 04, 2004 8:44 pm

<span style='color:purple'>Can't wait to read more Chexie!!!
OH and by the way...isn't there a natasha in this story...cough...hint hint?!?!
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Postby AngelOfMusic » Mon Jan 05, 2004 1:57 pm

chex is back alright! oh my god shes back again! brothers sisters tell a friend shes gonna bring the flavor show you how got a question for ya better answer now!!! oh wait that is bsb- oops my bad! :lol: so far this is shaping up to be a GREAT story and i cant wait for more!!!!

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Postby checkers » Mon Jan 05, 2004 4:50 pm

:P

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Postby musiclova67 » Mon Jan 05, 2004 8:19 pm

You tease!! I thought you had posted a new chapter! :P

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Postby checkers » Tue Jan 06, 2004 11:52 am

Ch.2

JC paced the room…driving Melissa absolutely nuts in the progress. She gave him the death glare and he sat down next to her on one of the hard leather couches in the police station in LA.
“Why is it taking so long?â€￾ He asked leaning his head back and sighing.
“Because they are LA police. They never do anything in a rush..â€￾ Missy said putting down the copy of street beat that she was reading. Both of them looked around the nearly empty room.
“Real busy Missy.â€￾ JC scoffed getting back up and pacing the room again. Just as Missy was about to kick him in the ass, a uniform cop came out and led them into the back room..
“Bout damn time.â€￾ JC muttered and this time Melissa really did smack him upside the head.
The uniform paid no attention to them just led them into the interrogation room. A woman in a blue suit was stitting at the table with files spread all around him. She looked up and smiled grimly when they walked into the room. She stood up and offered her hand to Melissa first in the universal cop greeting then to JC.
“I am Dective Jamie Jackson. You must be Melissa Korman and JC Chasez.â€￾ Melissa nodded and sat down across from Jackson. JC sat on the other side, staring at the female dective. He had know Missy for a year now and was use to the way she thought and acted, but the way Jamie held herself in the chair and shuffled the papers inform of her fascinated him.
“JC…earth to JC.â€￾ Melissa waved her hand in front of his face. JC blinked his eyes rapidly.
“Did the aliens need to take that brain of yours in for further testing?â€￾ Missy said and Jackson held in a giggle.
“Very funny Missy.â€￾ He said shaking his head to clear his mind.
“Ok lets start this from the beginning.â€￾ Jamie stated pulling out one of the folders and sliding it across the table to Missy. “This is Karen Longstreet’s Criminal record.â€￾
“CRIMINAL RECORD!â€￾ JC’s head snapped up. “What the hell do you mean criminal record?â€￾
“Exactly what she said Josh.. We have breaking and entering, assault, possession with intention to sell..What was the flavor?
â€￾Cocaine, and that is the most recent one we have on her, breaking and entering was her breaking into the courthouse about 3 months ago. Never gave us a reason why she did it either. They suspected something for a story she might have been working on. The assault was on a lawyer.â€￾
“And he did not press charges it seems. Must have been a lover or something. Was there ever a follow up?â€￾
“It would be in the files if there was.â€￾
“What about an off the record follow up?â€￾
“Nope.â€￾
“Maybe she would be ok right now of you had.â€￾ JC stood up.
“Joshua calm down right now, you have no clue what you are talking about.â€￾ Melissa said sternly.
“The hell I don’t, I watch enough cop shows now that you are on tour, The cops never investigate, and the person ends up dead.â€￾
“I swear I am canceling the cable on your bus.â€￾ Missy groaned and grabbed JC by the arm.
“Outside now Chasez.â€￾ She dragged JC out of the room and backed him against the wall.
“Listen to me JC, Dect Jackson and I know what we are doing, you have no f***ing clue, so unless we are asking you a question, sit there with your mouth closed.â€￾
“Melissa.â€￾ JC started and Missy held up a hand.
“Please JC let us do our Job.â€￾
As Melissa walked back into the room she heard JC mutter, “It’s not your Job anymore and she is my responsibility.â€￾

Missy and Dect Jackson finished up and JC stayed quiet. No matter how many times JC tried to start up a convo, she brushed him off till they were back at the hotel and she could ditch him with Tiny. She went up to the suite she was sharing with Justin and laid on the bed. What JC had said stung her. Till that moment she still considered herself a cop, she had all the instincts of one. But she was realizing that she was no more a cop then she was a supermodel. She was a bodyguard now, something that cops usually did when they retired or were forced to leave because of injury. She was still young, not even 25 yet, and she had left her complete life behind for Justin, something she did not regret, other then the fact that the cop blood ran through her veins and she missed the thrill. She rolled off the bed and walked over to her suitcase. Reaching into the inside pocket, she pulled out her old badge. Staring at the shining Gold of the detective badge she sighed and sat down on the bed again. She looked over at the holstered revolver that was sitting on the bedside table and picked it up. She clipped her badge next to it and set it down again. She might not be officially a cop, but wearing the badge again would make her feel more like one and she would be able to do her job, whichever one that was.

you know the drill
Chex

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Tue Jan 06, 2004 12:48 pm

uh oh justin is not going to like what i see is happening!! and that was just mean of jc! and i am sensing that her rap sheet has something to do with her disappearance but we shall see! more please!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Tue Jan 06, 2004 2:30 pm

Wooh ... this girl Karen has gotten herself into some trouble before. Yikes! Don't know what's gonna happen here, but I love the suspense!

Mean JC ... :no: :no:


Melissa has still got the cop blood flowing ... I don't think Justin is going to be lovin' this, but she has to do what she's gotta do!

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Postby musiclova67 » Tue Jan 06, 2004 6:58 pm

Great chapter, Chex. More, more, more

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Postby tendertoes » Tue Jan 06, 2004 7:24 pm

<span style='color:purple'>can't wait for more Chexie...hint hint!!</span>

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Postby checkers » Sat Jan 10, 2004 12:24 am

new chapter tomorrow

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Mon Jan 12, 2004 12:16 pm

its now tomorrow after tomorrow!?!?!!? :lol:

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Postby megzrsa » Mon Jan 12, 2004 12:19 pm

cant wait for the new chapter

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Fri Feb 06, 2004 10:23 am

Ahhh I love your new story Chex!! I loved Protect so I can only imagine how good this one is gonna be...Missy don't go gettin yourself into trouble now....it would crush J if something ever happened to you! MORE PLEASE!

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Fri Feb 13, 2004 6:22 pm

CHEX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I


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MORE!!!!!!!!



please :lol:

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Postby tendertoes » Sat Feb 14, 2004 4:24 pm

<span style='color:purple'>ahem...me too!!!</span>

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Feb 16, 2004 11:53 am

ME THREE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Postby BabyBlue2578 » Thu Feb 19, 2004 8:56 pm

<span style='color:red'>:D LOVE the story.

Post more soon pleeeeease! :pray:</span>


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