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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sat Nov 06, 2004 8:12 pm

see, I had this big idear for the chapter, then i forgot it so the one i used in the story was the second idear :shrug: I hate my memory.

my buttah aint that hot, sweetie poop


:blink: Did I really just say sweetie and poop in the same sentence

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sat Nov 06, 2004 8:21 pm

Sweetie pee pee, your buttah is booty-ful.

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sat Nov 06, 2004 8:23 pm

sugar pie hunnybun :dance:

Damn.. now I wanna jam to some oldies :lol: I blame my daddy for this. He's an oldies dude.

Dude.. I need idears for the siggy! Anybody got any idears?

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sat Nov 06, 2004 8:50 pm

I love the oldies! :dance: :dance:

My sig has been the same for over a year, so don't come looking for good idears here, ma'am. :no: :lol:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sat Nov 06, 2004 8:54 pm

Paige, your siggy is cool beans so, w/e. I need something. I always have the same shiste in mine

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sat Nov 06, 2004 9:12 pm

My siggie doesn't even make sense. It's all inside jokes, and I don't think I'm even a Jobo Ho anymore because Helena hates me, but it sure is a colorful sig., so that gets me points right there. :nod:

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Sat Nov 06, 2004 10:59 pm

haha i loved it!!!!!!!!! more please.................

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sat Nov 06, 2004 11:01 pm

Tanks :hug:

Paige.. your sigalig is purdyfull

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sat Nov 06, 2004 11:07 pm

My sigalig ... :rofl: WORD!

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sat Nov 06, 2004 11:09 pm

:rofl: fo sho.

Paige, we need a unique name for us.. like.. The Ghetto White Chicks or something

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Tue Nov 16, 2004 5:59 pm

fine dont answer me BIATCH


:lol: j/k.

But seriously, ya'll. Now that Jackie asked me for idears for her fan fic.. i just realized i have major writers block for this story :lol: anybody got any idears?

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Tue Nov 16, 2004 6:04 pm

:rofl: I never looked at this. :o We do need a name. :thinking: Ghetto Geeks. :rofl: I am no good at coming up with funny names. :no:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Tue Nov 16, 2004 6:27 pm

:thinking: Ghetto Geeks.... I lilke it :nod: I'll add it to my sig if u add it to yours

ok.. u slut.. any idears for the story? :lol:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Tue Nov 16, 2004 6:57 pm

I'll add it to mine for sure! :nod: Actually, I'll do tomorrow morning when I can play around with different colors and fonts to make it all purdyful. :D But I still have no idears for the story. :lol:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Tue Nov 16, 2004 7:22 pm

ahh you suck :lol:

im writing a chapter of Broken as we speak :nod:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Tue Nov 16, 2004 7:53 pm

:yay:

You must not rush creativity, Miss Val. :nono: :kiss:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Tue Nov 16, 2004 8:00 pm

shove it, Miss Paige :lol:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Nov 17, 2004 3:20 pm

Chapter 17

2 Months Later

"You wanna hang out tonight?" Justin asked.

"I already have plans with Ryan tonight. Sorry, J."

"Everybody has something to do tonight, except me."

"Awe.. sorry J. Tommorow though, okay?"

"You wont be to busy with Ryan?"

"I promise, tommorow's our day."

"Ookay."

"Anyway, whats up with you? You sure you dont have any plans?"

"Positive. How're things going with Ryan?"

"Good." Val giggled.

"You're in deep."

"Its only been 2 months, Justin."

"And?"

"Im not in love."

"Yet." Justin said rolling his eyes.

"Right. Yet. Loser, I gotta go, Ryans coming to pick me up in 2 hours."

"Gotta hurry." Justin said sarcasticly.

"Watch it pretty boy."

"Ouch."

"I'll talk to you later."

"Lata." Justin said.

"Peace." Val replied.
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6 MONTHS LATER

Ryan and Val had been dating 8 months now. Justin still didnt have a girlfriend. Val had been working on an album, and Justin was helping her on it.

"C'mon, Val. I know you can hit that note. One more time." Justin said tiredly.

"Fine." Val said as her cell phone ran. "Hold up."

Justin nodded.

"Hello?"

"Is this a Miss Valerie Meadows?"

"Yes." Val said nervously.

"Im sorry to tell you this, ma'am, but your boyfriend, Ryan Timmons, was in a serious accident.


okay.. that was a short update but it was something :shrug: Feedback?

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Nov 17, 2004 6:35 pm

:jawdrop: Oh no ... poor Ryan. I hope he's gonna be alright. :pray: Justin wants Val ... it's plain to see. :lol:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Nov 17, 2004 6:49 pm

:lol: I want him to want me too :drool: Damn the things he does to me :lol:

I'll see if I can post the chapter yet tonight :nod: I gotta write it though :lol: I know what I wanna do though :nod: Since you dont watch One Tree Hill Paige, you wont get this hint :lol: JACKIE: YOU MAY NOT SAY A WORD SINCE YOU WATCH.

Hint: Whats gonna happen to Val and or Justin is something that happened on One Tree Hill :nod:

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Postby Tiff » Wed Nov 17, 2004 6:59 pm

Justin wants Val so bad! I hope Ryan's alright! He better be. :nervous:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Nov 17, 2004 7:04 pm

:clap: yay.. my idear is gonna be so goooooooooood

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Nov 17, 2004 7:14 pm

:thinking: They both die? :rofl: Just kidding. They get engaged? I'll have to wait and see. :nod:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Nov 17, 2004 7:15 pm

:rofl: no to both

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Nov 17, 2004 7:56 pm

Damn! Keep me guessing why don't you. :lol:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Nov 17, 2004 9:05 pm

there's no hint that I can give you other than the one I already gave. Anything else will totally give it away. U lucky biitches, im making my mom mad by not working on my homework. Im working on the chapter instead :lol:

Should be up within the next.... hour hopefully :lol:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Nov 17, 2004 9:43 pm

OMFG.. IM SO EXCITED FOR THIS CHAPTER :lol: The writting kinda sucks but I like what im doing with it :shrug:

ALMOST DONE!!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Nov 17, 2004 9:46 pm

:yay: POOOOOOOOOOOST!

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Nov 17, 2004 9:49 pm

ALMOOOOOST :yay: I swear.. give me like.. 10-15 mins :nod:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Nov 17, 2004 10:25 pm

Chapter 18

Justin watched his friend drop the phone onto the studio floor in shock. He ran in there.
"Val? Whats wrong, hon?" He said worriedly. He looked at her pale face and knew it was bad. "Sweetie..."

"Ryan, h-he's..." Val broke down.

"What?" Justin said rubbing her back.

"He was in a bad accident." She sobbed.

"Oh god, hon." He hugged her and continued to rub her back.

"Justin, I cant lose him. I gotta get to the hospital." She said walking away from him.

"I'll drive you."

It was a long ride to the hospital. Justin tried to calm his friend down. He hated to see her cry. Now that they were in the hopsital, it was worse. Ryan's family loved and supported Val. Ryan was not doing good. Right now they were waiting for the doctor t come out and talk to them.

"Excuse me." The doctor said.

Everybody stood and waited.

"Im very sorry. We tried everything we could." The doctor said. Everybody around Justin burst into tears. He turned to see val. Pale as ever, just standing there by a wall. Suddenly, she slid down the wall in tears. Justin, and Ryan's sister, Manny rushed over to her.

"Val..." Manny sniffed. "Hon." Was all the got out as she hugged Val. "He loved you so much."

"Thank you. For everything." Val said.

"Hon," Justin started.

Val threw herself onto Justin and sobbed. Justin wrapped his arms around her tightly. "Everything's gonna be okay. I promise."
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7 Months later
"Val, C'mon. Dont hold back." Justin said into the microphone. They had been in there 9 hours and have this last part to do, then they would be finished.

Val sighed frustratedly. Things had been going okay since Ryan had died. Justin had noticed her push him away at times.

"How about we continue tommorow?" He said, rubbing his face.

"Thank God."

As they walked, Justin deceided he needed to say what was on his mind and do what he wanted. He pushed Val against the wall and pinned her arms down.

"Justin, what are you doing?" Val asked, shocked.

"You need someone to kiss you."

"Justin..."

"You need someone to touch you."

"What..."

"You need someone right now to give you what you want and need."

"Stop..."

"Dont fight it." Justin said. He brushed his lips with hers.

"Justin..." Val said softly.

"Shh." He kissed her hard this time. He heard her moan into his mouth and felt her hands pull his head closer. He hadnt realized he let her arms go. He wrapped her legs around his waist. He felt her tounge slip into his mouth and felt her press against him. He groaned.

"Justin." She said huskily.

"Hmm..."

"Make love to me."



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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Nov 17, 2004 10:28 pm

:P LOVES IT! :clap: I'm sad about Ryan, but she has Justin, so she wasn't all alone in her dealing with such a huge loss.

Lovemaking makes the world go round. :lick:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Nov 17, 2004 10:30 pm

damn, I should have made those Justin parts more.... sexual :lol:

God.. you have no idea how bad I wanna lick Justin right now :lol: :lick:

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Postby Tiff » Wed Nov 17, 2004 10:31 pm

Omg! I had tears in my eyes when you were talking about Ryan. This week has been bad enough I don't need to cry. Awww I knew Justin was gonan do something to Val like hitting on her and stuff. Lol more plz!

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Nov 17, 2004 10:34 pm

aww, I sorry Tiff :hug:

I should have had like.. Justin rubbin all up on her or something :lol:

DAMN HIM FOR BEING SO f***ING FINE

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Nov 17, 2004 10:35 pm

Yeah Val, his hands shoulda been wandering all over town. :rofl: Nah, you write whatever you want. Dirty or clean, I enjoy it all.

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Nov 17, 2004 10:39 pm

:rofl: they should have :thinking:

Im like.. freaking out all over his f***ing sexiness. I dont make sense right now im like.. blind

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Nov 17, 2004 10:40 pm

:rofl: I have those delusional moments with my favorite men. When they're that hot, they can drive you freakin' crazy sometimes. :wacko:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Nov 17, 2004 10:41 pm

:rofl: Dude.. im going crazy :blink: :wacko: DAMN HIM TO PUCK!!

ooh.. I wanna puck him alll night :whip:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Nov 17, 2004 10:47 pm

Damn Val ... you are one horny mofo tonight. :huh: B) Find a pole to hump to release the tension. :rofl:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Nov 17, 2004 10:48 pm

:rofl: Im not horny, just really happy :lol:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Nov 17, 2004 10:48 pm

Horny=Happy. Baby, it's all the same in my world. :lol:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Nov 17, 2004 10:50 pm

:lol: maha... well.. he does that :lol:

she thinks my tractors sexy
it really turns her on
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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Tue Dec 14, 2004 9:47 pm

yay! :yay: This story was runner up for best new incomplete fan fic! Thanks you guys.

Anyway, I'll go back and see what I last wrote then you might get a short update

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Tue Dec 14, 2004 9:59 pm

Short update:

Justin stopped kissing her for a moment.

Val looked up at him. "Justin, what are you doing?"

Justin shook his head. "We cant do this."

"What do you mean we cant do this? You were the one saying all those things in the first place."

"I know. I just, we cant do this. We'll end up regretting it later on. You know that. It'll hurt both of us and I dont want to lose you again."

Val sighed and ran her hands though her hair. Why'd he have to come to his senses now?

"Please tell me your not mad..." Justin said desperatly.

"No, im not mad. You're right." Val nodded.

Justin sighed with relief. "Good."

Fixing her shirt, Val sighed. "So..."

"You wanna go get something to eat or get some coffee? Something?"

"No, thats okay. I think im just gonna head home."

"You sure?" Justin said. He didnt like leaving her alone. Especially lately.

"Yeah. Im tired. I'll see you later though, okay?"

"Call me."

Val smiled a little, knowing that would make him feel better. "I will."
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Val drove around, not really sure about where she was going. She didnt want to go home right now. Knowing it wouldnt be the best thing for her to do right now, she drove to the place where her mind and love was at. Parking her car, she closed her eyes and took a deep breath, hoping to calm her nerves. Getting out of her car, she walked, looking around her. She walked a ways before finally reaching her destination.

"Hi, baby. Its me." Val said kneeling in front of Ryan's grave


well.. thats the short update.. whattdya think?

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Tue Dec 14, 2004 10:04 pm

i likey......damn justin u know u want val......lol more please

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Dec 15, 2004 9:41 am

Justin ... wtf? When does a guy ever stop making out with a girl? He better get his wee willy wonka checked out cuz it doesn't seem to be working. I love Val and Justin together and it's gonna happen dammit. :lol:

Val kneeling at Ryan's grave was sad. :( I bet she really misses him.

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Dec 15, 2004 5:44 pm

:lol: You better do some major begging, Paige. The ending's coming up sooooooon!!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Dec 15, 2004 6:13 pm

Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please X 20,000000 million billion trillion. :please: :please:

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Wed Dec 15, 2004 7:27 pm

I told you that i'd read it tonight! :yay:

I love love LOVE your story!!!! i'll try n hit on the main points seeing as so much as happened but from where i left off lol

I'm glad that Val and Justin worked things out...it's bad when friends "date" i learned that one the hard way...bye bye friendship most of the time lol....and Ryan died? Awww poor Val...that must have been soo hard on her...i can only imagine what that was like...poor thing...at least they came to their senses this time before they did the deed again and made things weird between them again....ahhh so much to say not enough time lol MORE PLEASE!

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Dec 15, 2004 7:32 pm

Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please X 20,000000 million billion trillion.  


:rofl:

Awww, Heather.. that means alot :wub: I'll try updating a bit sometime soon.


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