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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Fri Apr 01, 2005 10:07 pm

This is a Ryan Cabrera fan fic. If you dont like him or if you are going to insult him here, please leave and keep it to yourself. :) Thank you.

Heather, the bestest person EVER, made me a graphic for this story. Here it is:
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-1995-

"Al, would you stop messing with my hair?"

"I cant help it! Its so... long! You should let me cut it, Ry."

"No way! I dont trust you with anything sharp."

"Why not?" 13 year old Valerie whined.

"Remember what happened when we went on vacation?" 13 year old Ryan said teasing.

"Ry, I was 6. And he messed up my sandcastle!"

Ryan laughed. "So you took your digging stick and stabbed him with it.?"

"Dang, say it a little louder why dont ya?" Val said, looking around as people stopped and stared. "Besides, its not like I killed him! He had a little cut."

"Al, he was-"

"Hey, look who it is! Porcupine and his little boyfriend, Al."

Val groaned as she watched Thomas James, a freshman, approach them.

"What do you want, James?" Ryan asked as he moved in front of Val.

"Aww, protecting your boyfriend again?"

"Are you blind or something? She's a girl."

"Really? Then why do you call her Al?"

Ryan rolled his eyes. "You really arent that bright for a freshman, you know that?"

"What's stopping me from beating the crap out of you?" Thomas said as he grabbed Ryan by the collar.

"Hey! Let him go!" Val said, moving towards them. She let out a scream as she watched Ryan fall to the ground after Thomas punched him in the stomache.

"Al, no! Stay back, okay?" Ryan coughed out.

"But-"

"Go home, Valerie!" Ryan yelled.

Val ran home, and looked behind her as her best friend got beaten up.
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-Present, 2005-

"Hey! Let her go!" 23 year old Valerie said as a man grabbed her best friend, Heather.

"You wanna be next, princess?" The man growled as he shoved Heather away.

"Val, lets go." Heather said as she grabbed her arm.

"I cant believe that, Heath. We go to pick up our kids at daycare, and we get freakin' molested."

"Thats what we get for being strippers, Cole." Val's best friend, Heather Davis told her.

"Still! He's at a daycare, there's kids around, too-. Are you okay?"

"I'm fine, chicka. Chillax, aiight?"

"Mommy!" Valerie's son, Lucas yelled, running up to her.

"Baby!" Val said, picking her 2 1/2 year old son, Lucas, up. "You shouldn't yell, hon."

" Can we go to Donal's?"

"Sure, sweetie. How about Auntie Heather, Mieka, and Tyrin go with us."

"Kay."

"Auntie Allie!!" 3 year Tyrin yelled running up to Val.

"Ty! No yellin, baby boy." Heather said, walking up to them with 1 year old Mieka in her arms.

"Sorry, mama."

"Do you wanna go to McDonalds with us, Heath? Luke's hungry."

"Sure. Lets go."
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"Mama, can me and Luke go play on the playground?" Ty asked his mom.

"Yeah, but ya'll gotta come back every once in a while to each your lunch, okay?" Heather told the 2 young boys as they ran away. "Why waste my breathe?" Heather said as she and her friend laughed.

"So, has Trae called you back yet?" Val asked as she took a bite of her McChicken.

"No-" Heather started.

"Hey, ma." A voice said from the side of them.


There you go. What you think? :D

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Fri Apr 01, 2005 10:14 pm

ohh i like!!! more please i wanna see who that is!!

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Fri Apr 01, 2005 10:17 pm

aww Val I'm loving it! Look at Ryan taking care of Val like that :wub: now thats how guys should act....let me tell ya...its not good to cut your own hair...i learned that from experience lol...and that guy trying to molest them? At a daycare of all places?? Oh h e l l no my kids would be outta there...i feel so bad for them..i wanna know who this is thats talking to them though...ahh MORE PLEASE!

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sat Apr 02, 2005 12:53 am

Chapter 2

-1995-
Ryan and Val walked around the park that was a few blocks from their houses.

"Ry, whats wrong?" Val asked as she looked at her friend, who was deep in thought.

"What? Nothing's wrong." Ryan said, avoiding her eyes.

"Then look me in the eye." Val challenged.

Ryan looked her in the eyes then quickly looked away.

"Ry, you cant lie to me! There's something wrong, so why dont you just tell me?"

"Al, I dont want you to hate me, okay?" Ryan said as he stopped them both from walking.

"Why would I hate you?" Val laughed. "You didnt like, get some 15 year old pregnant, did you?"

"Im moving." Ryan said, avoiding her eyes again. Noticing her walk away, he looked up. "Val, wait."

"What do you mean you're moving?" Val said, her voice cracking.

"Val-" He said moving towards her.

"No!" She said, taking a step back. "What do you mean you're moving?"

Ryan took a deep breath. He knew she would be stubborn. "Mom and dad think we should move. Because I got beat up."

"You cant go, Ryan!" Val said, stomping her foot.

"Val, I have to! What am I going to do?"

Val sniffed and wiped her eyes to stop herself from crying. "Please dont go." She whispered.

Ryan walked over and wrapped his arms around her. "Please dont cry, Al. Please dont."

Val broke down and wrapped her arms around Ryan.

"Im sorry, Val."
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-Present, 2005-

"Uhoh." Val muttered. So much for a peaceful lunch.

"Trae?" Heather said as she looked up.

"How you doin'?" Trae said as he pulled up a chair.

"How am I doing? How do you think? Im raising OUR 2 children. By myself." Heather said, angrily.

"Damn, ma. Calm down!"

Heather took a deep breath, knowing there were kids around. She didnt want to yell in front of them. Especially Tyrin and Mieka.

"So, I was thinkin', to give you a break from your kids, I would take them for a weekend?"

"My kids? I didnt get myself pregnant by myself, you dumbass. And why should I hand over my kids to you? You cant even come see them on a normal basis."

"I try doing a good thing and help you out, and you freak out on me. Why do you think I dont wanna come to your place?"

"Once you step up and be a man, you wont be taking MY kids anywhere." Heather said getting up to pick up her daughter.

"You complainin' about how I dont take care of them, then I offer to, and you wont let me."

"I dont trust you. Come over and be with them, but when I wont leave them alone with you." She turned to Val. "Can we please go?"

"Yeah." Val said gathering their stuff. "Ill go get the boys."
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"Damn, cant you guys just tell me where we're going?" Ryan asked as he stumbled. "At least take this damn blindfold off."

"Nope. C'mon man, chill out. We're almost there." His friend, Pete said.

"At least get a better grip on me or something! I'd rather not break my neck on my brithday."

"Or ruin your hair. Alright, we're here!" His friend Shane said. "Happy 23rd birthday, man." He said, taking Ryan's blindfold off.

"You have got to be kidding me..." Ryan said.


Thats it for now, folks.

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Sat Apr 02, 2005 1:06 pm

aww thats good!!! i wonder where he took ryan!!! more please

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Sat Apr 02, 2005 11:34 pm

i know where they took him but i'm gonna keep my mouth shut :rofl:

no offense but i would not trust Trae with my kids at all...and since these kids are my kids he better not be watching them himself...cause i'm sorry but a man who doesn't own up to being a father and taking care of his kids for their entire life does not get the luxury of saying i want them now and not then :nono: thats not how it works :lol: MORE PLEASE!

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Apr 03, 2005 12:43 am

Shh, Heather :lol:

-1995-

"Ryan, we're leaving soon." Ryan's mom, Marlena said, walking into Ryan's newly empty room.

"Okay, mom." Ryan said, miserably.

Marlena smiled sadly at her son, then looked at the girl she considered her daughter. "Darlin' cheer up. I cant stand to see you like this. Either can your mom and dad. You'll still call, write, and see each other."

Valerie just smiled back sadly. "I love you, Lena." She said getting up to hug the older woman she considered her second mom. She called her Lena because when she called her Mrs.Cabrera, Lena would scold her saying, "I am not old, young lady."

"I love you too, sweetie." Marlena said letting go. "See ya'll downstairs in a bit, okay?"

"Okay." Was the reply from both children.

There was some silence as Marlena walked out.

"Promise me we'll always stay friends." Val said.

"I promise."

"Val, Ryan, its time." Barb, Val's mom said, knocking on the door.

Walking outside was quiet and sad. Ryan said his goodbye's to Val's parents as Val said goodbye to Ryan's. The moment they didnt want to come finally came. They had to say goodbye to each other.

"Im going to miss you so much, Ry." Val said throwing her arms around her best friend.

"Im going to miss you too, Al." Ryan said wrapping his arms around her waist. "Ill write you everyday, I'll call you, and we'll make plans to meet up, okay?"

"Ryan, its time to go, son." Ryan's father Alex said from the car.

"Promise me, Ry." Val said crying.

"I promise. I'll never forget you." He said. "Bye, Al."

"Bye." Val whispered as she watched her friend walk away. Seeing him stop suddenly and turn around quickly she said, "What are -" She was cut off by Ryan kissing her.

"Bye." Ryan said after giving her one last quick peck on the lips.

Val stood there watching the car drive off. Not only was she heartbroken, she was shocked and confused.
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-Present-
"Nope! Now lets go!" Shane said grabbing Ryan's arm.

"You guys, I cant believe you're taking me to a strip club for my 23rd birthday. You know this isnt my thing." Ryan said, pulling his arm from Shane's grasp.

"We know. Thats why we thought it was perfect. You've never been to one." Pete said. "Now shut up and go in!"

After walking in and finally sitting down at a booth Ryan said, "I feel really guilty man."

"Why?" Pete said after whistling at a waitress that walked buy.

"Damn, look at that girl. She's fine!" Shane said as the first stripper came out.

Ryan looked and his eyes widened. "Holy cheese..." He breathed out.

"Yeah man. Sit back and enjoy the show."
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Thats all for now, ya'll.

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Sun Apr 03, 2005 12:49 am

HAHA strip club lol i wonder if val and ryan are gonna meet up there !!! hmmm more please soon!!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sun Apr 03, 2005 7:55 am

Val, I'm lovin' this. :clap: Ryan moved away ... that was sooooo sad. And he really made it sad by leaving Val with a kiss. I would've run after that car and held onto the bumper. :lol:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Apr 03, 2005 11:31 am

Thank ya'll :D

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Sun Apr 03, 2005 4:29 pm

awww them leaving was so sad :cry: and him kissing her goodbye :wub: so cute! i would have been like "aw heck no you can't leave after that just happened" :rofl: and Ryan at a strip club :rofl: oh man i so can't picture that but thats what makes it even better! :rofl: and his reaction muahahahaha i know why he said that :nana: :rofl: MORE PLEASE!

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Apr 03, 2005 6:18 pm

Heather :lol: I think I know why you did the :nana: face, and I think you're wrong. :nana:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Apr 03, 2005 10:36 pm

Chapter 3

-A year later, 1996-

"Ryan, its been a year since you left..." Val said trailing off.

"I know. I miss you, alot Al."

"Hmm, sure seems like it." She said sarcastically.

"Whats that supposed to mean?"

"We never talk anymore, Ry."

"What do you mean we never talk anymore? We call each other practically every other night."

"You mean I call you every other night. You're never around and you never return my calls. This is the first time in two weeks we've talked, Ryan."

"Am I not supposed to have a life now or something?"

"I thought we were best friends."

"We are! I just, I have new friends, Al."

"So that means I have to go two weeks without hearing from my best friend?"

"My life doesnt revolve around you!" Ryan sighed as he heard Val sniff on the other end of the line. "Val-"

"You know what, if im such a burden to you, why even continue being friends?"

"Val don't say that" Ryan quickly replied. "You're not a burden to me."

"Don't lie, Ryan. You know its true. Admit it, your life with your new friends would be so much easier if you didnt have to worry about me." Val said agrily as she pushed some tears away.

"Val," Ryan said as tears starting rising. "You know you're my best friend. I need you."

"You need me?" Val said, laughing. "You have a strange way of showing it."

"What more do you want me to say? I'm sorry!"

"Say goodbye so I'll be out of your life. I wont be a bother to you anymore."

"Val-"

"Goodbye Ryan." Val said hanging up the phone.
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-Present, 2006-

"Buddy, did you have fun?" Shane said as he plopped down on his friend's couch.

"Uh, yeah. It was... interesting." Ryan said throwing his coat on the chair and rubbing his hand through his hair.

"Ill get that!" Pete said quickly as he ran to the door.

"Ookay." Ryan said as he went and sat down next to Shane.

"We have another surprise for you. Put this back on." Shane said pulling the blindfold back out.

"No! Damnit." Ryan said as he moved away from Shane.

"Put it on before I make you blind. Permanetly."

Ryan groaned as he tied the blindfold.

"Now, me and Pete are gonna go. Have fun!" Shane said.

Ryan's eyes widened behind the blindfold as he felt a hand go up his thigh.

"My name is Rain, and im yours for this evening. Now," Rain said biting Ryan's ear. After hearing him suck in a breath, she continued. "I dont normally do house calls. But I heard it was your birthday, so I thought I'd do somethin' special for you tonight. Is there anything you want me to do for you?" She said rubbing her hands up his chest and sucking on his neck.

"I havent-"

"You havent done this before?" Rain said lifting her head up.

"No." Ryan said shaking his head.

"Oh. Well, we'll move a little slower then." She said, kissing him hard. Hearing him moan and put his hands on her waist, she moved her hips into his, making him moan even louder. Moving her hands up behind his head, she untied the blindfold. Moving back to see the man, she gasped. There's no way-.

"AL?!" Ryan said surprised as he pushed her off of him.



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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Sun Apr 03, 2005 10:46 pm

Noo they can't stop being friends! Ryan you need to make time for Val hun...shes your best friend you can't just leave her high n dry like that :nono:

:rofl: omg imagine that....you think its some stripper and it turns up to be your best friend whom you haven't seen in years...oh man that must be freakin weird for them....they have so much catching up to do and Ryan...i'm sure hes gonna want an explanation for that :nod: how they've changed from years ago :nod:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Mon Apr 04, 2005 7:27 am

Whoa! That was great! :yay: I had a sneaking suspicion it was gonna me Miss Val. What a little seductress. :whip: Meow. :lol:

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Mon Apr 04, 2005 6:06 pm

oo lala lol i love it val..its really good.... thats funny how val and ryan reunite like that!!

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Wed Apr 13, 2005 6:23 pm

*BUMP*

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Wed Apr 13, 2005 9:27 pm

:lol: No update yet, Heather. Soon, hopefully.

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Wed Apr 13, 2005 9:43 pm

And when am i getting one :lol:

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Thu Apr 14, 2005 8:13 am

I agree with Miss Booberdoo, another chapter is needed. :nod: :lol:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Thu Apr 14, 2005 11:48 am

Either today or over the weekend, hopefully :lol:

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Sun Apr 17, 2005 7:31 pm

yea val we need one soon!!!!!!!!!! lol i just come up with something random for ur last name heather lol

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sun Apr 17, 2005 7:49 pm

I'm sorry, I just havent been in a writing mood. Hopefully soon :lol

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Fri Apr 22, 2005 3:54 pm

aight now...i was gone for a week and still no update? :jawdrop: what's up with this?

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Fri Apr 22, 2005 7:59 pm

Its been a busy week, what can I say :lol:

voices tell me
i should carry on
but i am swimming
in an ocean all alone
baby, my baby
:wub: I love this song :D :o

Ill TRY to update this weekend

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-2000-

19 year old Ryan entered his old hometown, Dallas, Texas nervously. He hadnt been there in nearly 4 years. More importantly, he hadnt seen Val in nearly 4 years. That was the main reason he was back. To see her. He felt guilty about not coming back earlier. Driving up to the house he knew to well, he parked and sat there a few minutes. "Why are you so nervous?" He thought to himself. "Just get ouf of the car, walk up to the door and see your best friend." Taking a deep breath, he stepped out of the car and gently shut the door. "Even if she doesnt want to see you," he thought, "at least you tried." He took his time walking to the front door. Finally, he knocked.

"Who's there?" A voice yelled through the door.

"Uh, Ry-Ryan." Ryan stuttered.

"Ryan who?"

Ryan stayed silent for a minute.

"Who's there?!" The voice yelled getting closer.

"Ryan Cabrera." Ryan said as he waited for the door to open. When it did, he looked up surprised.

"I dont know any Ryan Cabrera's." The young, female said.

"You're not Valerie..." Ryan trailed off.

"Nope. I'm Ashlee."
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-2005-
"Oh my god. You have got to be kidding me." Ryan said as he stood up, walking to the other side of the room."

Valerie stood up quickly and ran a hand through her hair.

"You're a stripper?" Ryan said, surprised.

Val nodded as she put her hands on her waist.

"But you-" Ryan said shaking his head.

"People change, Ryan." Val snapped.

"This isnt you, though." Ryan said walking closer.

"This isnt me? You don't know me, Ryan. You think you do, but you dont."

"I know you better than you think. I know you're not some slut-"

"So now im a slut? You really have changed, too."

"Val. I didnt mean it that way. Look, can we just sit down and talk?"

"You know nothing about me. You wanna know about the past 9 years of my life? Fine! Well, when I was 17 my family moved to Pennsylvania after my so called best friend decided to "dump" me. Had just a GREAT life. Got screwed over by a few guys, met my new best friend, Heather. Thats about it. Oh yeah, I met my first serious boyfriend when I was 19. Might I add who abused me most of the time we were together. Got pregnant when I was 20, the father of my son left me accusing me of cheating, but of course not paying any child support. So, to answer the question I know you have, Im a stripper so I can pay the bills and feed my son."

Ryan was beyond shocked with everything she just told him. He didnt know what to say.

"Well? Nothing to say?"

"I-I cant... im so sorry!"

"Hmm, yeah. Me too. Now excuse me. I have a son to go take care of." Val said, grabbing her jacket and leaving.

"You screwed up so bad, Cabrera." Ryan said throwing himself on the couch.


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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Sun May 01, 2005 12:23 am

I feel so bad for her..i just wanna give her a hug n make it all better...Ryan really needs to think before he goes runnin his mouth...he has no idea what all shes been thru so how could he run his mouth like that? See that annoys me about people if ya can't tell :rofl: hopefully he learned a good lesson today...but ruh roh...he met Ashlee and we all know what happens from there :no: MORE PLEASE!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sun May 01, 2005 8:55 am

Oh no, he met Ashlee. Yup, we sure do know what happens there. Val has gone through a lot and she's doing whatever it takes to support her son. :clap:

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Sun May 01, 2005 8:09 pm

ryan u jerk! you should have called her and seen her over the years!!! hey whatever u can do to support your children isent wrong even if your a stripper!

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Fri May 06, 2005 6:45 pm

oh Valllllll i want an uppppddddaaattteee :rofl:

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Fri May 06, 2005 8:14 pm

:rofl: HOPEFULLY soon.

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Sat May 28, 2005 11:04 pm

UPDATE 5-28

-Flashback-

Ryan sat down on his hotel bed, sad, tired and confused. Tired from all the driving and confusion, sad that he didnt find Val, and confused because he thought he researched this trip well. He asked old neighbors and they said she was still there. Sighing, he layed down, thinking. He wanted to find Val to tell her he went for his dream. To become a musician. And he succeded. Val always told him to follow his dream. Rolling over on to his stomache, he layed his head on his arms and closed his eyes.

She walked into my life and my world was still
She reached into my soul and all my doubts were killed
That's when my loneliness subsided
She gave me the will,
I could fight it
But nothing can erase the one thing that remains the same


She always told him that no matter what she would love him and be there for him. Would she still be there after what he did? After he left her and never called, ignored her?

So just tell me what i should do
I left everything for you
And i can't hardly breathe
'Cause i know i lost you from my world
From my...


Remembering a conversation he and Val had, he had an idea for a song. He would tease her about some of the objects she would have. And she would always say "You can take it all away, and I'll be the same."

Ryan got up, and went to get his guitar and his song notebook. He sat down at the table that was in his hotel room and started playing a few cords on his guitar. After a few minutes, he had some of his song down.

So much beauty in life
Shining on the outside
Empty on the inside
I get lost sometimes
Blinded by the flashing lights
Distractions always in my eyes

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-Present-

Val ran down the stairs of Ryan's apartment complex. She was sad and mad. Sad that after all these years that this was the way they had to see each other. Doing the one thing she said she would never do. No matter what. Mad that he sad all that to her even though it was true. Angrily, she brushed away the tears that fell out of her eyes.

"Hey, beautiful!"

Val stopped running and turned around to see who yelled that her. She sighed in disgust as she saw the man that seemed to be in his early 20's with his friends standing a few feet away from her. "Yeah?" She groaned out, even though she already knew the remark that would be made.

"Wanna come in?" The older of the group asked walking closer to her.

"No." Val said annoyed. "If I were you, I wouldnt come any closer."

"Aww, whats the problem, sweetie? Uncomfortable? Well, thats weird considering your occupation and what you're wearing." The man said standing in front of her. He looked her up and down, making Val pull her coat over her more. "Cold? Why dont you come in to my friends room. We can make it warm in there." The man said trying to put his arm around her.

"Back off." Val said pushing his arms away from her.

"Zack, man, leave her alone, alright? Dont start any trouble." The younger of the group said.

The man, who's name appeared to be Zack, ignored the young man. "What do you say?"

"I said back off." Val said trying to back away from the man. The man grabbed her and she pushed him off, getting upset. "I told you to leave me the hell alone!" Seeing the man trying to grab her again, she punched him in the stomache, causing his friends to gasp and laugh. She turned around and walked down the hallway trying not to cry. She only managed to hold them in till she got in her car and closed the door. Letting out a sob she turned on her car. She always wanted to see him again, but now that she did, she wasnt so sure she wanted too.




Okay so thats it for now. :) Feedback

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Sat May 28, 2005 11:10 pm

ahhh i loved it as usual...that man trying to get her :no: I was scared for a minute that he was gonna really hurt her...ryan needed to save the day :lol: it could have been his chance to sorta try n make it up to her :nod: I hope that they work things out tho cause they're soo cute together! MORE PLEASE!

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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Sun May 29, 2005 3:11 pm

Aww that was cute!!! Yea Ryan should have come to Vals rescue! that would have been great!! and that dude is mean!!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Sun May 29, 2005 8:14 pm

Geez, talk about a creepy dude. I'm glad she got away. Boo Ryan ... he needs to make up with Val and get their friendship back on track.

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Postby xoinnocentjrtgrl » Thu Jun 02, 2005 8:52 pm

UPDATE 6-2-PROBABLY a short one :)
(A/N: No flashback this time. I cant think of another one right now :lol: Oh and this chapter is all about Ryan for the most part :))

-Present-

Ryan sighed as he slipped off his shoes by his bed. It had been a long night and day and all he wanted to do was get some sleep. He just hoped he'd be able to fall asleep. All he could think about was how he just ran into Val. He went into the bathroom to wash his face and brush his teeth. He knew he should have taken a shower to get all the jell out of his hair, but he was to tired. On the way back to bed he slipped off his jeans and his shirt. He sighed happily when he layed down on his side on his bed. It took him a good 20 minutes to even start drifting asleep. He did something he hadnt done in a while. When he and Val were younger and they would have sleepovers and Ryan couldnt sleep, she'd tell him to picture him eating cookies and count each cookie he'd eat. He just laughed and told her it would never work. Sure enough, 10 minutes later he fell asleep. That would always help him fall asleep.

-ring, ring-

Ryan groaned and rolled over on his other side to see the clock. 3 A.M. He layed down on his back, hoping whoever was calling him would realize what time it was and would call back later. "Finally." He said after the phone stopped ringing. After getting comfortable again, he closed his eyes.

-ring,ring-

"You have got to be f'cking kidding me!" He yelled out as he reached for his cell phone.
"Hello?" He said, annoyed.

"Hey, baby." A female voice said.

Ryan relaxed at hearing the feminine voice he knew so well. "Hey, Ash."

"Happy late birthday! I'm so sorry I couldnt call you yesturday! Daddy had me workin' pretty hard."

Ryan groaned in his head. "Thanks, Ash. I know how he is."

"So, Bob, how was your birthday? Did you do anything exciting?"

Ryan smiled and laughed at one of the many nicknames Ashlee would call him. "Great, Geraldina. The 'boys' took me to a... strip club."

"Did you have fun?" Ashlee asked.

Ryan was silent for a minute. "It was okay. Not my type of thing." He decided to hold off on telling her about Val.

"So, I cant wait till you come out and visit me!" Ashlee said, excitedly.

Ryan bit his lip. "Ash," he started out.

Ashlee groaned. "Ryan! You promised!"

"Baby, I know! And I want too! You know that."

Ashlee was silent for a while.

"Ashlee... you have to understand! I have to tour. You're doing the same thing."

"Ryan, we haven't seen each other in over a month. And you havent even been calling me. I cant be in a relationship with someone who doesnt even try."

"I dont..." Ryan sighed and ran his hand over his face. This wasnt the first time they have had this conversation. "What do you want me to do?" He asked quietly.

"I want to be able to see my boyfriend." She responded quietly.

"So why dont you come out by me for a few days?"

"I have to tour."

"So why am I getting yelled at and feeling guilty about the fact I have to tour and I cant come out and see you when you are going through the same thing?" Ryan groaned. "Look, Im tired and its like, 3 A.M. I'll call you back later. okay?"

"Ryan, I think we should see other people." Ashlee said quietly.

"What? Ashlee, come on!"

"Bye."

"But-" Ryan was cut off by the dial tone. Turning his cell phone off, he sighed. Closing his eyes, he prayed the tears he wanted to cry would just go away. He sniffed and rolled onto his side and threw his phone. He cried himself to sleep.



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Postby dirtypop4nsync » Thu Jun 02, 2005 8:58 pm

AWWW poor Ryan!! I hope him and Val get together!!! lol


more please!!

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Postby whatchagot4meMRJT » Fri Jun 03, 2005 8:11 am

*chants* Dump Ash, dump Ash. Ryan and Val! Ryan and Val! :lol:

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Postby Angelpopstar7 » Fri Jun 03, 2005 9:44 am

Ahh poor Ryan...now Val just needs to find her way back to his room and talk to him :nod: more please!

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