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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Sat Jul 10, 2004 1:17 pm

Hey you can write songs and poems here!!!! dont worry if its not good and the subjuct can be about anything you want!! have fun :lol: and get thoose creative juices flowing!!!!

poem
only you
i wake up in the morning to you lying next to me
and i look at your face and smile
i cannot think og a more perfect moment then this
i love you in more ways then one
i love the way you walk and talk even the way you
laugh
everything about you is perfect and i wont change
you in anyway and i hope you never change either.
:)

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Postby *PrInC€š§~R¶* » Sat Jul 10, 2004 1:53 pm

^that was nice

ok here's mine. It was my first and last poem. I'll be honest it's not that good. lol so yea...

Disguise

Outside I’m laughing
Inside I’m crying
I feel lonely
I don’t know why
I just want to cry
I tried to get rid of the pain
But there is more I gained
Outside I’m laughing
Inside I’m crying
No one understands me
I don’t know what happened to me
I can’t stop the pain from hurting me
It just hurts so much inside
Because you are not here with me
~~~~~~~~~~~

yea it's umm...confusing but hey i suck at it :lol:

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Sat Jul 10, 2004 2:12 pm

its not confusing!!! i feel like sometimes soo yea


friends
friends are there for you everyday
there there for you when your down
when you happy or both
friends are kind hearted and loving
friends give advice for many thing like
love, school, work
there there when you get the boy of your dreams
and when you break up
friends are there when your parents arent
they will cover for you when you cut or cheated
they will tell you when ur outfit is bad or good
you will always know who your true friends are b/c
they will do all thoose things for you!

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sat Jul 10, 2004 4:16 pm

Ya'lls poems are nice :) Mine suck :(

Baby Blues
I fell in love with your baby blues
Once I saw your picture
They lit up your face.
And when you smile,
They are one of your best qualties,
Those beautiful baby blues.
...that sucked big time lol.. Justin was on my mind but.. w/e lol

How
How can you be so sure
How?
How can you be so sure
that he'll always be there?
How?
How will you be sure he'll
never hurt you?
How?
How can you be sure he'll
always love you?
You never know, but sometimes
Its worth the risk.
...my friend who writes awesome fan fics and awesome poems said that was pretty good :)

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Postby PreCiouSbAbY » Sat Jul 10, 2004 4:40 pm

This is a really cheesy poem, lol. But I'll post it anyway.

Would You

would your walls crash down for me
would you let your heart believe

the things that seem too late
are closer than we may mistake

don't sell yourself too short
don't give up, don't give in
until you set free, and win

they can see your pride is broken
from the words that are unspoken
that empty smile you wear
shows the hidden feelings
that you pretend are never there

do your thoughts just scramble away
scared of something too great

would your eyes find sight for me
would you open the door to see
would you?

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Sat Jul 10, 2004 4:44 pm

those were good...heres some of mine
<span style='color:green'>
<span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'>An Unknown Child</span></span>

<span style='color:limegreen'>A little confused girl
In this messed up world.
People think that they know her
But to tell the truth most of them really don’t.
Her soul, her life her everything
Is consumed by her music and her art.
The notes flow together
Making the perfect little rhyme.
The stroke of the paintbrush
Staining the ghostly white canvas.
They all express a little bit of her
But not ever enough.
To let someone into her little world
That only she knows what’s really going on.</span>

<span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'><span style='color:red'>Rejuvenation</span></span>

<span style='color:pink'>From the first drop of rain
To the first blooming flower
Winter’s finally over
But it won’t last forever

Gentle breezes blowing
Far across the sky
Warm crisp air
Taking control of your life

Snow slowing melting away
Fresh green grass taking its place
Bee’s buzzing in your ear
Voices of children laughing

Feet pounding on the pavement
Running into the sun
Spring sports taking over the dirt ridden fields
Cheering going on into dusk</span>

I used the next one in my fanfic but i changed it up a bit to fit the story

<span style='color:blue'><span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'>That First Time</span></span>

<span style='color:dodgerblue'>Cars lined up for miles
Just to get in to see you.
Backstage, your heart is racing
It’s that adrenaline rush.
5 minutes until show time
You think this can’t be happening.
4 more minutes now
You heart begins to palpitate.
3 more minutes left
You knees are beginning to go weak.
2 minutes until you hit the stage
You can’t move a muscle.
Only 1 more minute now
Your blood runs cold.
You run out onto the stage,
To see all of your adorning fans.
Your heart begins to beat normally,
Sending blood pulsating throughout your body.
A new adrenaline rush has taken over you,
this time a good one.
As you hit that first note,
Everything is so peaceful and calm again.</span>

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Postby PreCiouSbAbY » Wed Jul 21, 2004 12:20 am

I really liked those Heather. Especially the first one.

Here's more, i'm in a poetic mood.

<span style='color:purple'>in the room, where i sit.
I sit alone.
Exchanging glances with
the reflection of this girl
who is so unknown.
She smiles, I smile.
Her face drawn out,
and in the middle she stutters about.
Why can't she laugh,
she doesn't utter a word.
It's as if she's choked of pain,
unrecognizable in this game.
She finally turns away,
and i'm by myself again.
No one to look at,
My head falls into my arm,
and I'm gone to somewhere else. </span>


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