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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sun Sep 26, 2004 8:50 pm

:D WOOOOOOOOO! Somebody is getting some lovin' tonight, and it ain't me cuz my son of a b**** boyfriend is a cheater, cheater pumpkin eater. :rofl: Go Val and JT! :bootyshake: :whip: :yay:

JC really does need to end it with the Bobster. :nod:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Sep 26, 2004 9:05 pm

:rofl: cheater, cheater pumpkin eater. Bobster? :rofl: Ah lord thats halarious. We gots our garoove on :dance: :whip:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Oct 04, 2004 4:31 pm

chapter 7

Justin sighed happily as her rolled over on the bed. Val wrapped her arm around his waist. Justin pushed her sweaty hair out of her face.

"I love you." Justin told her.

"Love you too." Val said.

Justin knew how important her staying a virgin till she was married was to her. He also knew that if she wasnt ready, she wouldnt have given herself to him.

"I dont have any clothes here."

"So?" He asked rolling on top of her.

She giggled. He leaned over and kissed her.

"We didnt have-"

"Justin, shut up." She smiled up at him.

"It should have been more romantic."

"More romantic? Justin, it was perfect." She said kissing him.

He sighed kissing her again. "You're perfect."

"I know." She said innocently.

He laughed. "Dont pull that innocent sh** with me. I know te truth now."

She pushed him onto his back and rolled on top of him letting the sheet fall. "You havent seen anything yet."
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Paige drove up JC's driveway wanting to surprise him. They hardly saw each other in the past week. A few phone calls here and there werent cutting it. She walked up to the door, not paying attention to the car in the driveway that wasnt JC's. She went up to the door and stopped to knock. "Wait, you dont have to knock." She walked in and heard voices. "What the?"

"Bobbie, it was all a mistake." JC said.

Bobbie? Paige thought. What the hell is she doing here? And what was a mistake?

"A mistake? JC-" Bobbie begged.

"I have a girlfriend. I love her."

"Love her? JC, you've been cheating on her for 6 months."

"WHAT?!" Paige said, now in the room.

JC looked up. "Paige..."



ah.. sucky chapter but hey.. its an update :lol:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Oct 04, 2004 4:54 pm

:yay: I'm glad that Val enjoyed the sex so much. :lol: I can see Val and Justin being sex freaks, so Paige is just gonna keep her eyes closed when she's in the room with them. :rofl:

Oh boy, what a way to find out about JC cheating! :nono: But he's trying to do the right thing. It would've been nice if he hadn't let little JC out of his pants like that, though. Guys and their sexual needs. :rolleyes:

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Postby Tiff » Mon Oct 04, 2004 5:06 pm

Wow! I'm glad Justin and Val got it on lol!

Aww I feel sorry for Paige....what a stupid way to find out the JC was cheating on her but atleast he was trying to break it up with Bobbie. Hmm more plz!

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Oct 04, 2004 5:07 pm

:rofl: Paige. Little JC? dude lol

Lol.. I enjoyed the sex very much. But dude... :thinking: You better keep your eyes shut.

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Mon Oct 04, 2004 5:36 pm

great story so far....... i got all happyu to see u and jt happy....... jc is a dickhead for cheating lol

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Oct 04, 2004 8:25 pm

:o Jackie! :runs and covers mouth:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Thu Oct 07, 2004 9:50 am

chapter 8

Paige looked at JC not understanding.

"Paige-" JC started.

"No, what the hell is she talking about?"

"He's been-" Bobbie began.

"Shut up and get the hell out before I kick your ass."

"This isnt-"

"Leave, Bobbie." JC said.

"Fine!" Bobbie said getting up and she pushed Paige out of the way to leave.

Paige waited till she heard the door slam before she started talking. "What the hell?"

"Paige-"

"Stop with the Paige sh** and tell me whats going on!"

"I've been cheating on you. For six months."

"With Bobbie?" Paige asked, mad.

"Yeah." JC said softly.

"Why?"

"It just happened."

"It just happened? For six months?"

"I dont know why, Paige. I just, I dont know!"

"How can you not know! I dont get it!"

"The first time was a mistake. But then it just kept happening."

"Who knew about this?" Paige asked.

"I tried talking to Justin but-" JC stopped.

"Justin knew?!"

JC nodded.

"I cant believe this! Does Val know?"

"No." JC said.

Paige shook her head. She had to do this and leave before she started to cry. "I cant do this anymore."

"What? Baby-" JC said, starting to walk over to her.

Paige shook her head. "No. Its over JC." She said turning around and walked to the door. JC just let her go. Paige got to her car before she started to cry.

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Thu Oct 07, 2004 10:15 am

:cry: :cry: Why do all guys turn out to be such jerks? :no: Val's just gonna have to let me have a threesome with her and Justin. That's our only option. ;) :lol: :D

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Thu Oct 07, 2004 10:18 am

:rofl:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Thu Oct 07, 2004 10:19 am

Baby, you know you want it. :whip:


And why did I click on that trailer for The Grudge. :nervous: Bad idea! Very bad! :ph34r:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Thu Oct 07, 2004 10:25 am

:rofl: did you play the game? :lol: I played it last night and scared the sh** out of myself :no:

omfg.. i was laughin so hard. I was watching this video thing when Chris gets on Justin's nerves. He's freakin funny. Justin's like WOULD U LET ME TALK!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Thu Oct 07, 2004 10:34 am

:laughup: Chris can easily get on someone's nerves. He likes to push people's buttons. :nod: :rofl:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Thu Oct 07, 2004 10:39 am

all the guys are sittin there laughin and Justin's like WOULD U LET ME TALK and Chris is like yeah. then at the end Chris does that.. you know when babies make that "airplane" nose? like.. BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB or w/e :rofl: Chris was doing that

How do you get those yousend or w/e things on here?

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Thu Oct 07, 2004 12:03 pm

Umm, go to http://www.yousendit.com, and then you'll put in your email address, or the person you want to send it to, and then you look through your files and find what you want to send, and then you hit the button and it starts uploading it. At the end, it'll give you a link if you want to post it on a messageboard or wherever.

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Thu Oct 07, 2004 1:34 pm

:blink: sorrry, WHAT?!

cant I just copy/paste the link? :lol:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Thu Oct 07, 2004 1:47 pm

:D Yeah, if you want to do things all nice and easy. Copying and pasting will work. :rofl: Val, you know I'm crazy and have no clue what I'm saying half, er, all of the time.

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Thu Oct 07, 2004 1:59 pm

well damn biatch why didnt you just say that :lol:

http://s2.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2A8678241377FE60E8CDAD4D0CD69962Either Under My Tree or Chris anoying Justin

http://s2.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=D737E1B5E72175D824FB99D0EA5A9297Ok.. either UMT or the chris thing rofl

I cant remember which is which :lol:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Thu Oct 07, 2004 5:54 pm

The first won't work for me, but the second one did. :rofl: :rofl: Gosh, I really miss *NSYNC after seeing that. :(

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Thu Oct 07, 2004 5:55 pm

well damn... u got the UMT one to work :(

I have no idea how to.. redo it or whatever. Maybe ill talk to the chick from the EMAIL group I got it from

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Thu Oct 28, 2004 1:54 pm

Chapter 9

"Paige! Whats wrong?" Val asked standing up when she saw her friend.

"Its true." Paige cried.

"Oh no! Im SO sorry!" Val said as she walked over to Paige and hugged her. Paige cried onto her shoulder.

"What am I gonna do, Val? I put 3 years into this and this is what I get? My heart broken?"

"Honnie, im so sorry. You'll get through this. Wanna kick his sorry white ass?"

Paige laughed and put her head on Val's shoulder after they sat down. "No,"

"Baby, Im-" Justin stopped when he walked into the room.

Val jumped when Paige stood up and slapped Justin.

"Paige! What the hell are you doing?" Val asked, shocked as she she stood by Justin.

"Why dont you ask your perfect boyfriend?" Paige said mad.

Val looked at Justin. "J?"

Justin sighed. "Valerie..." He trailed off.

Now she was scared. Justin never called her Valerie.

"I knew about JC." Justin said.

She looked up and heard Paige crying. "What? And you didnt tell Paige?"

"I couldnt-"

"What the hell do you mean you couldnt? You're supposed to be my friend!" Paige said.

"I am! But so is JC. What was I supposed to do?"

"You know what you should have done." Val said, obviously mad.

"Baby-"

"No! You cant purposly hurt my best friend like that and then think everythings going to be okay." Val said.

"Val-" Paige tried to say something.

"Justin, leave."

"But-" Justin tried to stop her.

"Now! And dont call, dont stop by. Nothing." Val said walking away from him to Paige. "I'll be in my room if you need to talk."

Paige glared at him, mad and shocked. "Leave."

"Paige, Im-"

"Go! You've ruined enough relationships tonight Justin. Just leave." She said turning aro und and walking up the stairs.

Justin stood there in shock and in hurt. Damnit! Now what was he going to do?

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Thu Oct 28, 2004 5:41 pm

:huh: DAMN! We sure were mean to Justin. :lol: Well, best buds gotta stick together, and stick up for one another, so thanks for having my back, Miss Val. Love ya for that, babe. :kiss:

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Postby Tiff » Thu Oct 28, 2004 6:09 pm

Awwww....you girls need to be alittle bit nicer lol j/k. I wonder how Justin's gonna get them to forgive them. Hmmm more plz!

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Thu Oct 28, 2004 8:04 pm

Awww.. Miss Paige.. love ya too :hug:

We werent mean.. we were nice. Come on :lol:

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Thu Oct 28, 2004 8:15 pm

wait i dunt get it! justin was just tring to protect both of them. but then again he should have said something! jc is stupid and should do something big to get back with paige. justin to..............great story so far val.

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Thu Oct 28, 2004 8:16 pm

thanks :D

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Nov 17, 2004 10:41 am

Chapter 10

"Are you gonna be okay?" Val asked Paige. It had been a week since Paige found out about JC.

"Yeah." Paige sniffled. "Imma be okay."

"Good."

Paige looked at her friend. "How about you? Are you okay?"

"Yeah."

"Dont lie to me. You're heart broken, Val. I can see it in your eyes."

"Im fine."

"This has nothing to do with you guys. Why are you letting it affect your relationship with the man you love?" Paige asked.

"He lied. He lied to me and to you. He hurt you."

"Hon, Justin wasnt the one that hurt me. I was upset that he didnt tell me." She said. "Val, c'mon. Im okay, see?" Paige said smiling and grinning.

Val laughed and then sighed. "Im stupid."

"Nope, you're just a great friend." She tossled Val's hair. "One of us has to be happy..."

"I..." Val started.

Paige rolled her eyes. "Go. Claim your love again or whatever."

Val laughed. "Ookay, dude." She grabbed her keys and hugged Paige. "You'll be happy again soon." Before Paige had a chance to respond, Val was gone.

"Lets hope so, Val."
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Justin dribbled the basketball and then took a shot. He sighed when the ball totally missed the hoop. "Damnit." He had been totally off since everything with Val, Paige, and JC happened. He hadnt really smiled, laughed, or done much since then. He went to get the ball when he turned around he saw a figure by the gate. He dropped the ball. "Val?"

Val nervously stood there, twisting her hands.

Justin moved closer.

"Uh.. hi." She said softly.

"Hi."

"Im sorry." Val said, now looking completetly at him. "I blew it way out of porpotion and I just..."

"Stop. You have nothing to be sorry for." Justin said, walking up to her so now he was directly in front of her.

She looked down. "I feel so stupid."

He lifted her head up with his finger. "You're not stupid."

"God it was only a week and I missed you so bad." Val laughed.

Justin smiled. "I missed you too." He leaned down and gently brushed his lips with hers, knowing he'd frustrate her.

She pouted as Justin pulled away before she could respond to the kiss. "Not fair." She grabbed his kneck and pulled his head down and kissed him. They stayed like that for awhile before pulling away.

"Mmm." She mumbled against his neck.

"Later. Now we need to get those to lovebirds back together..."




okay.. thats chapter 10, I belive :D What do you think? I think the next chapter is going to be the last... im not sure yet.

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Nov 17, 2004 12:30 pm

:wub: Val and Justin are back together! :wub: I'm such a nice friend and I know all the right answers. ;) :lol: But there's no reason for both of us to be manless and unhappy, so good for Val. :nod:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Nov 17, 2004 2:55 pm

:yay: :lol: im workin on the next chapter.. well.. thinking about it anywho...

thanksa Paige

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Postby Tiff » Wed Nov 17, 2004 6:56 pm

I'm here I'm here! Awww Justin and Val are back together. Hope they can get JC and Paige back together. Hmm wonder whats gonna happen next?

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Fri Nov 19, 2004 6:04 pm

thats cute i love it! yay for justin and val being together :wub: :safesex: not lets get something started! lol

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Dec 15, 2004 7:46 pm

Short update chapter 11

"Justin, what the hell are you doing?" Paige whined as Justin dragged her out the door.

"I told you, we're going to dinner." Justin said.

"So why are you dragging me?!" Paige asked.

"You were taking to long. I dont have all damn night, woman." Justin said, sighing. He let her go.

"Thank you. And its not easy to run in a dress and heels."

"Well if you wouldnt take so long we wouldnt have that problem."

Paige glared at him. "Dont start with me. I know where you sleep and who you sleep with. You dont have any idea what I could do."

Justin glanced at her with a smirk.

"You think im kidding?" Paige asked stopping.

Justin sighed frustratedly. "No! Lets go!"

They walked in silence for a few seconds. "Why are you picking me up for this? Why arent you with Val? And why isnt she picking me up. I'd think she'd pick me up before you would."

"She had to take care of something. She'll meet us at the resturtant. Now, will you shut up and walk?"

"Yes, master."
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"Slow down! Damnit we're only going to dinner." JC whined as Val dug her nails into his arm.

"Hurry up, then. Geesh. Im wearing heels and im going faster then you."

JC faked a laugh. "Funny."

"I know."

"So whats so important that you had to rush me?"

"I was running late while getting ready."

"Its only dinner."

"Yeah, but its not nice to keep people waiting!" Val said, sighing.

"Its only Justin. Why am I getting dragged along anyway? Dont you two want to be alone?"

"You need to get out. Besides, plenty of time for me and J to be alone later. Now shut up and walk!" Val said. She was running out of things to tell him. She wasnt the best liar. JC's known her to long to believe any lies she tells him. It had been silent for a few minutes now and Val was glad. She didnt say anything, she just drove.

"Why are you picking me up?"

"I was running late, so I told Justin to go to the resturant and wait."

"Riight." JC said raising an eyebrow at her.

"What?"

"Nothing."

"Okay. Now shut up and let me drive."




ok.. there was the short update! What did ya think?

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Wed Dec 15, 2004 7:59 pm

oooo i like it!

Justin and Val and trying to hook Paige and JC back up :wub: thats sooo cute! But JC is soooo freakin stupid for cheating on Paige....hun you just don't do something like that....ahhh men these days :no: MORE PLEASE!

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Dec 15, 2004 8:03 pm

:lol: Thanks Heather

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Dec 15, 2004 9:29 pm

Ahhhh, I see what's going on. :nod: Very sneaky, but certainly a great plan. Let's have a love connection, y'all! ^_^ Every girl needs a good man to love her. I want my JC back. :lol:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Dec 15, 2004 9:30 pm

Heather, you had to go point it out. Paige probably wouldnt have figured it out if it wasnt for you <_<


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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Dec 15, 2004 9:31 pm

:laughup: You are SO right. I would've thought that Justin and I were gonna get it on behind your back. :nana: :lol: :rofl: A girl needs lovin' when she can get it. :whip:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Dec 15, 2004 9:33 pm

:rofl: :huh: no way in HELL would u and my baby be gettin it on....... JC's a freaky little dude... remember that.



Wait, thats Trace :rofl:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Dec 15, 2004 9:40 pm

Then serve me up some Trace on a plate cuz homegirl is hungry. :chew:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Dec 15, 2004 9:41 pm

:puts Trace on plate and hands to Paige: Go to town.. but dont hurt him to bad. Im not done with him yet

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Thu Dec 16, 2004 5:46 pm

whatchagot4meMRJT wrote: Then serve me up some Trace on a plate cuz homegirl is hungry. :chew:

:laughup: :rofl: Oh that made me laugh for some reason lol...but anywho..i second that...Trace is a hot malafala :rofl:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Thu Dec 16, 2004 6:25 pm

:lol: Trace. is. mine. I am just sharing :D

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Thu Dec 16, 2004 7:07 pm

haha cute chapter. haha trace is cute. anyways i hope paige and jc get back together......................even though he is mine..lol

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sat Jan 01, 2005 11:38 pm

Last Chapter, ya'llz!

"Ya'll suck!! That was NO fair!" JC complained after Val and Justin beat him at Uno.

"Get over it you big baby!" Val said.

"Hey! Be nice!" Paige said coming over to sit on JC's lap.

It had been close to a year since Val and Justin's plan to get JC and Paige back together. It hadnt been easy. Paige and JC saw each other and they both left. But now things were great. JC had proposed a few months ago and they were planning for a summer wedding.

"So... what do ya'll wanna do now?" Paige asked, bored.

Justin cleared his thoat and looked at JC. "Well..."

"OOH!! Paige... I forgot. Joey wanted us to go out to dinner with him and Kelly tonight." JC said.

"Nice timing, Jayce." Paige said rolling her eyes.

"Sorry, I forgot. We better get going or we're gonna be late."

"But-" Paige said as JC dragged her to the door.

"We havent seen them since the wedding, please?!" JC whined.

"Fine." Paige sighed. "See ya'll later"

"Bye!" Justin said.

"Tell Joe and Kel hi for me!" Val said.

"Will do!" Paige said, walking out the door.

Val sighed as she sat down, expecting Justin to sit down next to her. He didnt.

"Where you going, babe?" Val whined.

Justin laughed. "Upstairs.. see that box on the table? Open that.. do as the note says.. and dont come upstairs. Got it?"

Val raised her eyebrows. "But-"

"Val..." Justin said giving her the puppy eyes.

"Damnit, fine." Val said rolling her eyes.

"Thanks." Justin said walking over to her giving her a quick peck on the lips.

"You know I hate when you do stuff like this."

"I know."

"You owe me for it."

"Believe me, tonight'll do it." Justin said running up the stairs.

Val sighed and watched him run up the stairs before she turned to the box on the table. She stood up and walked over to the table and took the box into her hands. She opened it. On top of all the wrapping was a note.

Baby,
Put this on and wait in the living room for me.
Love, J


She undid the wrapping and looked at the item of clothing that was in it.

"Wow." She took the piece of clothing out of the box and held it up. Justin did good this time.
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Justin lit the last candle on the table before looking around. He sighed. He hoped she liked this. He wanted tonight to be very romantic and special for her. Taking one more look around, he walked out of the room to get Val.
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Val sat patiently on the couch while waiting for Justin. Hearing him on the stairs, she stood up. Justin stopped in front of her. She took his breath away. She was wearing a blue, silky dress that went to her ankles.

"You look..." Justin couldnt even finish his sentence.

Val smiled and tilted her head. "Thanks. You did a nice job picking this out. And you look good."

Justin smirked. He had on a pair of black dress pants and a nice dress shirt.

"So... whats going on?"

"C'mon." He said holding his hand out to Val. She took it and followed closily as they walked up the stairs.

"Close your eyes." Justin said when they got to the top of the staircase.

Val closed her eyes and let herself be led down the hall to where she assumed was the bedroom. She heard the door open and felt herself be led in a little ways. She felt Justin go behind her and push her forward a little bit.

"Okay, open your eyes."

Val slowly opened her eyes and was in shock of what was in front of her. Justin had lit tons of candles around the bedroom, and put petals all over the floor and on the bed.

"Oh my god!" Val said, teary eyed.

"So, do you like it?" Justin said walking in front of her.

Val just nodded and laughed a little because she was crying. "I love it." She said hugging him.

Justin kissed her neck and pulled back. "Im glad. I didnt mean to make you cry." He said, gently brushing the tears away.

Val just shook her head.

Justin sighed neverously and anxiously at the same time. He had tears now, also.

"Baby, I love you so much. I cant imagine my life without you. It would be empty and I cant imagine what I'd be like without you. You're my everything. You're all I want." He said, stopping for a moment to try to compose himself. "Valerie Kay Nicholas," he said getting down on one knee. "Will you marry me?"

Val cried harder and she was shaking. "Y-yes!"

Justin quckly got up and hugged her.

This was the begining of everybody's life.
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"Are you nervous?" Val asked Paige as she fixed Paige's veil.

"A little. Im so excited!!" Paige laughed.

"Oh my god you're getting married! My best friend's getting married!" Val squealed as she and Paige hugged. They both laughed.

"This'll be you soon."

"I know." Val smiled happily. "You look.. amazing, Paige." Paige was wearing a simple strapless white gown that had sequens down the back of it and in the front. Her veil was simple and her hair was down and wavy.

"Thanks. You look great too!" Val was Paige's maid of honor. She was wearing a red, spaghetti strap dress that dropped down a bit at the chest. Her hair was up with little waves coming down.

"Thanks."

A knock at the door sounded. "Can I come in?" A male voice asked.

"Come on in, Mr. Donaldson." Val said to Paige's Dad.

"You girls look beauitful."

"Thanks dad." Paige said giving him a kiss on the check.

"Its time. Ready?"

Paige took a deep breath. "Ready."

The wedding went amazing and everyone had a great time at the reception. There was lots of flowers. The honeymoon was in France.
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"Its your turn!" Paige said as she fixed her dress. It had been 6 months since her and JC's wedding. She was so excited for her friend.

"I know!" Val said turning around.

"Wow, Val.. you look... beautiful." She was wearing a white, simple dress that at the chest it drooped down a bit. It was a straight dress and the back flared out a bit. Her hair was straight and pined back, with a little tiara in her hair.

"Thanks. You look amazing, also." Paige was her bridesmaid, since Val's sister Brandi was her maid of honor. She was wearing a blue speghetti strap dress that flared out at the bottom.

"Thanks."

"Everybody decent in there?" Val's dad said from outsite the door.

Val laughed. "You can come in dad."

"They told me to come in so... wow. Valerie, you look beautiful."

"Thanks, daddy." Val said giving him a quick hug. "Is it time?"

"Yes."

"Lets do it!"


The End

:lol: Sorry it kinda sucked :ph34r: what did ya'll think?

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Sat Jan 01, 2005 11:46 pm

oh my god!!! thats such an romantic way to propose!!! awww! justin is so sweet. and they both got married awwww....... i love it. you need to write a sequel to tell about there lives after the weddings......

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sat Jan 01, 2005 11:49 pm

:lol: thanks Jackie.

We'll see about a sequel. I have Unexpected to finish first

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sun Jan 02, 2005 10:31 am

:wub: :wub: :wub: Awwww, we both got married to the loves of our lives. :wub: :wub: Val, you and I need to make this fiction a reality. :nod: Off to find Justin and JC! :lol: :sprint:

Excellent story. Loved every chapter of it. :yay: :clap:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Jan 02, 2005 1:31 pm

:sprint: Im on it!!

Thanks Paige :yay:

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Sun Jan 02, 2005 9:53 pm

awww both Val and Paige got to get married to the loves of their lives :wub: thats soo cute! And their dresses sound soo pretty :wub: i love weddings man :rofl: i'm sorry that its over but i loved it!


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