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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Tue Mar 29, 2005 10:09 pm

<span style='color:red'>Chapter 1
Jackie is a 24 year old and valerie is 22. Jackie is engaged to Jc chasez and valerie is dating Justin Timberlake. But Jackie has a deep secret that can tear them all apart. Her and Justin are having an affair and Jc nor valerie know about this affair. This affair has been going on for about a year now.
Jc: hey sweetie bum!
Jackie: hey sex-ay!
Jc: I am going to play pool with Joey and Chris. Wanna come?
Jackie: no I have stuff to do.
Jc: are you sure?
Jackie: yes plus ill be in you way.
Jc: ohh you know I don’t mind you in my way.
Jackie: no I really have to get this stuff done.
Jc: ok I’ll call you when we are heading home.
Jackie: ok baby.
They kiss and Jc leaves. Jackie then calls Justin to tell him that Jc is out.
Justin: Yo baby I’m going to play pool with the boys.
Valerie: ohh I love pool. Let me come?
Justin: no it’s a guys night out!
Valerie: ohh ok I got some things to catch up on anyways!
Justin: ok baby ill call you later when we are coming home.
Valerie: ok bye!
They kiss and Justin leave. He stops at the store to get some condoms. (hey you have to be save today! Lol) Then he goes to Jackie’s house. He rings the bell. Jackie opens the door.
Justin: Hey sex…..
Jackie cuts him off with a kiss. She pulls him in and they start to take their clothes off. They fall on the couch.
Jackie: Justin you make love to me better then Jc does.
Justin: I know cause I’m the love making machine!
Jackie (giggles) yes you are now stop talking and get to work.
Justin: pushy aren’t we?
Jackie: yea
They finish taking of their clothes and Justin reaches over and pulls out the condoms and puts one on. And they get to business.
Afterwards they sit there and talk.
Justin: what would we do if Val and Jc find out?
Jackie: they wont
Justin: yea we kept it a secret this long.
Jackie: man I wish I didn’t love Jc like I do.
Justin: I love valerie but I love you to. it’s a hard decision.
They both giggle. Then Justin gets up and gets ready to leave.
Jackie: I cant wait for the next time.
Justin: I know.
They kiss and Justin leaves. Jc then comes home.
Jc: hey how was you night?
Jackie: fine yours?
Jc: I won 200 dollars.
Jackie: Yay. I’m in the mood for you know what?
Jc: really? So am I!
And they go upstairs and get down. Meanwhile at Justin and Valerie’s house they do the same.


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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Tue Mar 29, 2005 10:14 pm

Wow :o Me and JC better be getting freaky then :lol J/k

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Tue Mar 29, 2005 10:20 pm

Dang! Jackie and Justin are some major cheaters. :no:

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Thu Mar 31, 2005 10:17 pm

<span style='color:purple'>Chapter 2
Two weeks later its Halloween. Chris is having his annual Halloween party. The boys of Nsync dress up as the Spice girls. Jackie, Valerie, Kelly (Joeys wife), Brianna (Joeys daughter), and Cameron (a good friend to all of them) dress up as Nsync. There’s other people there to. In the middle of it Nsync gets microphones and start singing “If you wanna be my loverâ€￾ in girly voices. Afterwards the girls sing “Its tearin up my heartâ€￾. later on in the night Jackie pulls Justin into the backyard.
Justin: what’s the matter? Why you upset?
Jackie: I’m pregnant!
Justin: that’s good news. Why are you upset?
Jackie: what if its yours?
Justin: it cant be we used condoms.
Jackie: yes but still….
Justin: listen if its mine we wont tell Jc cause it will break his heart.
Jackie: okay
Justin: now smile and lets go inside.
They walk inside and Jackie grabs a microphone.
Jackie: I got an announcement!
Everyone turns around and looks at her.
Jackie: Jc baby come here.
Jc walks over to her.
Jackie: Jc baby I’m pregnant.
Jc: oh my god.
Jc picks up Jackie and kisses her. She looks over at Justin with a confused look. Chris looks at Jackie then Justin. He pulls Justin into the kitchen.
Chris: yo man what’s going on with you and Jackie?
Justin: nothing…Why?
Chris: no really Justin! Something’s up!
Justin: ok ill tell ya but you cant tell anyone!
Chris: ok man ill keep it a secret.
Justin: me and Jackie have been having an affair for the past year and the baby might be mines. But if it is we aren’t gonna tell Jc.
Chris: what?
Justin: yea its true!
Chris: and u didn’t use condoms?
Justin: we did use condoms!
Then valerie walks in.
Valerie: who uses condoms?
Justin: um me and Chris used condoms to throw at people!
Chris: yea it was funny.
Valerie: ok your weird! Lets go dance Justin.
They go and dance. The party goes down good.
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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Thu Mar 31, 2005 10:23 pm

Im gonna kick some Jackie/Justin butt when I find out they're having an affair :lol Good chapter, girl

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Fri Apr 01, 2005 8:57 pm

<span style='color:blue'>Chapter 3
A week later Jackie and Justin meet at a local bar to talk about everything.
Bartender: what can I get you?
Justin: a beer
Jackie: diet soda
Justin: so how ya feeling?
Jackie: its ok it feels weird having a baby in me.
Justin: listen I think we should stop having this affair.
Jackie: yea I was thinking the same….I mean I don’t want Jc or Val to get hurt!
Justin: yea I also don’t want us to get hurt to.
Jackie: but I did have fun.
Justin: me to.
They hug. As they are hugging valerie, Kelly, and Brianna walk by.
Brianna: look its uncle Justin hugging aunt Jackie
Kelly: where?
Brianna: in the bar.
Valerie: what the hell are they doing?
Kelly: I have no clue.
They sit there for a minute to watch. Meanwhile inside.
Justin: can I have a last kiss?
Jackie: Surely.
They kiss. When valerie sees this she starts to cry.
Valerie: how could they?
Kelly: OOO Ima punch them both.
Valerie: no don’t! lets just go.
They go home. Later at Justin’s house, Valerie and Jc are there. When Justin and Jackie walk in they see them and stop and look.
Valerie: only going to get a gift for Brianna huh?
Jackie: huh I wasn’t getting a gift for Brianna!
Jc: no you told me you were coming over here but some how you ended up in the bar kissing Justin!
Justin: what?
Valerie: I was walking by with Brianna and Kelly and you to were kissing.
Jackie: oh my god.
Jc: what’s up with you to.
Justin: ok umm… me and Jackie were having an affair but we stopped. And I asked her for one last kiss.
Jc: how long has this been going on?
Jackie: since last December!
Valerie: what?
Jackie: yes I know and we stopped because we didn’t want you guys to get hurt! Jc I love you baby and I didn’t mean anything by it.
Jc: is the baby even mine?
Jackie: I don’t know.
Justin: if its mine which I am hoping its not, then you can have the baby. I don’t want this all over. Ya know.
Jc: yea I see what you are saying but you shouldn’t have had sex with my fiancé in the first place.
Valerie: yea and Jackie you know that I love Justin so why you go and have an affair.
Jackie: I am really sorry.
Jackie starts to cry.
Jc: listen I don’t wanna know who the baby is! Okay?
Valerie: yea lets just say its Jc’s!
Jackie: well it might me and might not and I wanna know who the father is!
Justin: I think Jackie should know I mean it is her child.
Jc: yea I see where you are coming from.
Jackie: no hard feelings?
Valerie: well I am gonna forgive you but I will never forget.
Jc: me too cause I love you to much Jackie!
Justin: Come here baby!
Valerie and Justin hug. Jackie walks over to Jc and kisses him then Jc rubs her belly.
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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Fri Apr 01, 2005 10:43 pm

whoa Justin and Jackie are cheating on their fiances? What kind of lovers are they? I mean justin keep your hose in your pants...its not that hard to do...and they don't know who the father of the baby is? oh h e l l no! No offense but if my man cheats he's gone...no lookin back i don't care lol more please!

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Sat Apr 02, 2005 1:46 pm

<span style='color:green'>Chapter 4
Valerie and Justin go home. When they get home they get into a big fight.
Valerie: F***ing ridiculous.
Justin: what is?
Valerie: you and Jackie having an affair.
Justin: I thought you were cool with it?
Valerie: I’m not but since Jackie’s pregnant I didn’t want her to get to upset cause she could lose the baby. I didn’t want to do that to her I’m not that mean.
Justin: well then u like just made her think you were fine when your not.
Valerie: I am more mad at you then I am at her.
Justin: why?
Valerie: because you could have stopped it.
Justin: so she could have to.
Valerie: so you should have been the bigger person. What if that baby is yours? Are you gonna be there for the child?
Justin: well Jc’s gonna be the father. Me and Jackie talked about it. We are gonna be the godparents.
Valerie: whatever Justin.
Justin: your acting like it’s the end of the world.
Valerie: it is the end of the world. You cheated on me with my best friend of 10 years.
Justin: oh my god I said I was sorry.
Valerie: sorry doesn’t cut it Justin. You hurt me.
Justin: I am so sorry baby!
Valerie: Justin it’s over!
Justin: WHAT?
Valerie: you cheated on me and hurt me so much and I’m just supposed to say ok it never happened.
Justin: no I’m not asking you to say it never happened.
Valerie: then what are you saying?
Justin: I’m asking for you to forgive me.
Valerie: then your asking for a lot.
Justin: I love you baby and I never meant to hurt you.
Valerie: then you should have thought about that before your cheated on with Jackie!
Valerie walks out and Justin lies on the couch. He takes out the ring he bought. He was going to propose to her. The next morning valerie goes out with Kelly. Justin grabs some clothes and writes valerie a letter. This is what it says:
Dear valerie,
I have left. I realized that I hurt you a lot and I really am sorry. I don’t know why I did it with Jackie. I’m stupid. I messed up the best thing that I ever had. I love you so much and I am so mad at myself. I was gonna propose but you don’t wanna be with me anymore so I’m not. Here’s the ring. You can have it. If you ever want to talk to me call.
Love Justin
Justin leaves. He goes to stay with Chris.

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sat Apr 02, 2005 3:01 pm

I'm glad Val lashed out at Justin. He deserves it. He didnt even understand why she was so mad. More soon, chick.

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<span style='color:blue'>Chapter 5
Meanwhile at Jackie and Jc’s place. Jc is sitting on the couch thinking. Jackie walks in.
Jackie: What’s the matter baby?
Jc: Valerie broke up with Justin.
Jackie: why?
Jc: cause he cheated on her.
Jackie: oh! I feel so badly now. I wish I could go back in time and change it. Now I am regretting what I did with Justin.
Jc: why?
Jackie: cause of all the people we hurt doing it! And I know your hurt.
Jc: yea I am but the only reason I am staying is because of the baby and that I love you so much that I don’t wanna leave you.
Jackie: yea and Jc I am really sorry. Man I wish I could fall off the world right now.
Jc: you don’t mean that.
Jackie: yea I do.
Jc: listen Jackie I love you and remember that letter I wrote to you the night I proposed?
Jackie: yea why?
Jc: well I said id be there even when times were tough. And this is tough and I’m still here.
Jackie: ohh yea I remember that. Jc I love you so much to. But I think Val was lying to me!
Jc: what do you mean?
Jackie: I don’t think she forgives me!
Jc: what makes you think that?
Jackie: believe me I know Val and she’s the type that don’t forgive so easily. And plus she broke up with Justin so what does that tell you?
Jc: I think if she was a true friend she would forgive you!
Jackie: no she wont. Like 6 years ago she broke off the friendship with this girl she was friends with for a long time because she stole from her and that was just money. I was freaking her man. that’s worse.
Jc: ohh that’s bad. Well whatever happens I’ll be here for you.
Jackie: thanks Jc you’re the best in the world.
They hug. Then Jackie goes up stairs. She grabs the phone. She wants to call valerie to talk to her but she’s afraid of what might happen. Then there’s a knock on the bedroom door.
Jackie: come in!
Valerie walks in.
Jackie: I was just about to call you!
Valerie: about what?
Jackie: about what happened.
Valerie: actually that’s why I am here. Listen you are my best, best friend I have and I don’t wanna lose you but at the same time I an so angry at what you did to me.
Jackie: yea and I am really, really sorry for it. I didn’t mean any harm by it.
Valerie: well you and Justin hurt everyone around you.
Jackie: I know and if I can go back in time I will. I cant be more sorry.
Jackie starts to cry.
Valerie: calm down Jackie its not good to get all upset with the baby.
Jackie: I know it’s just that I’m starting to have second thoughts about this baby.
Valerie: why?
Jackie: I really don’t want it to be Justin’s.
Valerie: me and you both!
Jackie: I heard you broke up with Justin.
Valerie: yea we did!
Jackie: but don’t you love him.
Valerie: yea I do but how can I love someone that cheated on me.
Jackie: then how can you be friends with the girl he cheated with.
Valerie: what are you saying?
Jackie: I know you and you aren’t that forgiving.
Valerie: I know I’m not but you and I have been friends for what 10 years and we both have been through so much. This is like a speed bump in our friendship.
Jackie: yea I see what your saying.
Valerie: I’m happy that Jc is still with you.
Jackie: me to. So you aren’t going to get back with Justin.
Valerie: nope. I will never forgive him for this.
Jackie: yea. So where is he?
Valerie: I don’t know and I don’t care.
Jackie: ok
Valerie: listen I’m gonna head home. So I’ll call you later. Bye!
They hug and valerie leaves.

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sun Apr 03, 2005 7:49 am

At least Jackie and Val saved their friendship. That's something. :nod: But it looks like Val is never getting back with Justin. :(

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Apr 03, 2005 2:44 pm

JC's a weird one. He says to.. okay with this honestly :shrug: More soon

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Tue Apr 05, 2005 5:05 pm

<span style='color:purple'>Chapter 6
Valerie goes home. She sees the letter and ring on the bed.
Valerie: Man I can believe him.
She throws out the letter and puts the ring on her dresser. She then takes a shower and goes asleep.
Meanwhile at Chris’s house.
Chris: yo man I cant believe she dumped you!
Justin: Well I did cheat on her with her best friend.
Chris: yea I would have dumped you to.
Justin: yes I really hurt her.
Chris: yeah you did!
Justin: I really love her. I never loved anyone so much.
Chris: not even Britney?
Justin: that’s a different story.
Chris: yea.
Justin: I wanna go kill myself.
Chris: man you don’t mean it!
Justin: yea I do. I hurt the only one in my life that I truly care about and for her to forgive me I have to do something really dramatic.
Chris: I know what you can do……..
Back at Jackie and Jc’s house.
Jackie: Jc I want the baby to be a boy.
Jc: aww me to.
Jackie: yea I’m going to take a shower.
Jc: ok baby.
Jackie goes in the shower. You can now see a little belly on her. Jackie like to take hot showers, so the bathroom was all fogged with steam. Jc decided to surprise her. So he takes off his clothes and goes in. He kisses her neck and Jackie jumps.
Jackie: Jc don’t scare me like that!
Jc: ha ha!! I love you.
Jackie: me to.
Jc pulls Jackie close to him. They start to kiss. Jc then presses her against the wall. And then it escalates from there. Justin pulls up to talk to Jc. He knocks on the door. But no answer, so he opens the door and walks inside. He hears something from upstairs so he goes up there. He opens the door to the bathroom.
Jackie: JUSTIN!
Jc: oh my god Jackie I cant believe you would……
Jackie: no Justin is in here.
Justin: hey guys!
Jc: what the hell are you doing in my bathroom?
Justin: yo man I need to talk to ya!
Jc: ok well let me get dressed!
Justin: ok ill be downstairs.
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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Tue Apr 05, 2005 9:03 pm

Uhoh... whats gonna happen? More soon

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Wed Apr 06, 2005 8:29 am

Uh oh ... I wonder how the talk is gonna go. Justin better not kill himself. :nervous:

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Wed Apr 06, 2005 4:03 pm

WTF? why on earth would Justin go into their bathroom :rofl: sometimes that boy scares me....ok so he scares me a lot but thats besides the point :rofl:

man please don't let justin do anything too drastic..killing yourself is not the way to solve anything :no: ahh i gotta know what happens...MORE PLEASE!

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<span style='color:purple'>Chapter 7
Jc goes downstairs and sees Justin on the couch and he was reading a magazine.
Jc: what’s up man?
Justin: yo man I’m gonna try to get Val back!
Jc: and how you gonna do that?
Justin: I’m gonna go on MTV and pretend that I’m committing suicide to get her back.
Jc: and if she says no and you don’t commit suicide you will look like an idiot on national TV.
Justin: I know but I doubt she will say no.
Jackie walks down. She heard the conversation from upstairs.
Jackie: I think your wrong Justin.
Justin: why am I wrong?
Jackie: I’ve known valerie for the longest time and I know she wont fall for that!
Justin: well I don’t know what to do anymore. Jackie I really need her back into my life!
Jackie: I know. But just give it time.
Justin: how much time?
Jackie: I don’t know but just let her be!
Justin: ok I guess since you’re her best friend you would know.
Jc: yea she would.
Jackie: ok anything else ya want?
Justin: no thanks I am going!
Jackie: ok bye
Jc: bye
Jc and Jackie go to sleep. The next day valerie and Jackie are at the mall.
Jackie: ohh that shirt is so cute!
Valerie: yea it is.
Jackie: should I buy it?
Valerie: na I don’t think it would look good on you.
Jackie: ok lets go get something to drink.
Valerie: yea all this shopping is making me hungry!
Jackie: yea so heard from Justin?
Valerie: no….
Someone bumps into valerie and knocks her bag on the floor.
Lady: oh my god I am sorry.
She bends over and picks it up.
Jackie: heather?
Valerie: oh my god heather!
Heather: valerie? Jackie?
Jackie: yea oh my god!
They all hug.
Valerie: I haven’t seen you in ages!
Heather: yea I know…7 years?
Jackie: yea something like that.
Valerie: wow so what have you been up to girl?
Heather: well I got married two months ago!
Jackie: to who?
Heather: Justin Booberdo.
Valerie: oh my god he was a hottie in school!
Jackie: yea so where is he?
Heather: at home. He didn’t feel well.
Jackie: so I guess you have seen who we are with?
Valerie: well who I’m not with anymore!
Heather: yea! Why?
Valerie: long story and I don’t wanna talk about it!
Heather: ohh ok! So Jackie I heard your engaged!
Jackie: yep!
Heather: wedding date yet?
Jackie: no not yet!
Valerie: ohh Jackie’s 3 months pregnant!
Heather: oh my god!
She touches Jackie’s belly.
Valerie: hey why don’t we go to my house and catch up on stuff?
Jackie: yea lets go.
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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Thu Apr 07, 2005 9:33 pm

Booberdo? :rofl: Nice Jackie.

Yay for Heather coming in on the story!!! :yay:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Fri Apr 08, 2005 7:55 am

LMFAO @ Booberdo. That's freakin' hilarious. :rofl: :rofl:

Justin is such a crazy guy. I hope his plan works or else he's gonna look like a fool. :lol:

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Fri Apr 08, 2005 3:28 pm

:yay: i'm in the story :yay:

Booberdo :rofl: I had to read that name like 5 times to make sure I read it right :rofl: well hey at least i married a hottie :rofl:

And Justin....it's not even funny to joke about committing suicide...i've gone thru too many phone calls with friends where their friends are laying in the hospital on a ventilator cause they oded on pain killers....so please Justin dont even joke about that :no: More please!

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Sun Apr 17, 2005 7:30 pm

<span style='color:purple'>Chapter 8
5 years later…..
Valerie: hey Jackie!
Jackie: hey I thought you couldn’t come!
Valerie: well I changed my appointment to tomorrow.
Jackie: Yay!
Valerie: so where’s my godson?
Jackie: Joshua aunt Valerie wants to give you her gift.
Joshua: Auntie Valerie! I’m 4 today!
Valerie: I know! Here’s your present!
He opens it.
Joshua: ohh thanks aunt valerie I always wanted this game!
Valerie: your welcome. Now go play with your friends.
Jackie: thanks for coming.
Valerie: no problem.
Jackie: so where’s Ryan?
Valerie: ohh he’s in the studio working on his next album.
Jackie: ohh so have you set a wedding date yet?
Valerie: we were thinking sometime in December.
Jackie: that’s nice. I cant believe your gonna be Mrs. Cabrera soon!
Valerie: yea I know.
Then Justin walks in. He is now dating Cameron again. Valerie hides her hand cause of the ring.
Jackie: hey Justin
She hugs Justin the hugs Cameron.
Justin: hey Jackie. Where’s your husband?
Jackie: he’s out back with the kids.
Justin: ok thanks.
Justin walks to the back yard.
Cameron: hey I am Cameron.
Valerie: I know who you are!
Cameron: okay. Thanks for inviting me Jackie!
Jackie: no problem.
Valerie: Jackie can I talk to you in the kitchen?
Jackie: yea! Um Cameron you can go out back.
Cameron: ok.
Valerie: you didn’t tell me they were coming?
Jackie: Jc invited them this morning.
Valerie: ohh.
Jackie: lets go out back.
Justin: hey valerie. What’s been going on with you lately?
Valerie: well I’m engaged!
Justin: oh really! To who?
Valerie: Ryan Cabrera.
Justin: oh where is he?
Valerie: working on his new album. He will be here in a bit.
Justin: ohh that’s cool.
Valerie: yea. So are you and Cameron dating?
Justin: yea we have been dating a year now.
Valerie: ohh me and Ryan started dating 3 years ago.
Justin: ohh. Well good luck with that.
Valerie: thanks.
Later on that night. Ryan shows up.
Valerie: RYAN!
Valerie runs and hugs Ryan.
Ryan: hey baby.
Valerie whispers into his ear.
Valerie: Justin’s here.
Ryan: ohh so what I don’t care!
Valerie: ok baby.
About 2 hours later everyone leaves the party.


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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Apr 17, 2005 7:52 pm

YES!! Ryan :wub: But I smell trouble in the Ryan/Val/Justin/Cameron department. It would be hard for me to chose between them, but honestly,. right now I'd want Ryan :lol: Hells yeah :whip:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Apr 18, 2005 7:20 am

WOO! :whip: Ryan better treat Val right or I'll kick his ass, too. :lol: Got yourself a real hottie, Miss Val. :yay:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Apr 18, 2005 4:35 pm

:wub: my Cabrera-bear is a good guy. Well, yeah :whip ;)

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<span style='color:green'>Chapter 9
Its been 2 week since the party. Jackie, Jc, Valerie, Ryan, Heather and Justin are all hanging out at the local Fridays.
Ryan: so I’m gonna announce our best man and Maid of Honor!
Valerie: Yea this was a hard Decision but it had to be done!
Ryan: For Best man we choose Jc because we really don’t know you that well Justin.
Jc: Aww thanks man I feel honored!
Valerie: Now for the maid of honor. It was a hard choice but I had to make one so… your both my maids of honor!
Jackie: Whoa! Is that possible?
Heather: yea I think it is Jackie!
Valerie: well I don’t care you guys are both my best friends so I want you both to be my maids of honors.
Jackie: Yay!
Heather and Jackie hug valerie then Ryan.
The next week they go and pick out bride maids dresses. They are light purple tank top dresses. Valerie get a white tube top dress. After they get the dresses they decide to go to the mall. While at the mall valerie gets pulled aside. Heather and valerie don’t notice and keep walking.
Valerie: What the hell is your problem?
Justin: I still have feelings for you!
Valerie: I don’t care I love Ryan and we are getting married next month.
Justin: please just give me a second chance.
Valerie: no I cant.
Meanwhile…
Heather: where’s Valerie?
Jackie: she was right here just 2 seconds ago.
Heather: lets go look for her.
Back with Justin and Valerie. Justin kisses Valerie. Valerie slaps Justin in his face.
Valerie: what is wrong with you? I don’t wanna be with you and I don’t want nothing to do with you!
Justin: oh my god I’m sorry it slipped.
Valerie: yea right your lips didn’t slip onto my lips.
Justin: I am sorry. Please come back!!
Valerie: HELL NO!!!
Valerie walks away and catches up with Heather and Jackie. She tells them what Justin did.
Jackie: where is he? I’m gonna kick his….
Heather: no I will!
Valerie: how about not! I have a better plan…..
Meanwhile back with the boys.
Jc: haha! Look its me and Jackie in J-14.
Ryan: that picture of you is horrible.
Joshua: Daddy. I wanna go swimming!
Jc: ok get your bathing suit on and we will meet you out back.
They head out to the pool.
Justin: I think Heather might me pregnant and not telling
Ryan: why would she not tell you something big like that!
All of the sudden Jc pushes Ryan into the pool.
Ryan: you idiot!
Joshua: haha! Uncle Ryan is in the pool!
Justin: yea that’s funny!
Then Jc pushed Justin in the pool!
Justin: hey that wasn’t nice! Heather gave me these sneakers for my birthday! And now there ruined.
Jc: stop being a party pooper!
Then Jc jumps in the pool! The girls walk in and hear commotion from the back yard the they hear nothing. So they walk to the back yard. The boys and hiding against the wall. When the girls walk out the door they come from behind and pick them up then throws them in the pool. They all scream. Then all of them jump in. They splash and play around.
Valerie: I haven’t had that much fun since I cant remember.
Jackie: yea I’m soaked.
Jc: I can see your bra Jackie.
Heather: like you never seen her bra before.
Jc: I was joking around!
Ryan: ok no need to get your panties in a bunch!
Jc: does it look like I wear panties?
Ryan: I don’t know. Maybe?
Jc: Stupid whore no I don’t!
Ryan: did you just call me a whore?
Jc: yea and ya got beef?
Ryan: no but I got chicken.
They all laugh and joke around for the rest of the night.

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Apr 18, 2005 5:56 pm

Yikes, Justin still has feelings for Val. I believe it! :wub: Looks like they had a great time hanging out by the pool. :yay:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Mon Apr 18, 2005 9:44 pm

:clap: Ryan's a whore, Ryan's a whore!

Hmm, two men interested in me? ;) I like it

WOAH! Wait, Heather and JUSTIN?! I thought his last name was Boobarado or w/e :lol: Hmmmmm :unsure:

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Tue Apr 19, 2005 2:11 pm

his name is Justin Booberdoo!!! for now on ill but Justin B for him so yall dont get confused!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Tue Apr 19, 2005 5:17 pm

Ah, I gotcha! Justin Booberdo. :rofl:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Tue Apr 19, 2005 9:03 pm

:lol: I was gonna say, b**** back off.

CABRERABABY!!

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Fri Apr 22, 2005 9:27 pm

Chapter 10
Its been a week since Valerie’s run in with her ex. But somehow there is a picture in US Weekly.
Ryan: Valerie what is this?
He throws the paper on the bed. Valerie looks at it shocked.
Valerie: I can explain!
Ryan: okay explain why your ex has his tongue down your throat!
Valerie: I was at the mall with Jackie and Heather when I get pulled to the side by Justin. He was saying all this crap like he still loves me and blah blah! Then he kisses me! I pulled away and slapped him.
Ryan: how do I know I can believe you?
Valerie: Ryan you know I love you and why would I get back with that idiot!
Ryan: true!
Valerie: I love you pookie!
Ryan: I love you to!
They kiss and get there groove on. Meanwhile back at Jc and Jackie’s house.
Jackie: I just put Joshua to sleep.
Jc: okay!
Jackie: ya know I was thinking how it would be with an addition to our family!
Jc: what do you mean?
Jackie: like have another baby!
Jc: we can try!
Jackie: no need to!
Jc: what do you mean no need to?
Jackie: I’m pregnant!
Jc: your what?
Jackie: pregnant as in having a baby.
Jc: oh my god! We are going to have another baby!
Jackie: yea and I’m hoping it’s a girl!
Jc: yea. I gotta call everyone.
Jackie: no need to they already know.
Jc: what?
Jackie: well Valerie and Heather were there when I got the phone call from the doctor.
Jc: wow.
Jackie: well at least Joshua is old enough to understand and everything.
Jc: yea.
Jackie: crap!!
Jc: what is it?
Jackie: the dress for the wedding might not fit next month.
Jc: I am sure it will!
Jackie: okay lets just see.
Jc then puts his arms around Jackie and rubs her belly.
Jc: I seen the US Weekly today!
Jackie: and?
Jc: it has a picture of Justin and Valerie kissing!
Jackie: What?
Jackie grabs the magazine!
Jc: well I hope Ryan don’t see it!
Jackie: me either.
Jc: I hope the baby is a girl!
Jackie: me too.



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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sat Apr 23, 2005 11:11 am

Damn those paparazzi. Tryin' to mess up my relationship <_<

I hope Ryan believes Val. Seems that they have somethin' really real goin' on. :wub:

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Sat Apr 23, 2005 8:33 pm

Chapter 11
It’s the day of Valerie and Ryan’s Wedding and valerie is very nervous.
Valerie: oh my god I am happy, excited and nervous at the same time.
Jackie: oh don’t be nervous. I was to but once I saw Jc I wasn’t.
Heather: yea same with me and Justin, my booberdooper.
Valerie: yea true.
Jackie: you look so pretty!!
Heather: yea u do girl.
Valerie: aww stop it!
They all giggle. Then Jc knocks on the door.
Jc: is it safe to come in?
Heather: yea it is.
Jc: are you sure I don’t wanna see naked people.
Jackie: honey its fine come in.
Jc walks in.
Jc: 5 minutes before the ceremony starts.
Valerie: oh my god!
Jackie: what?
Valerie: I have to go pee!
Heather: come and I’ll help you with your dress.
Jc: okay just hurry up.
Jackie: so what’ up?
Jc: nothing Ryan is like a nervous wreck.
Jackie: valerie is nervous to.
Valerie and heather come out.
Jc: we better go line up.
Valerie: yea I’m like so nervous!
Heather: don’t be!
They all line up. The ceremony is great. Everyone was crying. They all go to the reception.
Jc: everyone please welcome Mr. And Mrs. Cabrera.
Everyone claps. They have there first dance to more then anyone by Gavin Degraw.
Ryan: I love you!
Valerie: no I love you more!
Ryan: I am so happy the we are finally married!
Valerie: me to!
Valerie puts her head on Ryan’s shoulder and closes her eyes. After the dance everyone claps and the DJ plays drop it like its hot. Everyone goes out on the dance floor. About and hour later Ryan gets on the microphone.
Ryan: Valerie I love you more then anything in the world. And I wanna sing this song for you!
Ryan starts to sing his song shame on me.
Valerie: oh my god!
Ryan: I've always paid attention to your point of view
But now I want to focus on the rest of you
Shame on me wanting you
The way I fantasize about
What I’d give, what I’d do
I just want to work you out
Times like this I'm so glad that you can't read my mind
Shame on me another time!
After the song is over dinner is served. All of the sudden Justin Timberlake walks in drunk.
Valerie: what is he doing here?
Justin: Valerie I love you. Ryan is a stupid person come back to me.
Valerie: no I will not.
Justin: please I am begging you.
Then Justin throws up on the ground!
Jc: man get out of here! Your drunk!
Justin: no Jc I will not leave without valerie!
Jc grabs Justin by his arm and drags him outside.
Jc: man you cant do that to valerie!
Justin: I want her back! I love her. And she loves me.
Jc: no she doesn’t! she loves Ryan.
Justin: Ryan is a D**k. he don’t deserve her.
Jc: man just go and ill talk to you tomorrow.
Justin leaves and Jc goes back in.
Jc: he left don’t worry!
Valerie: thanks Jc!
Jc: no problem.
After they eat they have the cake. And they continue to dance. The wedding was a great wedding except for drunk Justin.

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sat Apr 23, 2005 8:37 pm

*squeee* :yay: ME AND RYAN GOT MARRIED!!!

I love the song, More Than Anyone by Gavin :wub: Soooo purdyful.

:lol: I love that Ryan sang Shame On Me.

Drunk Justin :no: That's not cool, dude.

I loved the chapter, dude.

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sun Apr 24, 2005 10:07 am

:yay: Congrats to Ryan and Val. They make a beautiful couple. Now we need some hot kids. :nod: :lol:


Drunk Justin! :no: He needs to get himself under control and leave Val the hell alone.

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Mon Apr 25, 2005 5:03 pm

awww congrats to Ryan and Val :wub: ahh the married life :rofl: Justin is being such an a s s for trying to get Val back..and showing up at her wedding drunk? What is he thinking? Ya had me confused a few chapters back..i was like "since when did i marry JT?" ROFL more please!

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Tue May 03, 2005 7:11 pm

This is the last chapter in this fan fic.... i will be writing another one soon!

Chapter 12
It is 6 years later. Heather and Justin had their 2nd child last year. Valerie and Ryan had had a set of girl twins and 2 years later had a boy. Jackie passed away giving birth to their daughter 5 years ago. Jc hasn’t dated since. He refuses to because he still cant get over the fact that Jackie is gone. Its their daughter Ariella Shavon’s 5th birthday. They throw her a party at chuckie cheese’s. later that night they all go to Jackie’s grave but leave the kids with a baby sitter.
Heather: Are you ok Jc?
Jc: No!
Ryan: I know it must be hard.
Jc: Why did she have to go so soon?
Valerie: It was her time!
Justin: Yea.
Valerie: What did you do with that tape you had from her giving birth to Ariella?
Jc: I threw it away cause her death is on it!
Ryan: yea I would have done the same thing.
Jc breaks down crying and falls on his knees.
Heather: Jc lets take you home.
They drive him home. He buts the kids to bed and he goes into the bed room. He takes out a box from the closet. Its all home videos. He starts to watch them and he starts to cry.
About 2 years later Jc meets one of Jackie’s childhood friends Edna and they start dating! Edna and Jackie are so alike that its like he is with Jackie again. Everyone is happy again.
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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Tue May 03, 2005 7:15 pm

TWIN GIRLS?!?!? HOLY SHIIIIIEEET :lol: But yay.

Aww thats so sad that Jackie died during childburth :no: I feel so bad for JC having to raise their daughter alone. But at least in the end he met someone that im sure Jacke would have liked.

Good job, girlie.

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Tue May 03, 2005 8:17 pm

:( Awwww, Jackie passed away. That is so freakin' sad. I can imagine how hard it was for JC to move on, but at least he'll always have his daughter to remind him of her. :nod:

Great story, Jackie. :hug:

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Wed May 04, 2005 2:51 pm

awwww that's soooo sad that Jackie died during childbirth. That almost happened to my aunt but thankfully she's still here today. Like everyone else said, at least he still has their daughter to remind him of her...I'm sure she'll grow up to look just like her mom some day :nod: Dang Val and Ryan were busy :rofl: have fun chasing after all of those kids Val :rofl: I loved it!


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