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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sat Sep 11, 2004 12:37 am

Ok.. so I have written a few things and I thought I'd post this. Im not sure how long it will be, etc. So.. bare with me :D

<span style='color:orange'>Chapter 1
"Ugh, Justin stop!" Jackie said getting annoyed. He was poking her. He didnt listen to her.

"Justin Randall Timberlake, stop poking Jackie." Val ordered.

Justin's eyes widened and he stopped instantly.

"Damn girl! He really listens to you." Sylvia said. She was sitting on her boyfriend of 2 year's lap. "If I could get Lance to listen like that..." She trailed off.

"Hey no ideas. See what you do, Val?" Lance said with a smile.

"Thanks, Val. How have you put up with him for 21 years?" Jackie said sitting by JC, her boyfriend of 1 year.

"What are you talking about? She loves me." Justin said, sitting down by Val, his best friend of 21 years.

"Sadly, he's right. He'd be so lost without me." Val said.

"Hey! Thats mean." Justin told Val.

"But the truth." JC said.

"C'mon J, you know she's right." Lance said.

Sylvia nods. "Admit it." She said

"Whatever." Justin said.

Val rolls her eyes. "Whatever, dude. You know you need me. You know you love me."

Sylvia, Jackie, JC, and Lance giggled.

"You wish." Justin said.

"Excuse me?" Val asked.

Justin knew he shouldnt have said that.

"Uhoh." JC said.

"Lets go into the kitchen, I'm hungry."

"But I wanna..." JC was cut off by Lance grabbing his arm.

"Now, JC." Jackie said.

"Uh, ok." JC followed them into the kitchen.

"What do you mean 'you wish'?" Val asked.

"Nothing." Justin replied.

"Justin, dont lie to me. What do you mean?"

"Im just in a bad mood. I promise." He said looking at Val.

"You're sure?" Val asked.

"Yeah! Now lets go in the kitchen. Let them know you didnt kill me or something." Justin said grinning.

"You wish." She said with an evil grin.</span>

Okay, so that was it. Chapter 1. What did ya'll think :ph34r: Paige, are you happy yet?

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Postby Mystery » Sun Sep 12, 2004 6:08 pm

Good so far! :D

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Postby Tiff » Sun Sep 12, 2004 6:11 pm

Good so far! More plz!

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Sep 12, 2004 7:48 pm

thanks, ya'll :D Just so ya'll know, this was a double post.. so there is another post called Unexpected, which has other chapters in it :nod:


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