Hatred Turned Into Love

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Mon Nov 01, 2004 10:26 pm

Chapter 1
Jackie is a 21 year old. She is a fashion designer for the stars. She has worked with people like Britney spears, Justin Timberlake, and Christina Millian. One day she gets a call that Jc chasez needs outfits for his up coming tour. She meets up with him and shows him her ideas.
“Hi I’m Jackie Wright.â€￾
“Yea yea I’m in a rush!â€￾
“Um ok these are some of my ideas!â€￾
“I hate them all redo them! I got to go bye!â€￾ and he walks out.
“Damn he is so rude you heard him Valerie?â€￾
Valerie is her friend and assistant.
“Yea I didn’t think he would be like that!â€￾
“I don’t like him no more!â€￾
“Well he might have been in a bad mood!â€￾
“Maybe but that just turned all my fan feelings for him away!â€￾
“Me too!â€￾
Jackie and Valerie then go home. They live together in New York City. Jackie stays up all night redoing the designs. The next morning.
“Jackie wake up!â€￾ she shakes Jackie. She is sleeping on her bed with papers all over.
“What what?â€￾ Jackie looks around.
“Jc’s manager is on the phone!â€￾
“Damn at 6 in the morn! Hello!â€￾
“Hi Jc had to cancel!â€￾
“Why I spent all night redoing these designs!â€￾
“He is being lazy today!â€￾
“What when can I show him these?â€￾
“Next week at the same place!â€￾
“OK bye!â€￾
“What happened?â€￾ asks Valerie while putting the phone back.
“He canceled because he was lazy!â€￾
“That’s messed up!â€￾
“Yea help me put these in his folder!â€￾
“OKâ€￾
“I hate him even more now!â€￾
“I do to!â€￾
“I’m going back to sleep I am mad tired!â€￾
“Yea me to!â€￾ Valerie giggles
They both go to sleep.

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Nov 01, 2004 10:27 pm

damn JC :angry: stop being a jerk.

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Tue Nov 02, 2004 8:15 am

JC ... :nono: That's wrong, man. :no: Show Jackie some respect for her designs and for staying up all night trying to fix them. <_<

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Fri Nov 05, 2004 10:26 pm

Chapter 2
It’s the day Jackie shows her 2nd designs to Jc. Valerie cant make it because she went to visit her mother. She goes to the place. This time its in a small room on a Friday afternoon.
“You’re an hour late Jc!â€￾
“Oh sorry!â€￾
“It’s ok here’s the new designs!â€￾
“I like them but the colors on #5 I don’t like! Change them now!â€￾
“Ok what color would you like it?â€￾ she takes out another piece of paper and her colored pencils.
“Um blue!â€￾ he says then he turns around. Jackie then starts to draw it and she colors it. It takes her about 20 minutes. Jc is still on his cell phone.
“I’m done Mr. Chasez!â€￾ she says while pushing the paper to him.
“I love it! Now lets get out of here!â€￾ its about 10 o’clock and the place has shut down until Monday. Jc tries to open the door but it’s locked. “Uh oh!â€￾
“Uh oh what?â€￾ Jackie says while looking confused.
“The door is locked and no one will be back until Monday!â€￾ he says while standing there.
“Call someone on your cell phone!â€￾
“The battery just went dead!â€￾
“Are you freaking serious?â€￾
“Yes I’m not joking!â€￾
“Great I have clients to see tomorrow!â€￾
“What can I do? Nothing so back off!â€￾
“Fine you know what you stay over there and ill stay over here!â€￾
“Fine whatever!â€￾ they both sit down. Jackie works on some ideas. Jc just sits there drawing on paper. Eventually Jackie fell asleep. Jc sits at the table and watches Jackie as she sleeps. He gets up and puts his jacket under her head and goes to sleep on the other side.


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Postby miniamylynnlee » Fri Nov 05, 2004 10:35 pm

there seems from their constant bickering that they likee each other. ohhhh! more plz! :lol:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Fri Nov 05, 2004 10:39 pm

Jackie... screw taking it slow.. LET JC JUMP YOU!!

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Sat Nov 06, 2004 4:23 pm

lol val

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Postby Tiff » Sat Nov 06, 2004 4:34 pm

Man what are they gonna do? Better not get their grove on just yet. JC be nicer would ya? Treat the lady with some respect! More plz

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sat Nov 06, 2004 7:10 pm

Yeah, JC -- be nice to Jackie. Her designs rock and she works hard to please you, dude. Maybe if they're stuck together long enough, they'll get to some kissing and loving. :lol:

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Sun Nov 07, 2004 5:59 pm

Chapter 3
It’s the next morning and Jc is looking at Jackie’s designs again.
“What are you doing?â€￾ asks Jackie while rubbing her eyes.
“I’m looking over the designs!â€￾
“Oh ok! I have to take a pee!â€￾
“I went pee in that bucket!â€￾ he points to the corner.
“Eww that’s nasty!â€￾
“I know but where else are ya gonna go?â€￾
“I don’t know! Just don’t look!â€￾
“Ok I wont!â€￾ Jc turns around while she goes.
“That feels better!â€￾
“Listen Jackie I am sorry for how I’ve acted during the past week!â€￾
“OH it’s ok!â€￾
“No it’s not. You worked hard on the designs and I’ve been acting like a jerk!â€￾
“Yea!â€￾
“So why don’t you tell me about yourself!â€￾
“Like what?â€￾
“Like your favorite movies, cd’s, about your life!â€￾
Jackie thinks for a second. “do I really wanna tell him?â€￾ then she decides to.
“Lets see my favorite color is baby blue. My favorite group is *Nsync……â€￾
“Yay you like *Nsync!â€￾
“Of course!â€￾
“So what else?â€￾
“Hmm I love to dance!â€￾
“Maybe you can be a backup dancer for me?â€￾
“Well I have my designing!â€￾
“So put it on hold for a year!â€￾
“That’s a great idea! But how do you know that I am any good?â€￾
“There’s a radio over there I can put that on!â€￾
“Okâ€￾ Jc then puts the radio on. Some girls dance with women comes on and Jackie starts dance. Half way through he comes up behind Jackie and they start grinding. After the song Jackie looks at Jc.
“So how did you like my dancing?â€￾
“I liked it a lot!â€￾
“Thanks!â€￾ then they both looked into there eyes and started to lean in for a kiss.
“You know what! I am starving!â€￾ says Jackie as she looks around.
“I have some candy in my bag if you want?â€￾
“Sure!â€￾
Jc gives Jackie a snicker bar. Jackie thinks to herself. She thinks that she is stupid for not kissing Jc.


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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sun Nov 07, 2004 6:09 pm

Aww man, they were this close to getting some lip action going. Kiss him, Jackie. Kiss him.

:rofl: @ JC peeing in the bucket. :rofl: I loved that. :lol:

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Postby Tiff » Sun Nov 07, 2004 6:11 pm

Jackie what were u thinking girl? You should have kissed him.

:rofl: JC and peeing in the bucket. I wouldn't have done that but if i had to go bad i would have done it.

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Nov 07, 2004 9:20 pm

:rofl: Peeing in a bucket

DAMNIT JACKIE! AND YOU YELLED AT ME FOR NOT INVITING JUSTIN IN! :no:

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Mon Nov 08, 2004 6:24 pm

Chapter 4
Jackie finishes the candy bar. Jc just sits there! By this time its 2 o’clock.
“Jackie I was wondering if you had feelings for me?â€￾
“Actually I do have feelings for you! Why do you ask?â€￾
“Well I have feelings for you!â€￾
“Oh I see!â€￾ Jackie goes and sits next to Jc. Jc then looks at Jackie and puts his hand on her hand. Jackie looks at his hand then into his eyes. They lean in and kiss. This is a romantic kiss. They pull back.
“Wow Jackie you’re a good kisser!â€￾
“Thanks!â€￾
“So can I give you another kiss!â€￾
“I would love that!â€￾ they start to kiss again.
After they kiss this I promise you came on the radio and they start to slow dance.
“So do you have a boyfriend ?â€￾
“Actually no. You just gave me my first kiss!â€￾
“Wow and your that good of a kisser?â€￾
“I guess so!â€￾ Jackie giggles.
“Yea you are a good kisser!â€￾
“Thanks!â€￾
“So would you ever consider us as boyfriend and girlfriend?â€￾
“Yea I would!â€￾
“So do you wanna be my girlfriend?â€￾
“I would love that?â€￾
They continue to dance.
“Hey do you wanna be noisy and go through that file cabinet?â€￾
“Yea!â€￾
They go through it. Its all papers and stuff.
“Jackie look what I found!â€￾ he pulls out 3 bottles of liquor.
“Lets drink it!â€￾
After awhile of them drinking it Jackie and Jc get drunk and end up having sex.
The a few hours later Jackie and Jc are lying there naked. Jackie wakes up first.
“Ah what happened?â€￾
“I didn’t steal the flower!â€￾
“What Jc? Whatever what happened last night?â€￾
“All I remember is that we were drinking!â€￾
“And it ended up in us having sex!â€￾
“I don’t even know but by the looks of it we did!â€￾
“That’s the first time I’ve even had sex!â€￾
“Oh really?â€￾
“Yes! Now can you pass me my clothes!â€￾
Jackie and Jc get dresses.
“What time is it Jc?â€￾
“9 o’clockâ€￾
“Oh ok I wonder what Valerie is thinking?â€￾
“Oh! Look there’s a vent maybe it will lead us out of here!â€￾
“Yea you go through first!â€￾
“Okâ€￾
Jc climbs through. All of the sudden Jc yells!
“Jackie I found a room!â€￾
“Should I climb through?â€￾
“Yea!â€￾
Jackie then climbs through……

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Nov 08, 2004 6:29 pm

Would you be my girlfriend? :dance:

See what happens when you're locked in a room all alone with JC -- kissing, dancing, drunken sex ... :lol:

I wonder what's in the room that they've just crawled to. :thinking:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Nov 08, 2004 9:37 pm

it better be the room me and JT are gettin in on in :lol:

ROFL.. I DIDNT STEAL THE FLOWER :rofl:

:cry: Paige, I want my dvd's

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Tue Nov 09, 2004 7:17 pm

Chapter 5
“Ew there’s spiders in here!â€￾ says Jackie while rushing through.
“Oh come on Jackie!â€￾
All of the sudden Jackie hits her head .
“Ah that hurt!â€￾
“Are you ok?â€￾
“Yea I’m fine!â€￾ then Jackie comes out into the room. The room looks like a boss’s room. It has a couch, desk, TV, and a little refrigerator.
“Wow there’s a phone lets try to get through!â€￾
“It doesn’t work!â€￾
“Damn it all! I’m freezing!â€￾
“I know me to!â€￾
“Lets look for any blankets!â€￾
“Look Jc its snowing!â€￾
“Wow its snowing hard!â€￾
“Yea look I found a quilt.â€￾
“OKâ€￾
They go on the couch and go under the quilt.
“What happens if I’m pregnant?â€￾
“Well I would be the father right?â€￾
“Yea! But would you be in the baby’s life?â€￾
“Of coarse I am not one of those guys that get a girl pregnant and leave!â€￾
“That’s good. I wouldn’t be able to take care of a child by myself!â€￾
“Yea I know what your saying!â€￾
“So are you wondering if their trying to find you?â€￾
“Yea and you?â€￾
“Yea my friend Valerie is probly freaking out!â€￾
“Oh sucks that we have no phones!â€￾
“Yea!â€￾
“So what do you wanna do?â€￾
“Sleep its 10 o clock at night!â€￾
“How are we gonna lie?â€￾
“We can both sleep on this couch.â€￾
“Yea!â€￾
They both lie down and all of the sudden Jc gets up and lie on top of Jackie and starts kissing her. Next thing they know there having sex. Afterwards they fall asleep. The next morning Jc is looking out the window. Jackie all of the sudden wakes up.
“I didn’t do it mom!â€￾ she yells as she jumps up and falls off the couch.
“Well if you didn’t do it then who did?â€￾ asks Jc while getting Jackie a cup of coffee from the coffee pot that’s in the room.
“Oh sorry I was dreaming. Hey the power is back on!â€￾
“Yea and so is the heat! Why don’t you get dressed!â€￾
“Yea I will! Is it still snowing?â€￾
“Yes it is the news said its not gonna stop till later!â€￾
“Oh cool!â€￾ she says while drinking some coffee.â€￾
“Yep so how did you sleep?â€￾
“Good! You?â€￾
“Fine.â€￾

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Tue Nov 09, 2004 7:37 pm

:P I wonder if Jackie's pregnant? :thinking: JC and his powerful sperm. :lol: It's a good thing he's going to stay and help her care for the child if they were to have one. :thumbup: We can't be having these deadbeat dads. :no:

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Postby Tiff » Tue Nov 09, 2004 7:49 pm

What if she is pregnant? Well atleast JC will be there for her and the baby. Hmm wonder whats gonan happen.

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Tue Nov 09, 2004 8:02 pm

Damn.. JC gettin everbodies preggers :no:

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Thu Nov 11, 2004 7:35 pm

Chapter 6
After they have coffee they sit and watch some TV. All of the sudden the phone rings.
“Should we answer it Jc?â€￾
“No!â€￾
“Why?â€￾
“After it finishes we will call to get us out of here!â€￾
“Ok!â€￾
After the phone finishes ringing Jackie picks up and calls Valerie.
“Hello Val!â€￾
“Jackie is that you?â€￾
“Yes it is!â€￾
“Oh my god where have you been?â€￾
“Me and Jc got locked in a room in the building we are in!â€￾
“Oh my god! Are you guys ok?â€￾
“Yea! Come get us out of here!â€￾
“Ok I will let me call the building owner!â€￾
“Ok ill call you in about an hour!â€￾
“Ok bye!â€￾
“Bye Ill do my best!â€￾
They hang up.
“She said she’s gonna call some people and to call her back in an hour.â€￾
“That’s good! So are you gonna tell her about us?â€￾
“Yea I will once this whole thing is over.â€￾
“I have to use the bathroom. I’m going to the corner in the bucket!â€￾
“Ok!â€￾
Just then Jc’s cell phone rings.
“Jackie pick that up for me!â€￾
“Ok! Hello!â€￾
“Hi baby its Kelly!â€￾
“Hi this is Jackie!â€￾
“Jackie where’s my hunk Jc?â€￾
“Um hold on! Jc some girl named Kelly is on the phone!â€￾
“Oh!â€￾ he walks over and Jackie has an upset face on. “Hi Kelly. Why are you calling me?â€￾
“I want you!â€￾
“Listen Kelly you gotta stop calling me when your drunk!â€￾
“I’m aloud to call you whenever I wanna! I need you!â€￾
“Listen I gotta go bye!â€￾
He hangs up and turns off his cell phone.
“What was that about Jc?â€￾
“That was my ex girlfriend who thinks we are still together!â€￾
“Why is she calling saying baby and hunk?â€￾
“She’s drunk! She’s always drunk. That’s why I broke it off!â€￾
“Ok! I don’t know if I can believe you!â€￾ she says playfully.
“Oh I see! How about this!â€￾ he kisses her.
“I believe you!â€￾
Then Jackie calls Valerie back.
“Yea Val what happened?â€￾
“The owner is gonna be there in about 2 hours!â€￾
“Ok thank the lord!â€￾
“I’ll be there to!â€￾
“Ok I’ll see you then!â€￾
“Bye!â€￾
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Postby Tiff » Thu Nov 11, 2004 7:49 pm

Hmmm I wonder if JC is telling the truth or not cuz he might not. Hmmm atleast they are getting out of there soon. More plz!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Fri Nov 12, 2004 8:22 am

Peeing in the corner bucket again. :rofl: Like Annie says, "When you gotta go, you gotta go. :lol:

I hope that JC is being truthful about Kelly. He can't go around leading two girls on. :no:

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Sat Nov 13, 2004 7:11 pm

Chapter 7
After Jackie hangs up with Valerie Jc and Jackie sit there on the couch. Jc and Jackie hold hands and talk.
“How are you gonna break the news to Valerie?â€￾
“I think I’ll just tell her when I see her!â€￾
“Oh ok!â€￾
“Why’d you ask?â€￾
“Just wondering.â€￾
“Ok!â€￾
“Jackie I know this will sound weird but I love you!â€￾
Jackie sits there and doesn’t know how to react. She sits there in aw. She looks at Jc and smiles.
“Jc how can you say that? We only knew each other for a few days!â€￾
“I feel like we’ve known each other for a long time! And us staying here these 3 days I’ve grown to love you! Hope you do to!â€￾
“Actually no I don’t! I’ve only known you for a couple days and how do you really know if you love someone in that short of time?â€￾
“You make me feel like no one has ever made me feel.â€￾
“Ok but when I’m ready to tell you I love you ill tell you!â€￾
“Ok!â€￾
Then they kiss! Then the owner of the building comes in with Valerie!
“VALERIE!â€￾ Jackie runs over to Valerie with excitement and gives her a big hug.
“Jackie are you ok?â€￾
“Yes I’m fine!â€￾
“Oh it must have been hell with Jc meaning he has been a rude sob to you!â€￾
“Actually me and Jc are dating now!â€￾
“What?â€￾
“We got to know each other and we got really close!â€￾
“Oh that’s great!â€￾
“Hi Valerie! I’ve heard so much about you from Jackie and you seem like a nice person!â€￾
“Oh thanks!â€￾
They all leave the building! They all go to the apartment.
“Listen Jackie I have to go! Ill call you later. Ok baby?â€￾
“Yea ok Jc!â€￾ they kiss and Jc leaves.
“So Jackie. Tell me what happened in there!â€￾
“Ok ill basically give it to you in a nut shell!â€￾
“Okâ€￾
“Friday night was like hell. We fell asleep and when I woke up Jc was looking at my designs and he said he was sorry for being rude. Then we started talking and we found a radio dance then we kissed. Then we ended up having sex! That’s about it!â€￾
“You guys had sex! Jackie you just couldn’t wait to get into his pants!â€￾
“Yea you know!â€￾ they both giggle.
“How was it!â€￾
“It was interesting…. It felt good!â€￾
“I would bet it would feel good!â€￾

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sat Nov 13, 2004 8:14 pm

:yay: I'm glad that they're finally out of the building and Jackie got to see Val. :wub: Now Jackie and JC can continue their relationship and see what it leads to. I understand someone not being able to declare their love after only a few days. :nod:

(Jackie ... thanks for the shout out, mama. :kiss: I definitely think you're a sweetie and I'd love to get to know you more. :kiss:)

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Chapter 8
Its been a few months since they got out of the building. Jc and Jackie are in Jc’s house talking.
“You know it’s a good thing I didn’t get pregnant!â€￾
“Why I wanted a baby?â€￾
“To tell you the truth its to early in our relationship to have a baby!â€￾
“Yea I understand!â€￾
Just then the doorbell rings. Jc answers the door. It’s the police.
“Hi is Jackie Wright here?â€￾
“Yea why?â€￾
“Can we talk to her!â€￾
“Um yea come in!â€￾
“Hi Jackie! Please sit down!â€￾
“Ok.â€￾
“Valerie is your best friend right?â€￾
“Yea what happened?â€￾
“She got hit by a car and is in the hospital!â€￾
“Oh my god!â€￾ Jackie starts to cry.
“Can we go see her?â€￾
“Yes. We can take you there!â€￾
“I would like that!â€￾
They go to the hospital and Jackie goes in the room alone. She sees Valerie lying there and breaks down crying!
“Why are you crying Jackie?â€￾
“I cant bare to see you like this?â€￾
“I’m fine don’t cry!â€￾
“When they said you were in a car accident I thought I had lost you!â€￾
“Don’t worry you didn’t! I’ll be out and about soon!â€￾
“Ok!â€￾ then Jc walks in.
“How are you Valerie?â€￾
“I’m great!â€￾
“So when will you be out?â€￾
“Soon I hope!â€￾
“Me to!â€￾
Jc and Jackie spend a few hours there with Valerie. Then they go home. After a few months Valerie has recovered and is hanging out a lot with Jc.
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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Nov 15, 2004 6:46 pm

Im glad im okay :lol:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Nov 15, 2004 7:08 pm

:yay: Thank goodness Val is okay. I was very worried. :nervous:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Nov 15, 2004 7:17 pm

:rofl: Jackie just told me she was gonna kill me off

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Mon Nov 15, 2004 7:23 pm

you make it sound like im a bad person lol

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Nov 15, 2004 7:30 pm

Aww, my Val is a goner. :cry: Baby girl, you're GONE. :lol:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Nov 15, 2004 7:30 pm

:lol: sorry

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Postby Tiff » Mon Nov 15, 2004 7:32 pm

Girls no fighting!

I'm glad that Val's ok. I was worried for a second. Hmmm wonder whats gonna happen with JC and Val since they're hanging out a lot.

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Nov 15, 2004 7:34 pm

whatchagot4meMRJT wrote: Aww, my Val is a goner. :cry: Baby girl, you're GONE. :lol:

:lol: keep singing to me babe, i luuuuuuuuurve that song

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Nov 15, 2004 8:39 pm

There's a thousand words that I could say to make you come home. Seems so long ago you walked away, and left me alone :whistle:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Nov 15, 2004 8:44 pm

that was weird.. I saw you were singing and I let out a squeak :lol:

...and I remember what you said to me
you were acting so strange, mm
and mabye i was to blind to see
that you needed a change


I :wub: them and this song

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Nov 15, 2004 8:46 pm

I'll :wub: the song until my dying day. That's my song, dude. ^_^ And I'm singing all the time, so that'll be a lot of squeaking. :rofl:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Nov 15, 2004 8:52 pm

:wub: I'll love this song forever and there's only a like.. 40 others I will also love forever :lol: I think I squeaked because I love people who sing NSYNC to me. Its strange, I know.. but :shrug: Im also singing all the time.. I always have a song in my head.. always. When im at school ill randomly say out loud "I have a song in my head" and Oinky will go "Damnit, now that you said that you have a song stuck in your head, im going to have a song stuck in my head"

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Nov 15, 2004 8:56 pm

:rofl: Hahahaha, yeah, it only takes one mention of a song, and it'll be stuck in my head for awhile. :nod:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Nov 15, 2004 9:06 pm

I was like.. :unsure: okay.. Jarod.. I didnt say who i had stuck in my head. But then he starts singing Good Charlotte or Stacy's Mom :lol:

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Tue Nov 16, 2004 6:29 pm

Chapter 8
Jackie is at her apartment getting ready to go to Jc’s house. Valerie went to hang out with friends, well that’s what she told Jackie. Jackie then drives to Jc’s house. Valerie’s car was parked a block down but Jackie didn’t pay any attention to it. She drives into Jc’s driveway and parks. It’s Jackie’s and Jc’s 10 month anniversary. Jackie walks up to the door and she hears moans coming from inside. Jackie thought it was just Jc watching his porn again. So she just walks in and walks to his bedroom. She puts her ear to the door and hers Valerie’s voice.
Jackie starts to get worried. She peeks in and sees Valerie sitting on Jc grinding on his nono. Jackie starts crying and opens the door.
“How can you do this to me Valerie?â€￾
“What? Oh my god Jackie it’s not what you think!â€￾
“It looks to me like you guys and having sex!â€￾
“Jackie baby I’m sorry! I don’t know what I was thinking!â€￾
“You weren’t thinking! Jc we are over and Valerie you can move out! Bye!â€￾
Jackie runs out and drives away. Jackie goes in her apartment and throws Valerie’s stuff on the floor. She crawls up in the corner and cries. Valerie walks in.
“Jackie just listen to me!â€￾
“Why you are such a bad friend!â€￾
“You know how hard it is for me to get a man!â€￾
“So you don’t have to steal mine!â€￾
“To tell you the truth I was using him!â€￾
“Using him?â€￾
“Yea. Just to say I’m not a virgin. I mean I’m 25!â€￾
“So I was a virgin until I was 29!â€￾
“Yea but I don’t know what to tell you! I am so sorry!â€￾
“Valerie don’t you know how I feel about him!â€￾
“I know but……â€￾
“Then you shouldn’t have done it. I’ll never forgive you or Jc!â€￾
Jackie gets up and locks herself in her bedroom. Valerie packs up her stuff and moves back to her home town.
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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Tue Nov 16, 2004 6:33 pm

im such a slut :no:

his nono :rofl:

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Postby Tiff » Tue Nov 16, 2004 6:55 pm

Oh No!!!!!!! JC cheated on Jackie with Val! Jackie wont forgive JC or Val,well I wouldn't if i was her. Hmm winder whats gonna happen next. More plz!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Tue Nov 16, 2004 7:00 pm

:o Grinding his no-no is a huge NO-NO. :rofl: Nice one, Val. :thumbup:

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Chapter 9
It’s been a few months since the breakup. Jackie hasn’t talked to Valerie or Jc. One day Jackie just decides to go for a walk through the local park. While she’s out Jc goes in her apartment and sets up a picnic on her floor. He puts rose petals on her bed with a ring. An engagement ring. Jackie had forgot that she gave a key to Jc. Jc wrote a song and recorded it and puts it on her stereo so she can here it when she walks in. he hides behind the couch. Jackie walks in and sees the picnic on the floor. She looks around. Then she hears the song come on. She starts to cry. It’s a very short song, more like a poem. The song goes like this:
Since the first time I saw you I knew you were the one for me. When I got you my world changed for the better. You were my everything, my soul. Then I did something stupid and tore us apart. My heart broke. I am a lonely soul with no one to love. If only I can have my true love back will this lonesome man be happy.
Then Jc pops out from behind the couch.
“What are you doing here?â€￾
“I wanted to say how sorry I was. I love you baby!â€￾
“But how did you get in here?â€￾
“I have a key. Remember you gave it to me?â€￾
“Oh yea. This is really sweet but I don’t know if I can trust you!â€￾
“Jackie I know that I did a stupid thing but I love you so much!â€￾
“Prove it!â€￾
“Ok hold on!â€￾ Jc then gets the ring. He bends down on one knee. Jackie looks at him and starts crying again. “Jackie I love you! I wanna spend everyday with you! Will you marry me!â€￾
Jackie looks at him and finally says yes!
They hug and kiss.
“I made some food for us.â€￾
“What did you make?â€￾
“Chicken cutlets and baked ziti!â€￾
“Yummy!â€￾
“So are you going to forgive Valerie?â€￾
“I don’t know. Why?â€￾
“She called me up last week and was really upset about it!â€￾
“I guess I can call her and talk to her about it!â€￾
“Yea! So what do you have planned for us tonight?â€￾
“Nothing. I was just let anything happen!â€￾
“Oh. Okâ€￾
They eat there food and then Jc takes Jackie into the bedroom where they get there freak on.
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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Tue Nov 16, 2004 7:24 pm

:rofl: Paige, that was cornier than sh** but funny at that

yeah.. im smoooooooth :pimp:

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Postby Tiff » Tue Nov 16, 2004 7:35 pm

They get their grove on!!! Lol....well i hope she can forgive Val. Hmm more plz!

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Tue Nov 16, 2004 7:40 pm

Tiff.. btw.. its Burn... not Let It Burn.. sorry.. im a freak lik ethat :ph34r:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Tue Nov 16, 2004 7:56 pm

Get your freak on, get your freak on :dance:

Aww, they're engaged. :wub: Now she and Val need to get back to being friends and we'll have some happiness.

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Fri Nov 19, 2004 6:05 pm

Chapter 10
It’s the next week and Jackie is sitting at the phone thinking weather or not to call up Valerie. Jc walks up behind her and wraps his arms around her.
“What are you doing baby?â€￾
“I don’t know if I should call up Valerie!â€￾
“Call her! It wont hurt!â€￾
“Yea!â€￾ then she calls Valerie.
“Hello!â€￾
“Hi Valerie?â€￾
“Yea is this Jackie?â€￾
“Yes it is! How are you?â€￾
“Fine! Why are you calling?â€￾
“I just wanted to see how you were doing!â€￾
“Oh I’m fine! Listen I am so sorry for doing that to you. I don’t know what came over me. And I hope you can forgive?â€￾
“I kinda do but I will never forget!â€￾
“Yea I understand!â€￾
“I got some good news!â€￾
“What is it?â€￾
“Me and Jc are engaged!â€￾
“Wow congrats!â€￾
“And I have something else to tell you to!â€￾
“What?â€￾
“I got picked to do my own fashion show in a few months!â€￾
“That’s great!â€￾
“And I need the help of my assistant!â€￾
“Ok. That’s good. Do you want me to move back?â€￾
“Yes I need your help. Your good with all that filing!â€￾
“Yea that’s true!â€￾
“Yea so when do you wanna move back in?â€￾
“As soon as you want me to!â€￾
“Ok how about next week?â€￾
“Sure!â€￾
“Ok I’ll call you later bye!â€￾
“Bye!â€￾
The next week Valerie moves in. Jc helps.
“Valerie your acting weird!â€￾
“Well Jc is here and the last time we seen each other we were naked!â€￾
“Don’t remind me of that!â€￾
“Ok but I just feel weird!â€￾
“Yea I understand that you feel weird. I mean I would to!â€￾
“True!â€￾
“Hey baby how you feeling?â€￾
“Fine why you asking me?â€￾
“Well your doctor just called here!â€￾
“Oh ok why?â€￾
“She said your pregnant!â€￾
The room is quite. Jackie drops everything in her hands.
“What?â€￾
“Jackie congrats!â€￾
“No I cant be!â€￾
“Why not sweetie!â€￾
“I am not ready for this baby! I’m working on my career and now I have to put it on hold!â€￾
“So!â€￾
“Well I’m happy but also upset!â€￾
“Jackie don’t be upset!â€￾
“I know I shouldn’t!â€￾
“Listen Jackie I’ll help you with the whole fashion business!â€￾
“And I’ll be here for the baby!â€￾
“Thanks guys!â€￾
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