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Postby tendertoes » Sun Mar 21, 2004 10:54 am

“You might change your mind in a second, I need you to help me organise a prison break


<span style='color:purple'>Oh no...this can't be good :unsure: </span>

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Thu Mar 25, 2004 8:03 pm

*pst* a lil birdy told me that you had an update for us :nod:

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Fri Mar 26, 2004 10:54 am

i think the birdie lied

claire! where is my update! :lol:

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Postby JT Fan Girl » Fri Mar 26, 2004 12:25 pm

:unsure:

It's on its way... :lol:

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Postby JTnTN » Sat Mar 27, 2004 1:11 pm

:lol: a prison break. that's hilarious. i hope sydney helps her out too. she seems cool enough to be released to the real world lol

i hope the mystery caller is revealed in the next chapter. i'm intrigued. :nod:

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Postby mtvjunkie » Sat Mar 27, 2004 2:00 pm

i'd like to know who it is too...

update soon okay?

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Postby JT Fan Girl » Mon Mar 29, 2004 5:05 pm

Ahh, I'm sorry guys :( ... I meant to update Saturday but didn't have time, was all ready to post a chapter tonight but I lost half the document. <_<

I promise there will be a new chapter up by tomorrrow or Wednesday, sorry to keep you all waiting! :blowkiss:

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Postby mtvjunkie » Mon Mar 29, 2004 5:06 pm

dont worry, we appreciate what we get. especially when its of this quality :nod:

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Postby zozon3 » Mon Mar 29, 2004 10:28 pm

claireeeeeeeeee
I love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu :P



im a lil drunk excuse me :huh:

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Postby JT Fan Girl » Tue Mar 30, 2004 12:09 pm

:lol:

Aww, I love you too Zo ... and I'm not drunk. :P

And thanks Helena! :hug:

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Wed Mar 31, 2004 12:35 pm

so..... wheres my update! :lol:

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Postby Sarah » Wed Mar 31, 2004 1:30 pm

yea claire! were waiting.............
:bored: :brushteeth: :chew: :juggle: :pee: :popcorn: :P

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Postby JT Fan Girl » Wed Apr 07, 2004 11:51 am

Something's coming...

It could be a new chapter :lol:...

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Postby Sarah » Wed Apr 07, 2004 12:03 pm

it'd better be coz im.......... :bored: .........................still waiting! :P
B)

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Postby JT Fan Girl » Wed Apr 07, 2004 12:19 pm

This next ones for you Sar! :lol: :blowkiss:

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Postby JT Fan Girl » Wed Apr 07, 2004 12:20 pm

<span style='color:dodgerblue'>"And airports see it all the time, with someone's last goodbye, blends in with someone's sigh..."

2 and a half weeks ago now...

The phone started to ring as she stepped out of the shower. She heard it stop and go onto the answer phone as she stumbled quickly on a course towards it.
“Hey it’s me again, are you there? I guess not. Why aren’t you ever in, you didn’t use to go out and…
“You’re not the only one with a life you know, thank you very…â€￾
“So you are here!â€￾ he interrupted.
“Yes, but I’m leaving so you better make it quick, ok?â€￾
“Alright… will you come pick me up?â€￾
“Uh… I don’t have a car remember….â€￾ she replied as she adjusted her towel.
“Well could you come get me anyway?â€￾ he pleaded.
“Sure, sure… what time then?â€￾
“Uh…â€￾ his voice sounded unsure.
“Ugh! Call me later all right, loserâ€￾ she laughed.
“Yeah all right… babeâ€￾ he added as an after thought. She shook her head and hung up. But before she left she noticed a new message. She pressed down on the button and listened intently.
“Hey Sydney, its Adam. I just wanted to say I’m sorry again for cancelling the date. Can we please reschedule? Let me know soon sexy waitressâ€￾ She smiled.

On the way to work she passed the old man as usual, still sitting on the steps as he always did and she wondered if she’d ever know why. She caught his eye, he winked at her and she smiled back. The sun was shining through the trees and the birds were singing to compete with the busy traffic as she slipped down the side street and into the café.

“Hey I…â€￾ but before she could even finish her sentence her boss pushed through the waiters to get to her. Oh no were the words that fell into her mind. Her boss charged through the staff and they all looked on interested to see who was going to get the brunt of his short fuse today.
“What are you all staring at?â€￾ he grumbled. “Back to work now!â€￾ he shouted as she turned back to face Sydney.
“Sydney, can you please not give this address out to you admirers, thank you kindlyâ€￾
“Huh?â€￾
“Check the backroomâ€￾ he mumbled and pointed as if she didn’t know where it was
“Ok…â€￾ she said unsure, raising her eyebrow.

It didn’t take her long to spot what he was talking about. Some flowers had been placed on the table and there was a small card attached to them. She lent forward and breathed in their scent then felt for the card.

So I cancelled the date
Hope this sorry isn’t too late
Something came along
But to put it first was wrong
So this is a sorry to you
With flowers yellow and blue
To the girl with the curls
Worth the entire ocean’s pearls
Hope this isn’t to cheesy
Or worse comes of sleazy
So if you liked it at all
Would you give me a call?


She walked across the room, picked up the phone and dialed the soon to become familiar number.




The airport was busy and she squinted through the haze of people to try and see something that resembled her friend but lucky for her she didn't need to for very long. He came bulldozing through the crowd and knocked her down, she fell backwords onto the seat but he grabbed her arms and pulled her back up into a hug.
“Heeeeey!â€￾ he said out of breath.
“Hey!â€￾ she laughed.
“How are ya?â€￾ He looked excited, as if it was Christmas and he was about to open his presents as he stood back to get a closer look at her.
They stood, looking at each other for a minute, taking each other in and then she replied “Fine, I missed youâ€￾
He placed two hands on his heart dramatically and grinned daringly at her.
“But not that much!â€￾ she said, complete with a set of rolling eyes.
“Hey, watch it!â€￾ he said poking her in the ribs lightly.
“Yeah, yeah. I know you, you’re all talkâ€￾ she wagged her finger at him like an warning mother.
“That’s what you thinkâ€￾
“Yes it is! Ok… I need to take a picture of us,â€￾ she said grabbing his arm.
“Ok let’s do it…â€￾ he said rubbing his hands together, “Oh my God what is that?â€￾ he laughed.
“Hey! It’s my camera, so don’t make fun!â€￾ Sydney pouted.
“Oh yeah, it’s cool… it’s just the size of a small house, that’s allâ€￾ he said placing his hands out front to show he wasn’t guilty of anything, especially mocking.
“Well… I like my Polaroid camera thank you very much, hmphâ€￾ she replied placing it on the seat so that she could fold her arms and look as miffed as possible at her best friend.
“Sydney!â€￾ he laughed, looking at her through puppy dog eyes.
“Hmphâ€￾ she said turning away from him
“You’re causing a scene…â€￾ he replied as he leant forward to tickle her vulnerable sides.
“Hey! I am not causing a scene. You bully!â€￾ she laughed, squirming to get away from him.
“Uh! Loserâ€￾ he said backing away.
“What? We were SO making up there?â€￾ Sydney replied, eyebrow raised.
“Yeah… and then you went and called me a bully, thanks Syd!â€￾ a frown spreading across his pink forehead.
“Aww, hey no frowning, you need to be smiling in this picture!â€￾ She picked up the camera and held it out in front of them, drawing him in with her other hand.
“I can’t help but smile when I with youâ€￾ he replied.
The camera flashed and the picture shot out of it’s front.

He was her best friend and there were so many things she loved about him, and really missed when we was working. She loved how he always used his hands when he was talking and how his bracelets jangled on his wrists when he did so. But most of all when he’s talking to you, he always looks you dead in the eye, so you know you can trust him, no matter what. And she missed his voice, and though she could hear it whenever she wanted to, it was different when he was right there and she could feel his breath and sense him tasting each word on his tongue.

“Right you, come on I haven’t seen you in forever, lets do something special.â€￾ He said linking his arm with hers so naturally that neither of them really noticed
“I’ve got a date to reschedule, so I can’t set anything in stone with you right now…â€￾
“I need to meet this new guy! You know if you were my girl, I’d be right here by your side Senorita…â€￾ He noticed her classic mannerism of raising her eyebrow as he finished talking and grinned.
“You’re beginning to sound like the track listing of a certain CD I knowâ€￾ she replied eyebrow still raised
He continued to smile at her “Aw Senorita, what have you got that frown for? Come on get a cab with me and let’s take a ride around this cityâ€￾
“Me? Frown? Never.â€￾ She smiled. “Lets get this cab thenâ€￾
“Anyway, what CD is this?â€￾ he asked.
“Umm… some guy… think his name begins with a J… â€￾
“So this CD of his, any good?â€￾ he asked as genuinely possible
“Nah, not reallyâ€￾ she said smiling
He scooped her up and ran along the pavement, “I think you’ll be changing your mind when I’m done with you!â€￾</span>

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Postby mtvjunkie » Wed Apr 07, 2004 12:23 pm

“I think you’ll be changing your mind when I’m done with you!â€￾
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great chapter but i'd like more!

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Postby BabyBlue2578 » Wed Apr 07, 2004 12:30 pm

:o FINALLY! A new chapter! :dance:

:lol: Adam's card was too cute! Cheesy, but cute :wub: That was sweet of him. :D

And :yay: I know who her best friend is! That was a great introduction for him. If only I could be so lucky as to be going to pick him up from the airport. B)

More SOON please Claire darling! ;)

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Apr 07, 2004 12:32 pm

You continue to amaze me with your wonderful writing and beautiful sense of description.

I'm lovin' this story more and more with each chapter. I loved how you used John lyrics to title this chapter. I love that specific line in "Wheel." :)

That was sweet of Adam to send her flowers with that little note. I loved the note ... I would love to get that from a guy.

I, too, know who that special friend from the airport is. I loved the little hints you gave us. I'll pick him up from the airport anyday he wants! ;)

Can't wait for another update!

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Postby Sarah » Wed Apr 07, 2004 1:33 pm

aww a chapter for me! :wub:
:P
loved the chapter hun! i think i know who her best friend is! :D
update soon!

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Postby JT Fan Girl » Wed Apr 07, 2004 3:33 pm

*BUMP* Some people might not actually believe I've updated. :lol: Don't know why they wouldn't though :whistle:...

:no: Bumping my own fic :no:

Thanks for all great the feedback girls! :blowkiss: I really appreciate it all! :wub:

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Postby megzrsa » Wed Apr 07, 2004 3:45 pm

I luved that chapter! (Im listening to 'wheel' rite now :P )
aww that was sweet that Adam sent her those flowers but she should be more interested in her best bud :lol: cant wait for more :P

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Wed Apr 07, 2004 4:24 pm

:yay: you finally updated! :lol:

Adam sent her flowers :wub: That card was soo cute man! i want a guy to send me flowers!

And her best friend...I have a very good idea as to who I think it is but I'll just have to wait and see now won't I? MORE PLEASE! and don't wait so long this time! lol

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Wed Apr 07, 2004 4:43 pm

how and gods name did i miss an update?!?!!?!?!?!?!


ok first of all the flowers- sooo sweet! i swear when a guy sends me flowers especially out of the blue it makes me all lovey dovey - i love flowers there is nothing more romantic then an unexpected delivery of some awesome flowers. i dated one guy that knew i was having a really bad week and so he actually ordered a freaking delivery of flowers from hawaii to be delivered it was amazing!! damnit now i want a man to send me flowers right now!

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Postby tendertoes » Wed Apr 07, 2004 8:59 pm

<span style='color:purple'>I love...love...love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YAY!!!!
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Postby JTnTN » Fri Apr 09, 2004 12:39 pm

aww adam is so sweet. ^_^ i wish a guy would do that for me. i wouldn't even care if he stood me up! :lol:

and her best friend... :wub: they're so cute together. i can't wait for more! :)

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Postby Sarah » Sun Apr 11, 2004 1:42 pm

<span style='color:deeppink'>BUMP!!!</span>

:P i want a new chapter claire! :nod:

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Postby megzrsa » Mon Apr 12, 2004 1:23 pm

Can we have an update please Claire? :P

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Postby JT Fan Girl » Wed Apr 21, 2004 2:33 pm

Hey guys, I am soooo sorry I haven't updated in such a long time. :( I'm studying for exams so I don't have as much time but that doesn't mean I haven't been working on this! :P Unfortunately I have this slight problem where I write all the chapters for later in the story instead of the ones that should come next cuz I'm weird :lol:... so I do have chapters... just not the right ones. :no:
So forgive me... thanks for being so paitent :blowkiss:, well some of you. :P Just kiddin'... Hold tight and I'll do my bestest to have something up by the weekend! :D

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Wed Apr 21, 2004 5:27 pm

TAKE YOUR TIME! a masterpiece shouldnt be rushed!

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Postby tendertoes » Wed Apr 21, 2004 9:58 pm

<span style='color:purple'>Take your time!!!</span>

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Postby JT Fan Girl » Sun Apr 25, 2004 12:08 pm

:ph34r: Sorry! :ph34r:

Tash, Angel! :blowkiss:

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Postby BabyBlue2578 » Sun Apr 25, 2004 2:40 pm

<_< Tease.



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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Sun Apr 25, 2004 3:04 pm

Claire, Claire, Claire :no:

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Postby JT Fan Girl » Thu May 20, 2004 9:31 am

Something wicked this way comes...


... i.e. a well overdue update. :P

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Postby AngelOfMusic » Thu May 20, 2004 9:34 am

:clap: finally!!!!! i cant wait!

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<span style='color:dodgerblue'>Under The Sun</span><span style='color:dodgerblue'>

“Hey wanna hang out in the afternoon? I have nothing to do then, so…â€￾
“You’re kiddin’, you actually have some time of for once?â€￾
“I know! So lets make the most of it huh?â€￾
“I’m in. But what do you wanna do?â€￾
“It’s sunny so I’m thinking some kind of outdoor activityâ€￾
“You sure, you don’t want to get botheredâ€￾
“It’s cool, I’ll have my disguise, no one will recognise meâ€￾
“That last time you said that you came wearing at hat… to me that’s hardly a “disguiseâ€￾…â€￾
“Hey it’s a little more sophisticated now, I’m a pro at blending in these daysâ€￾
“If you says so…â€￾

It was bright outside and she followed her shadow and she walked. And even the usual drone of the traffic was reduced to a low humming and the wind blew silently between the slowly dancing trees. It swept through her curls, tugging her hair gently behind her cheeks to reveal her creamy skin and dazzling green eyes. The sun felt warm against her bare flesh and she felt at peace.
She bought herself water and swirled it round and round in her mouth like a drain before swallowing it, feeling it trickle down inside her. Leaving her with a cool and calming effect.
The street was not empty, yet it had lost all the sounds of the busy bustling place it usually was. It was as if the wind had carried away the sound people’s feet make when they hit the ground and the rustle of shopping bags as the bang against one side. And even conversations got lost in the cool breeze.
And for that movement she felt as though she was in a theatre, where everyone was deadly silent as not to miss a single piece of the action that was taking place in front of them on the stage. So clear, so vivid, that people were perched on the ends of the seats, entranced by the scene before them so much so that it seemed as real as their own lives. And here it was just the same as if the silence was there in order for people to study their surroundings. The tall buildings that reached up to the sky and back down to tower over everyone and then park opposite with the tall grass that she somehow longed to run her fingers through and the cool lake that stood motionless, watching, waiting. She sat down by its side and ran her fingers over its reflective surface, studying the smile on her own face.
Sydney pulled out the note he had left her and smiled at it. She then began to fold it delicately. Next she tested the water, slowly dragging her hands across the surface and the picked up the small paper boat she had made out of the note and placed it in the water gently the allowed the wind to do the rest of the work. She watched it sail down the waters edge while the lakes wildlife eyed it cautiously.
She shivered as she sensed a hand lightly touch her shoulders, she turned round to find JC’s brown eyes peering into her own. “Heyâ€￾
“Hey, you been here longâ€￾
“Not too longâ€￾ she smiled
He linked his arm with hers and together they strolled through the park.
“So when you told me you had, what was it you said, a more “sophisticatedâ€￾ disguise, you in fact meant a different hat from last time?â€￾ she laughed.
“Hey, it’s working! Have I been noticed… no! So tell me what I’ve missedâ€￾
“Let’s see I’m still here, I’m still working the café…â€￾
“There must be something…â€￾ he replied.
“Oh! I have a date!â€￾ she suddenly remembered.
“That’s something! Expand on this pleaseâ€￾
“Aww no I couldn’t. I don’t want to make the dateless world, i.e. You, feel jealous…â€￾
“Ha ha ha! You’re just so funny Syd!â€￾ he said mockingly clutching his stomach.
“I knowâ€￾ she shrugged, “I just can’t help being such a natural comedianâ€￾
“Anyway this date…â€￾
“Which is tonight… oh my god… tonight!â€￾
“Please tell me you didn’t just realise this?â€￾ he smiled, shaking his head.
“Yes! And you do realise since my girly friends are out of town at the moment so you will have to be my personal shopper and make sure my outfit doesn’t clashâ€￾
“Ohhhh…â€￾ he moaned
“Well can you at least to do the guy side of things, you know from a guys point of viewâ€￾
“That I will do, if…â€￾
“If?â€￾
“You tell me what clashes and what doesn’t… because this is one girl thing that there seems to be an unwritten rule book on, and I want itâ€￾
“Okâ€￾ she laughed, linking arms with him once again, “Black and brown isn’t too good, black trousers brown shoes, it’s pretty much always a no no. And I don’t like red and yellow… because that makes me look like a cheese and tomato sandwich…â€￾

Later that day...
“Hey Syd, do you need help?â€￾ he called through
“No, no it’s fine. Why don’t you rake through my personal things while I’m out of the room, isn’t that why guys do?â€￾
“Uh…â€￾ he laughed
“I talk too much, huh?â€￾
“No, you talk just rightâ€￾
“Is that a compliment?â€￾ she questioned
“I’m not sureâ€￾ he laughed
“Oh good, I wasn’t eitherâ€￾ she smiled
“I can give you some if you let me come and help you…â€￾
“No, stay there and relaxâ€￾
“I’m coming…â€￾ He rose up from the coach and made his way over to the kitchen.
“Seriously, I’m almost doneâ€￾
But it was too late; he was already up by the time she’d reached the door.
“Oh crap!â€￾

Sydney looked around, biting her lip nervously as she did so. She ran her fingers through her curls and muttered anxiously to herself. Then she stood up suddenly only to sit back down again. Frustrated she flicked through the magazines next to her, drummed her fingers on the table, walked up and down the corridor at least 8 times and bought herself a coffee she didn’t want. Sydney finally surrendered and let her head fall into her hands.

He looked down at her and smiled. Curled up across the seats, Sydney had fallen into a deep sleep. He brushed the curls away from her faced and whispered softly into her ear, “Sydneyâ€￾. She stirred slightly but did not awaken and part of him was glad because she looked so peaceful and still. He knelt down next to her and brushed her arm lightly. “Sydney sweetie, wake up sleepy girlâ€￾
“Mmmâ€￾ she mumbled, turning so that her hair fell across her face and he could no longer she her pale pink cheeks.
“Syd come on!â€￾ he said softly, smiling at her reluctance to wake up.
“Hmm, go away…â€￾ and then it hit her and she gasped, falling of the seats and landing in mess on the polished floor.
“Syd! You ok?â€￾ he asked. Unable to hold back a smile he turned away as she used the seat to propel herself upwards as she muttered, “Owâ€￾
“You alright there girly?â€￾ she turned to see JC beaming at her, his floppy hair falling about as he talked.
“Never mind me, where’s Adam?â€￾
“I’m not sure, but I’m sure he’s fineâ€￾ he reassured her.
“Ugh! This is awful!â€￾
“I’m sure is wasn’t that bad…â€￾
“I slammed a door on his faceâ€￾ she said bluntly.
“Well yeah, there is that…â€￾
“What else is there, I’ll be forever known as his worst date. The girl who flung a 90 miles per hour moving door smack bang in-“
“By accident!â€￾
“Yeah… but I’m not sure if that helps… wait at min, how come you here?â€￾
“I’m doing this thing for the kids in one of the wards, just needed to prepare some things. Hey do you want me to take you home?â€￾
“You know what I think I’ll stayâ€￾
“Are you sure?â€￾ he questioned.
“Yeah, yeah. I’m gonna stay here.â€￾ She nodded looking determined and he decided best to let her do as she wished.
“All right, you want me to wait with you?â€￾
“No, I’ll be okâ€￾
“Ok, if you’re sureâ€￾ he stood up but she grabbed his arm.
“Heyâ€￾ she said standing up still holding gently onto him.
“Yeah?â€￾ he asked looking down at her.
“Thanks for offering though.â€￾
“Hey no problemâ€￾

“Heyâ€￾
“Heyâ€￾ she said biting her lip as she did so and then she burst rambling hysterically at him, “I am so sorry, I feel awful, god I’m such a klutz and I am just so sorry I can’t…â€￾ He lent forward and kissed her and so she fell silent.
“It’s okâ€￾, he said placing her hair behind her ears and kissing her gently on the cheek.
“It is not ok… look at you!â€￾ she gestured at the bandages that were wrapped around his head.
“It’s fine, I shouldn’t have tried to help, you did tell me… it’s fine, nothing bad, just a bit sore…â€￾
“I’m sorryâ€￾ she whispered.
“It’s okâ€￾ he laughed.

When they get home they sat down on the couch and talked into the early hours but neither of them had noticed the time flying away or the sun disappearing from the sky.
“I wish I could make your head better…â€￾ she said leaning forward to kiss it, ignoring the bandages.
“That just about does itâ€￾ he smiled.
“So, on a scale of 1 to 10, how would you rate this as a first date?â€￾ she joked.
“What more could I ask for than being taken home and nursed back to health by a beautiful women. Even if she caused that harm in the first place. I think that makes you kinda feistyâ€￾
Beautiful? “Feisty?â€￾ she raised her eyebrows.
“Somehow, yeahâ€￾ he smiled, “I would give this date... an 11 and if continues this way maybe a 12...â€￾

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Postby Sarah » Thu May 20, 2004 12:29 pm

aww that was such a great chapter :wub:
and well worth the wait!! :nod: i love your style of writing!! :P
update soon hun!

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Postby megzrsa » Thu May 20, 2004 2:10 pm

You are such a descriptive writer, i could almost imagine myself there :P
I thought her bestfriend was Justin :lol: woops, Jc is cool though.
Things seem to be going good between her and Adam despite the door incident :lol:
Thanks for the update!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Thu May 20, 2004 2:15 pm

Yay for the wonderful update, Claire. I loved it and it definitely was worth the wait, although I just might die if you take too long with the next one. :lol: And you don't want me to die do you? ;)

Aww poor Sydney. She feels so badly for slamming the door in Adam's face. Ouch! But he's still alive, so it's all good. :nod: I guess that's one way to make an impression. :huh:

JC is very sweet for offering her a lift home. I was thinking that this was going to be a Justin story, but I should have known better that Miss Claire was a JC woman. Perfectly acceptable and understandable. :thumbup:

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Thu May 20, 2004 3:56 pm

aww that was such an awesome update Claire! I can't believe she slammed the door on his face :lol: i know thats not funny but it cracks me up :rofl: Shes nursing him back to health :wub: thats soo cute! And JC's so sweet man...offering to take her home :wub: MORE PLEASE!

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Postby BabyBlue2578 » Thu May 20, 2004 6:01 pm

:confused: So what's this story about again? :P Great update... FINALLY. I was thinkin' you'd abandoned us. :(

How is it everyone thought her best friend was Justin? Y'all have to pay attention to detail. :nono:

I'm a little sad that she slammed the door on him... but since she is too, then maybe there's some hope. At least he's still breathin'. :lol:

:wub: JC. :yay: for him!

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Postby tendertoes » Thu May 20, 2004 7:13 pm

<span style='color:purple'>Great chapter....I can't wait for more!
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Postby AngelOfMusic » Fri May 21, 2004 10:47 am

you have a real talent for descriptive writing. i literally closed my eyes after reading certain sections and could picture exactly what you were describing. oh and i love how she slamed the door in his face! :lol: i mean it is sad but every now and then i think it is important for every woman to slam a door in someones face- it keeps the world balanced! :lol:


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