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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Sep 13, 2004 8:37 pm

Here's another one! It involves me,Paige,Justin, and JC. Called Broken. EnJOEY!!

Chapter 1

"When's JC coming over?" Valerie asked her close friend Paige.

"I dunno. He's late though." Paige said. She was a little angry. JC, her boyfriend of 3 years, was an hour late for their 3 year aniversary.

"Im sure he has a good reason, Bop. JC is responsible." Val told her friend, trying to reassure her.

"He better." Paige mumbled.

"You want me to call Ju and tell him Imma wait with you?" Val asked.

Paige smiled. "Nah, girl. Go have fun with yoru boyfriend."

"You sure? I'll beat Jayce for you if you want."

"I can beat him." Paige said.

"Tag team."

"Shut up, biatch. You're going on that date."

"Okay."

There was a bit of a silence. Justin would be here in 15 mins. Hopefully JC would be here by then.

"SO, how long have you and J been dating now?" Paige asked.

"2 years." Val said, with a happy sigh.

"You are so happy. Its funny." Paige said with a laugh.

"You're the same way, so shut up." Val said laughing.

"Im happy for ya' ll." Paige said.

"Im happy for you too."

They smiled at each other as the door bell rang.

"I'll get it." Paige said.

"Okie dookie."

"Im coming, hold on. Geez, so impatient Justin."

She heard him say be quiet. She opened the door.

"Happy?" She asked.

"Very. How are ya, girl? Arent you supposed to be out with C?" He asked her back.

"I dunno where the hell that boy is." Paige said.

"Thats weird. You try calling him?"

"More than once." She said with a sigh.

"He has to have a good reason."

"He better."

"Hey, baby!" Justin said happily as he saw his girlfriend.

"Hey!" Val said as she walked over to him and gave him a kiss.

"Isnt that cute?" Someone said.

"Your late, Josh." Paige said, crossing her arms.

"I know babe. I slept late and then showered. I am so sorry."JC said walking over to his girlfriend.

Paige sighed. "I guess you're forgiven. You're so lucky your hot."

JC just laughed.

"Shall we go?" Justin asked Val.

"We shall." She said giggling and then grabbing his hand.

"Ready?" JC said.

"Yeah." Paige said, smiling. Him being late was forgotten, for now.


that was chapter 1! Or part 1! What did ya'll think?

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Sep 13, 2004 8:44 pm

:yay: Yay for us four hotties! :wub: JC is damn lucky that he is hot. He could rob a bank and knock an old lady off her cane, and I'd forgive him. :rofl:

I can't wait to see what trouble these four get into. :nod:

This is great, Val. Keep up the good work! :clap:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Sep 13, 2004 8:46 pm

:rofl: Paige. I might just have to add that to sthe story

Thanks Paige :wub:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Sep 13, 2004 8:50 pm

:rofl: Go right ahead if you find a place where it fits. :nod:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Sep 13, 2004 8:52 pm

:thinking: I have no idear where i'd put it :lol:

:o How about I have him trip you!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Sep 13, 2004 9:47 pm

:rofl: Tripping is fine with me. Of course, that does mean that we have to make up. :nod: ;)

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Postby Tiff » Mon Sep 13, 2004 10:38 pm

It's good so far. More plz!

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Postby shortie17 » Tue Sep 14, 2004 4:54 pm

this is good so far post more

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Tue Sep 14, 2004 7:27 pm

:rofl: What if he walked up to an old woman and gropped her.. and then grabbed himself and said "what?!" and walked off?

thanks ya'll! I'll hopefully have a new chapter up by Thursday. I should, however have a new chapter of Unexpected up tonight or tommorow

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Tue Sep 14, 2004 8:24 pm

I think any old woman should thank her lucky stars that JC would even consider groping her. :nod: :lol:

Anyway, on a random note, since this story is called "Broken," I am loving that song "Broken" by Seether f. Amy Lee. :wub:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Tue Sep 14, 2004 8:29 pm

oh my gaw, girl me too! I kinda got the title from that song :nod: I keep listening to it over and over and over again. Well I have it in my siggy to so.. duh :lol:

Paige.. check back to Unexpected in a bit.. ill be typing up the next chapter in like.. 5 mins ill start :nod:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Tue Sep 14, 2004 8:38 pm

Yeah, I saw your sig. and wondered if the title came from the song. :thumbup:

I'll check back in a little bit for that update. :yay:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Tue Sep 14, 2004 8:44 pm

you're just so smart, Paige :nod: Exept when it comes to english and spelling :lol:

shorting :lol:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Sep 19, 2004 12:11 am

Chapter 2

"Well, how was your date?" Val asked Paige the next morning.

"Good. We had a great dinner, we talked. I think thats all you wanna know." Paige said, giggling.

"You're right." Val muttered and rolled her eyes.

"Just cause you a virgin doesnt mean I cant have-" Paige said, being cut off.

"I know! It doesnt mean you have to tell me, either." Val replied.

"Whatever." Pagie said rolling her eyes.

"Hey sweets!" JC said walking into the kitchen. He kissed his girlfriend on the lips then made his way over to Val.

"Hey V." He kissed her on the cheek.

"Uh, you freak me out. Imma go to the living room." She said giving JC a weird look.

JC shrugged and wrapped his arms around Paige. "I love you."

"I love you too." Paige told her boyfriend.

"Isnt that sweet?!" Val said teasing them as she walked into the kitchen.

"Shut up, virgin." Paige said.

"Ooh, nice comeback." Val said sarcasticly.

"It's early. Give me time."

"Uhuh."

"Whatever. So why are ya back in here?" Paige asked.

"Its a kitchen. Im hungry. Do the math."

"Ok. I will. In the bedroom." She said dragging her boyfriend behind her.

Val shook her head and walked to the phone and dialed Justin's number.

"Hello?" He said, his voice raspy.

"Hey baby. I wake you?"

"Hey. Yeah, I was sleeping, but s'ok. What up?"

"Nothing. JC spent the night."

"AH, I see. Wanna come over?" She heard him yawn.

"Ill be over in a few."
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Paige and JC lay in bed, talking.

"I love you so much." Paige said, sighing happily.

JC smiled. "Love you too. Probably more."

"Not possible. I love you alot more than you love me."

"Whatever you say, hon."

"Im right like I always am. You know it, Josh."

"I know you're always right. Just not about this."

She pinched him. "Say it."

"No."

She kissed his neck. "Say it."

He closed his eyes. "N-no."

"Say it." She nibbled his lip.

"You're right."

She smiled as he rolled on top of her. "I know."
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Val walked up the stairs quietly hoping not to wake Justin if he was asleep. She opened the door to his room and peaked inside and saw him sleeping on his back. She smiled. She watched him for a few minutes then carefully walked to the bed and took off her shoes. Val had on lose fitting grey pants and a tshirt that was alittle tight. She carefully sat down and cuddled into her boyfriend, wrapping her amrs around his upper chest and her leg around his waist. Then she tucked her head into his shoulder and closed her eyes.

"Hey." She heard him whisper and she opened her eyes.

"Hey." She smiled softly and watched him stretch. He then turned around and wrapped his arms around her waist and opened his eyes. He smiled and ran his finger along her face. Val closed her eyes and sighed. She felt him kiss her and she kissed him back.

"Hungry?" He asked.

"Nope." She said.

"Ok." He replied, getting up from the bed.

"Where are you going?"

"Bathroom." He said with a laugh.

"Oh, mmk." She said then rolled onto her stomache.

After going to the bathroom he walked into his room and jumped on top of Val.

"Hey!" She said laughing.

"Hmm." He said kissing her neck.

"Justin?"

"Yeah?"

She thought for a minute. "Am I a tease?"

"What? No. Why do you ask?"

"Cause we've beend ating 2 years and we havent-"

"And thats ok. I love you and dont want to rush you. I know you love me. I dont need you to prove that to me."

"I love you."

"No duh. I love you too."
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"What do you wanna do today?" Paige asked JC.

"Um, actually, as much as I'd love to hang out with you, I gotta go into the studio."

"Oh. Ok. All day?"

He was about to say something but his cell phone cut him off. He looked at the caller ID. "Uh, yeah. I'll promise I'll call you later."

"But-"

"I gotta go. Talk to ya later, sweets." He said as he walked out the door.

"What the hell is going on?" She asked outloud. No kiss, no hug, no I love you? Just a see ya later? Something was going on, and Im going to find out, she thought.



Well, theres chapter 2. What ya'll think? :ph34r:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sun Sep 19, 2004 6:59 am

:thinking: JC? What in the world are you up to? There better not be another woman in the studio or I'll come after her with my bat. :sprint: :rofl:

I love how cute Paige and Val are with their boys. I could see myself being like that if I actually had a boyfriend. :P

Val's not a tease. But she does need to get it on with Timber, timber, Timberlake. Even up the score with JC and Paige. :nod:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Sep 19, 2004 8:34 am

:rofl: Nuff said

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Postby Tiff » Sun Sep 19, 2004 9:19 am

Good chapter. Hmmm whats JC up to? There better not be another girl in the picture.

Val needs to get the grove on with J so Paige can stop with the virgin stuff.

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Sep 19, 2004 9:57 am

:thinking: any idears for the next chapter?







as if I have to ask :lol:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sun Sep 19, 2004 10:00 am

;) :lol: :laughup: Baby, you know what WE want. :nod:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Sep 19, 2004 10:01 am

I dont wanna give you what you want ;) You gotta work for it

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sun Sep 19, 2004 11:05 am

Oh boy, I know how to work it, too. ;) :lol:

I just want to see you work it (come on baby work it for me!)

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Sep 19, 2004 12:02 pm

;) girl I know :lol:

come on come on come on come on

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Sep 19, 2004 12:15 pm

Chapter 3

"So, Im bored." Paige told Val.

"Thats nice. Me too." Val replied.

"Whatcha wanna do?" Paige asked.

"I dunno. What do you wanna do?"

"I asked you first."

"No duh. I said I dunno."

"Wanna listen to music?"

"Sure. Imma put Ryan in." Val said running to the cd player.

"Figures." Paige said, laughing.

I wanna give every part of you
The attention it deserves
I wanna take it slow, get you in
the mood. Cause the clocks not
gonna turn...


"This is Ryan?" Paige asked.

"Uhhuh." Val said laughing.

"Damn."

.. I dont want this to die
dont wanna ever forget this night
to hurry you would be a crime
Lets take our time...


"I like this song." Paige said taking the cd booklet to sing along.

"Me too." Val said, singing along.

"He has funny hair."

"I know."

"You're gonna fall and Imma laugh." Paige told Val when she saw Val jump on the couch.

"No im-" Val couldnt finish before falling. "Oww." She said laughing.

"Told ya so." Paige laughed.

"Shut up." Val told her getting up.

"Oooh! I love this song!" Paige said when On The Way Down started to play.

"Me too!" Val said singing along.

.. Sick and tired of this world
Theres no more air
Tripping over myself going nowhere
Waiting, suffocating, no direction
I took a dive and on the way down
I saw you and you saved me from myself
I wont forget the way you loved me


Paige went to the cd player and turned it down. "Val..."

"Yeah? Whats wrong?" She asked after seeing her friend get upset.

"I think JC is cheating on me."

.. But now the weight of the word
Feels like nothing, no nothing...



There you be :D

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sun Sep 19, 2004 12:39 pm

:dance: Yay for Ryan! :bootyshake: Val, you fell off the couch. :rofl: :lol: But I hope JC isn't cheating on me. :( We need to get Justin to spy on him. :thinking:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Sep 19, 2004 12:42 pm

:rofl: you know lil old me :shrug: I run into doors :nod: Its entertaining though. Justin to spy? Girl cant be using my boyfriend as a spy :lol: We'll see

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Postby Tiff » Sun Sep 19, 2004 12:51 pm

Awww i feel sad for Paige. If JC is cheating on my Paige, im gonna kick his a**. Yea, we need Justin to spy on JC. More plz!

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Sep 19, 2004 1:17 pm

I love this :lol: Ya'll have to see

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Postby Tiff » Sun Sep 19, 2004 1:41 pm

Come on....*gets down on hands and knees(not in bad way though)* Plz update today!!!!!!

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Sep 19, 2004 1:45 pm

:lol: I'll see what I can do.

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sun Sep 19, 2004 2:53 pm

We want our fiction. :nod:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Sep 19, 2004 5:02 pm

I want my One Tree Hill. We cant always get what we want :lol:

Well.actually.. im getting what I want on Tuesday :nod: SO EXCITED FOR THAT NIGHT!! I love that show :wub:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Sep 20, 2004 2:15 pm

Chapter 4

"You think he's what?" Val said sitting down.

"Cheating. I mean, you werent there this morning. He didnt even say I love you. No hug or a kiss."

"That doesnt sound like JC." Val said not believing JC would cheat. "JC's never been one to cheat."

"I know,, but his phone rang too. He looked to see who it was and he looked nervous and rushed."

"But-"

"Val. It was so, almost obvious."

"What do you want me to do?" Val asked.
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"Hey man." Justin said to JC when he opened his door.

"Hey. I need to talk to you." JC said walking into Justin's house.

"Ookay. Whats up?" Justin asked.

"You have to promise me not to say a word to Val or Paige."

"Dude, whats going on? You're freaking me out."

JC sighed. He couldnt believe himself. "I've been cheating on Paige."

Justin's eyes widened and his jaw dropped. "What?!"

"With Bobbie."

"Sh!t," was all that Justin could say.
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"All I want you to do is be a little more aware."

"Thats all?" Val asked

"Yeah." Paige said sighing.

"Girl, it cant be true! Its JC."

"I hope you're right."



ok seriously short chapter and it sucked, I know. And I didnt know how to spell Bobbie or Roberta's name :lol:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Sep 20, 2004 3:49 pm

JC and Bobbie ... that ain't right, man! :no: <_< JC better watch himself b/c I'll come after him and beat the crap outta him. No cheating on this little missy. :nono:

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Postby Tiff » Mon Sep 20, 2004 4:35 pm

OMG!!!!! Dang..... I knew it!!!! I hope Paige kicks his a** when she finds out. More plz!

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Sep 20, 2004 5:27 pm

we're gonna go gansta on his ass <_< :lol: DUDE! IDEARS! :sprint:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Sep 20, 2004 5:39 pm

Yeah, Paige gathers Val and her other girls and goes and tears JC a new a**hole. :rofl:

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:rofl:

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Mon Sep 20, 2004 6:20 pm

I KNEW IT!!! ok but thats messed up what jc did....... u need to expian y he chaeted on her!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Sep 20, 2004 6:22 pm

:lol: I dont have to do nothing, jk..

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Sep 20, 2004 9:31 pm

oh my gaw :o THEY KILLED SPEED ON CSI:MIAMI! NOOOOO! :cry: He was one of my favorite characters. This sucks <_<

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sat Sep 25, 2004 9:23 pm

Chapter 5

JC just waited as his friend sat there.

"JC, you cant expect me to keep this quite. Paige is my friend and my girlfriend's best friend."

"Im your friend to, J. Justin please. Let me be the one to tell her."

"Damnit JC, you shouldnt even have to tell her. You shouldnt be in this situation! Bobbie? What the hall are you thinking?" Justin said. This wasnt the JC he knew.

"I dont know, J. I saw her at a club and it just happend."

"How long has it been going on?" Justin asked. He couldnt believe this. What made it worse than it already was is the fac that it was Bobbie.

"6 months."

"sh** JC! What the hell is wrong with you? Bobbie someone everyone hates. Paige was there for you when you fond out Bobbie was using you. Do you know what your doing?"

JC could tell Justin was mad. He couldnt blame him. He stayed silent.

"You're not only hurting your relationhip JC. You're putting mine and Val's on the line."

"I know. Justin-"

"No. JC, you deal with this. Just, do the right thing." Justin said, sighing. JC knew he put Justin in a bad situation.

"I'll try." JC aid. He wasnt going to make Jusitn madder, so he didnt say what else he came there for. They both walked to the door.

"Im sorry, Justin."

"Me too."

alrighty then.. that be chapter... 5?

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good chapter!!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sun Sep 26, 2004 8:32 am

:thumbup: Very good chapter. JC better dig the truth out of his back pocket and tell Paige what's going on. Any girlfriend deserves to know something like this. :nod:

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Postby Tiff » Sun Sep 26, 2004 10:00 am

Great chapter!! JC better have the balls to tell Paige this. Hmm more plz!!

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Sep 26, 2004 12:16 pm

thanks for the feedback guys B)

Chapter 6

"Hey baby!" JC heard Paige say when she answered the phone.

"Hey." JC replied.

"Whats up? Thought you would come over today." Paige told her boyfriend.

"Um, I had some stuff to do, sweets. I stopped over by Justin's for a little bit."

"Oh, kool. So you wanna hang out tonight?" Paige asked.

"Um, not tonight babe. Im tired and I need to work on some stuff."

"Whats wrong?" Paige asked.

"Nothing, just gonna sit here and sleep. Maybe work on some songs. You know me." He said laughing a bit.

"Yeah, well, I'll talk to you later babe."

"Right. Love ya."

"Love you to." Paige said.

JC hung up the phone. He sighed. She didnt deserve any of this. His lieing. She believed all of it because she trusted him. She loved him. He didnt deserve her. He sat there thinking for awile. How'd he tell her? Maybe she didnt have to know. He could end this whole thing with Bobbie now. He could continue his life.
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"Hey, hon. Whats wrong?" Val asked Justin.

"Nothin." Justin told her. He was tired and scared. Scared of what would happen when she found out he know about JC and Bobbie. He didnt want to lose her. He couldnt lose her.

"Dont lie. Whats wrong?" She said walking over to him.

He sighed. "Im scared I'm going to lose you."

"Lose me?" She sat on his lap. "You're not going to lose me. Why do you think that?"

He swallowed. "I dont know."

"I love you. You know that."

"I know."

"Soooo... we doing anything tonight?" Val said, changing the subject.

He laughed. "Yeah. Dinner sound good?"

"Mmm." She said kissing him.

"Mmm..." He mumbled. He was going to make sure he didnt lose her.
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Val and Justin were on their way home from dinner.

"So you got a detention for that?" Justin said laughing.

"Yeah. Josh cried and told everyone I was the one that cried."

"Thats funny. You kicked him? I would have expected you to kick his ass. I mean, he did threated you."

"Yeah, haha." I was in second grade, come on."

"So? You could have taken him on."

"You havent seen him. How do you know he wasnt some big dude?"

Justin looked at her. "Yeah right. He cried, he's a sissy."

"You cry."

"Yeah but-"

"Whatever." Val laughed.

Justin pulled into his driveway and he got out and opened her door.

"Awwe. Such a gentleman."

"Damn straight."

Val rolled her eyes. They walked into Justin's house and then sat on the couch.

"I hate dresses." Val sighed.

"Then why are you wearing one?"

"To look beautiful for you."

"You already are beautiful."

"Awee. Thanks sweets."

"No problem." He said sitting next to her. He turned on the TV. She sat thinking awhile while he watched the TV.

"Hey Justin?"

"Hmm?"

"Come on." She said grabbing his hand and walkeed him upstaires.

"What are you doing?" He asked. She lead him into his bedroom and faced him.

"Val..." Justin said. She kissed him. Justin knew what she was trying to say.

"Val, we dont-"

"No, its ok." She said, slidding her dress off.
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well.. I know its not a very good chapter but... I dunno :shrug: MORE PAIGE AND JC stuff next chapter

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Postby Tiff » Sun Sep 26, 2004 12:26 pm

Good chapter!! I hope they have it tonight they need to get it on now!! More plz!!

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Sun Sep 26, 2004 12:31 pm

great chapter..... i love it.

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Sep 26, 2004 12:42 pm

thanks guys :D

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Sep 26, 2004 2:15 pm

lets get it on :dance:


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